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Update! I will be rewriting this fanfic sooner or later due to the fact that there were some problems with my current story concept and my old story concept.

Oh wow, I actually got a response in this thread. And I actually think it was devoid of any life at this point. And FYI I'm done with the exams when I wrote this chapter. I'm just slacking off again. Sorry, I'll try to get cracking on Chapter 3.

Here we gooooo! -------------------- Chapter 2: 'Twas Just a Dream The silence stops, I can hear the faint voice of a girl. "Yamato..." The voice sounds real familiar. Before I knew it, the voice grew louder... "Yamato!.." and louder... "Yamato!!.." and louder... "...

@Otakumon Emi never got to know how Hisao really was. Err, I guess.

@Carnival I was trying to finish the story as fast as possible since it was just a short fic. Maybe in the future, I'll try make my short-fics 2 chapters short so it doesn't feel rushed. Thanks for the feedback though.

And there goes the magic of Mirage. Haha, I knew someone was gonna comment on the pace of the story. I wasn't really thinking straight while making this up. I'll try to make a more polished version of this if I have the time to do so. Well whatever, thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it. :D Edit: P...

Hey hey everyone! Here's a short story that my friend and I wrote. I hope you guys enjoy it, It's only a short fanfic and I will not make it into a Chapter segmented style of fanfic like my other one, Love With A Hint of Luck. And yes, I will be continuing LoveLuck's Chapter 2 next week, after our e...

Update 2! School's almost over! Just 2 weeks left! Also, I will be making a short fan-fic in a few days to make up for the long wait. The short fan-fic will NOT be canon to LoveLuck. (The nickname I gave to the main-fic) So I hope you guys get excited (in a non erotic way) for Chapter 2 as well as m...

Here's an update. School's been keeping me busy lately, being the school photojournalist I am, as well as the horrendous amount of events lined up, I haven't had time to get cracking at Chapter 2. But those who are wanting to see more of this fanfic (if there are any, lol.), do not fret, I haven't g...

I think you've got the wrong thread here friend, this is the Fan Fiction subforum and I believe you want the Public Discussion subforum.

Oh and Second Life makes me cringe, I don't know why.

I think you hit "paste" two times there... All in all a good start for your story. Multiple issues with grammar, pronouns and tenses. Too many to address them all here, but if you like, I could go over the text and PM you a corrected version. Also, if you intend to continue this, feel fre...

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 A few notes, this is my first ever fanfic so I don't really know how you guys would find it. I plan on making this a multi-chapter story. Please excuse my grammar and spelling since, English is only my second language. Honest feedback and suggestions would be very much appreciate...

I disagree, not because of the personality, but more because of the hair. WE. NEED. MORE. DRILLS.

after experiencing this once, i wont try any fanfics either. :? You're missing out. There are some great ones right here on the forums. Hmm, I guess I'll give it a try, is there anyone of these fanfics you like in particular? I'd appreciate it being that this would be the first fanfic I'd ever read...

While I do not find myself being largely impressed by these peoples efforts at getting their emotions across I cannot say that I do not understand them, nor can I critisise their judgement. Katawa Shoujo leaves you fulfilled and attached in a way that few other things could, some of weaker will or ...

well, there would have fanfics, fan-arts as long as the community is there. Although that maybe true, some people (like me) just don't feel the same feeling from fanfics/fan art to the real thing. (Wishing for a Natsume route and another male protagonist, my imagination is just full of stuff after ...