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by Eprlide
Mon Jul 29, 2013 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 709740

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 7/28]

Hmm, let's see... Jigoro is a reincarnation of Saxton Hale from TF2 The first time I saw him in the VN, that's exactly what I thought. Big, yelling all the time and a constant desire to punch someone in the face. I just wish he was more like Mr. Torgue from Borderlands 2. On the other hand, great i...
by Eprlide
Sat May 04, 2013 2:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 416961

Re: Testing the Waters

Another good chapter for this story. I can say I've been here since the first post and I haven't been disappointed yet. However, one minor thing bugs me. I know I used Iwanako's last name from your story to use it within my own (which I should probably get back to), but now I can't help but think yo...
by Eprlide
Fri Feb 15, 2013 10:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)

I'm afraid I must cut out a chapter from the story. I originally had planned to have a first date scenario for Hisao/Kenji and Iwanako once he was released from the hospital, but with college and other things going on I couldn't think of what to put into it. Therefore, the last chapter will be what ...
by Eprlide
Tue Feb 05, 2013 2:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)

Mirror mirror, in the eyes that I see, Tell me, which one is the real me? Although I think this sight tells no lies, It could be an effect before someone dies. I pray for an end to this complicated story. For I see Hisao, and in him, I see... me. Kii Magic "...Kenji Setou." That name. Jus...
by Eprlide
Mon Feb 04, 2013 2:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/3)

It's this again. Falling. Dying. An unavoidable fatality every time I plunge myself into this dream. I still remember that this could be the only link to my past memories, and now, more then ever, will I need them to come back. Why Yamaku? Why Arrhythmia? Why Iwanako? Why me? There's only one thing...
by Eprlide
Mon Jan 21, 2013 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/20)

I love all these theories that you guys keep making.

But you're all wrong.

I think by next weekend I'll have the next two chapters done, but don't count on it.
by Eprlide
Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/20)

Why can't I focus at all? Everything is so blurry that my eyes just register brightness and color. From that, it's night time and something is going on. I do seem to be avoiding it, though, until that certain death. What kind of thing happened to make someone lose a life? I guess I'm hurrying to fi...
by Eprlide
Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/13)

(I give up. Things will update when they update. I'll just focus on not killing this one again.) Someone's dead. I finally have that instinct, that something has gone so terribly wrong that a life has been spent. I don't think rushing to the scene will change anything, but I feel its more of a sense...
by Eprlide
Sat Jan 05, 2013 10:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/2)

I'm glad everyone is enjoying this so far! With 5 chapters already in place, I'm planning on another 5 and one extra that will wrap things up nicely. I plan on getting 6 and 7 out next week, so stay tuned!
by Eprlide
Fri Jan 04, 2013 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/2)

I like the "bourne identy\total recall" spin you are putting on this. I see the humor and the sorrow in it. good read so far. This story was made way before both of those, or at least before I saw them in the movies. When I get to a certain point, I'll state who/what is responsible for th...
by Eprlide
Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/2)

Good to see you haven't given up on this, but... that was the single most unromantic love confession I've ever read. "My life was getting boring anyway, so sure, why not go out with you?" ^^° Also, please keep in mind the difference between "then" and "than": "Goo...
by Eprlide
Wed Jan 02, 2013 8:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/2)

(I don't think apologizing will work this time. Just have another installment and enjoy!) /r I don't remember what happened yesterday. I guess it's a normal side-effect of the medication that's keeping me alive, but I just can't help but wonder if I'm being pulled into something much bigger than thi...
by Eprlide
Mon Sep 03, 2012 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 8/7)

andros414 wrote:Woot, update!

Btw, it's "persevere," not "perserve." :wink:
Derp. Fixed.
by Eprlide
Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Rise Again (Revised 10-4-12) WIP
Replies: 28
Views: 10232

Re: Falling up

I think this works out best as a one shot. Other then that, this is well-written and the premise is good.
by Eprlide
Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 16512

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 8/7)

(My god I am bad at keeping up with these things. College has been going well and I got back into something long lost to time... or so it seemed. Anyway, here is the LONG overdue part 4!) It's bright for once. I can see, but it's still quite blurry. I can tell I'm in the city this time, from all the...