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by revenant
Thu Feb 02, 2012 9:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: First Try
Replies: 9
Views: 4196

Re: First Try

Yeah, I guess. The story is absurd from the beginning. :D At first I was typing just for fun, but then it feels like I have to finish this, which somehow puts pressure. :(

I'm referring to what Kenji said in-game. But still, thanks for the additional info. :D
by revenant
Thu Feb 02, 2012 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: First Try
Replies: 9
Views: 4196

Re: First Try

Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll try to improve on your suggestions. Since I find that other fanfics tell their readers if their writings have some sort of sex scene included, it may be an unwritten rule here, so I would like to give you guys a heads up because the next chapter features Hisao’s fi...
by revenant
Sun Jan 29, 2012 1:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: First Try
Replies: 9
Views: 4196

Re: First Try

Yeah, I guess I should have registered before posting that. Sorry :P Thanks for the feedback guys, I really appreciate it. I'm actually having trouble trying to include the other girls in the story. Now that I think about it, wtf have I done? :o If you can give me ideas on how to drag Emi and Rin in...