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by VenomSymbiote
Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 7/10

I liked the story a lot. I felt the epilouge was slightly anti-climatic, almost cliche (after all, doesn't everyone propose at the end?), but just the same, I liked the story a lot, and the fact that you finished it earns you a big round of applause. CONGRATS!
by VenomSymbiote
Tue Jun 19, 2012 5:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/17

As before, I read chapters thirteen and fourteen at once. Usually, I have something to say that I had a problem with, coupled with praise, but this time, I HATED THE CHAPTERS SO MUCH THAT- nah, just kidding! In all seriousness, I actually really liked these chapters. Everything was just so... perfec...
by VenomSymbiote
Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/10

Regarding chapter twelve, its been mentioned before, but the Star Wars reference actually works pretty well here. I can't see Misha "loving" Lynda just yet. I still think she has some more development left in herself before she's ready for that. Props to you for recognizing that too, hence the "I kn...
by VenomSymbiote
Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/3

Your writing is getting better; I enjoyed chapters 9 and 10 quite a lot! Lynda shrugged, “not my fault where I live the drinking age is nineteen.” “It’s twenty in Japan,” Misha said, “and I’m only nineteen.” “You didn’t care when you were eighteen; why care now?” Lynda asked. She had a point, curios...
by VenomSymbiote
Sun May 27, 2012 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha 5/24 Update

I find it a bit funny that in a fanfic to a VN that contains graphic sex scenes, people find it offensive if someone who is about 20 years old is drinking a beer... Especially since here in Germany the legal drinking age for beer is 16 years. I'm not sure about the state of New York. Is the legal a...
by VenomSymbiote
Sat May 26, 2012 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha 5/24 Update

Having been a bit behind, I read both Chapter 6 and Chapter 7. Chapter 7 was alright, but I have some things to say about Ch. 6. Oh, chapter 6... First of all, making Misha drink... Oh my god, that bothered me so much. Being a college student myself, I can testify that yes, college kids drink, even ...
by VenomSymbiote
Thu May 17, 2012 2:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 5/13

This was a much better chapter than usual; I definitely enjoyed it much more. I do have one nitpick- is it really necessary for Misha to add "chan" to every single person she meets? I know within KS she attached it to Hisao almost immediately, but I feel as though that term should be earned from he...
by VenomSymbiote
Tue May 15, 2012 11:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 48060

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 5/13

This was a much better chapter than usual; I definitely enjoyed it much more. I do have one nitpick- is it really necessary for Misha to add "chan" to every single person she meets? I know within KS she attached it to Hisao almost immediately, but I feel as though that term should be earned from her...
by VenomSymbiote
Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:21 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Piano Covers of Katawa Shoujo's Music
Replies: 20
Views: 13270

Re: Piano Covers of Katawa Shoujo's Music

I am all about piano covers! And KS's music is perfect for this kind of thing. I applaud you for taking it upon yourself to make some covers- we need more interpretations of the music. I'll take a listen to all of your current covers, and I'll post my thoughts on 'em later :) EDIT: So I got around t...
by VenomSymbiote
Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:02 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Chiptunes
Replies: 7
Views: 1839

Re: Katawa Shoujo Chiptunes

I'm very impressed! Nice job! :D

I would love to see an 8-bit version of "The Student Council," since it's my favorite BGM track. Think there's anyway that can happen?
by VenomSymbiote
Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:33 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: 100% Completion Step-by-Step
Replies: 12
Views: 45439

Re: 100% Completion Step-by-Step

Wow, geekahedron, I can't believe you went through all this all over again! Nice work! It kinda negates your flowcharts, but is still mighty convienent!
by VenomSymbiote
Tue Feb 14, 2012 12:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 91373

Re: Epilogue: Drabbles From the Reception

A drabble is a story in one hundred words. “Aren’t you going to go for it?” Miki asks. “Nah,” Misha says, watching the girls gather under the balcony as Shizune turns her back to them, hefting her bouquet. “I’m honestly not interested. Let them fight over it.” There is an excited squeal as the bouq...
by VenomSymbiote
Tue Feb 14, 2012 12:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Listen to your Heart. Hisao x Misha. Contains sex.
Replies: 25
Views: 11265

Re: Listen to your Heart. Hisao x Misha. Contains sex.

Snorri, I really like this story. I think it has a lot of potential. Personally though, I wasn't a big fan of the whole whiskey bottle subplot. I know you intended it to be an icebreaker, but I felt that using Hisao's medication as the segway would have worked perfectly fine ("Is this candy, Hisao?"...
by VenomSymbiote
Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 91373

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

Oh, of course she did. She probably pushed everyone out of the way (with her voice) to get it!

You know, on second thought, someone needs to draw this. That would be so funny.