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by CNB
Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 59935

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

themocaw wrote:I was actually thinking more like "Darling," and "Ojou-sama," but didn't want to use the Japanese-ism
He should call her "princess."
by CNB
Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 59935

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

stanman237 wrote:Darling was a bit annoying after every single line, but with milady its gonna be even worse.
I was annoyed by "darling" until I did what someone earlier in the thread suggested, and imagined her saying it in heavily-accented English instead of Japanese.
by CNB
Fri Mar 23, 2012 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Checkmate (A Reconciliation Epilogue)
Replies: 25
Views: 9530

Re: Checkmate (A Reconciliation Epilogue)

Well, I thought it was very cute. It was a good idea to make it explicitly separate from Reconciliation. Connecting them more strongly would have taken the focus off the Hanako/Lilly relationship that was the central point of the main story. If I were writing it, I'd have ended with a different punc...
by CNB
Fri Mar 16, 2012 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 59935

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

Wow, Saki, kind of a dick move there. Followed by a pretty craven dodge when your BF confronted you about it.
by CNB
Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 59935

Re: Don't Panic! / Dream Girl

themocaw wrote:And why do you think it is that high fashion always revolves around making men look as unmasculine as possible! I can't believe what I'm hearing, man.
I originally read that as "I can't believe what I'm wearing." Which I found humorous.
by CNB
Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 59935

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

Rika seemed a little Rin-clone there at the beginning, but apart from that it's pretty enjoyable so far.
by CNB
Sun Mar 11, 2012 11:52 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Some stuff I drew
Replies: 40
Views: 9224

Re: Some stuff I drew

Lilly senses a disturbance in the Force. http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6919/ksjedi.jpg Never could get the rest of the Alice in Wonderland stuff looking presentable. Shizune was the Queen of Hearts (Mischa was either the Knave of Hearts or the White Rabbit), Emi was the Red Queen, Lilly was the...
by CNB
Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 12329

Re: New Experiences

YOTC wrote:I love the story, but I seem to remember reading SOMEWHERE that Naomi and Natsume were a couple.
And I read somewhere that Hanako and Hisao were a couple. :roll:
by CNB
Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Amendments (Complete)
Replies: 37
Views: 6113

Re: Amendments (Spoilers abound)

Otakumon wrote:You all are going to make the Hanako fanbois cry if these lesbian Hanako stories keep popping up. :mrgreen:
Why wouldn't Hanako fanboys ship her in a same-sex pairing?
by CNB
Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 12329

Re: New Experiences

Could you be a bit more specific. Did it seem somewhat rushed, or was it just a mess in general? I went back and reread the scenes, and it's just those couple of lines, that describe the scars without actually describing them at all, that bother me. Something about the way they're written seems ter...
by CNB
Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69523

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Robnonymous wrote:I actually DO have an idea for a Hanako neutral story follow-up
It should involve her becoming involved with international espionage and intrigue as a chess grandmaster.
by CNB
Wed Feb 29, 2012 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69523

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Robnonymous wrote:Yuri? I don't recall putting any Yuri in here... :?:
For some people, the goggles never come off.
by CNB
Tue Feb 28, 2012 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 12329

Re: New Experiences

(remember, it didn't even occur to Naomi that they might be the source of Hanako's ire earlier! If that's the case, why would she suddenly drag them front and center now?) I felt like the issue had already been dragged front and center by the way those scenes were structured. The disconnect came wh...
by CNB
Tue Feb 28, 2012 5:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 12329

Re: New Experiences

The thing that bugs me about this is that both characters appear to think that Naomi looking at Hanako's scars is a big deal, but when it happens, it's almost completely glossed over. The scars are never actually described, there's just a sentence or two of, "Such-and-such ones look more severe than...
by CNB
Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Random Drabbles
Replies: 31
Views: 4495

Re: Random Drabbles

Now do one parodying Casablanca.