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by lblf
Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 41883

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

well crapshizzles, I take a month plus hiatus from this forum, I come back just to take a peek and there's all this good stories popping up. Looks like I'll be doing more reading again now...
by lblf
Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Really Depressing Rin Fic
Replies: 22
Views: 6335

Re: A Really Depressing Rin Fic

I have to agree with everyone here. I can't imagine how hard it must be to write Rin's dialogue let alone in first person. But you definitely nailed it, it was very Rin.
by lblf
Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 16233

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

Well played my good man, well played.
by lblf
Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 86
Views: 13961

Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci

Too good doomish, I was hooked with 'With Apologies...' now I'm hooked with this. Loving the sci-fi flavour to the story.
by lblf
Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ten Summers Later
Replies: 30
Views: 8526

Re: Ten Summers Later

The BGM selections were a great touch. Added another dimension that other fanfics didn't have. Quality writing as well, imagining the scenes and character emotions you were trying to convey came very naturally. I do agree with scott about the dialogue style, but I understand that you were going for ...
by lblf
Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69490

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Lothbrok wrote:If it makes you smile then I give you over 9000 I love this fanfic in all it's awesomeness.
Indeed. Robnonymous, Brogurt and Themocaw's works are the only reason I come back to these forums really.
by lblf
Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69490

Re: Reunion

CNB wrote:
Robnonymous wrote:“What…” he still seems confused, “you mean within hugging distance?”
She likes 'em dense.
lol, I'm liking Sho's character more just for the way he responded right there. I don't think he's dense at all, just lying to himself.
by lblf
Wed Feb 15, 2012 12:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Of Chocolate and Cupids
Replies: 22
Views: 4803

Re: Of Chocolate and Cupids

win, pure win. All of it! Again I tip my hat to you themocaw, you have no idea how much I laughed at Hanako's part. Rin's has got to be the sweetest bit of all the sweet bits. And I never knew that's how Valentine's Day worked in Japan, that clears up some things...it should really work that way eve...
by lblf
Mon Feb 13, 2012 3:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 148
Views: 35127

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

I'm horrible at figuring things out as well, but isn't the voice Kenji? All signs point to that if you ask me. Kenji not being with them from the beginning, despite all of them going on the bus to the facility together. The voice saying "I HATE YOU AND I HATE THE WOMEN WITH YOU" The flashback just a...
by lblf
Tue Jan 31, 2012 4:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Drabbles, Post-Hisao
Replies: 18
Views: 4504

Re: Five Drabbles, Post-Hisao

as always, your work makes for a great read, themocaw
by lblf
Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou
Replies: 18
Views: 8047

Re: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

Brilliantly done. That is all.
by lblf
Thu Jan 26, 2012 10:07 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Once Sentence Challenge!
Replies: 77
Views: 6213

Re: The Once Sentence Challenge!

Read em' and weep
by lblf
Thu Jan 26, 2012 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 91959

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

scott1and wrote:I'm beginning to like this, and it's good to see sex isn't being shoved needlessly into each chapter.
Indeed, very much more tasteful.
by lblf
Wed Jan 25, 2012 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 91959

Re: At the Train Station [Porn]

I actually avoided reading this cause of the "porn" in the title. But now that I have I'm glad I did. It's really easy to read, and the writing is definitely a step (or two) above most fanfic I've read here so far. Keep it up!
by lblf
Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: herpaderp writings (Children: A Lilly - Hisao - Akira fic)
Replies: 9
Views: 2287

Re: herpaderp my writings (currently a depressing Lilly fanf

Thumbs up buddy, keep it coming!