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by CosmicGhost
Sun Apr 01, 2012 5:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Re: Love With a Hint of Luck (Chapter 2 Released 3/14/12)

Update! I will be rewriting this fanfic sooner or later due to the fact that there were some problems with my current story concept and my old story concept.
by CosmicGhost
Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Re: Love With a Hint of Luck (Chapter 2 Released 3/14/12)

Oh wow, I actually got a response in this thread. And I actually think it was devoid of any life at this point. And FYI I'm done with the exams when I wrote this chapter. I'm just slacking off again. Sorry, I'll try to get cracking on Chapter 3. :D
by CosmicGhost
Wed Mar 14, 2012 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Re: Love With A Hint Of Luck

Here we gooooo! -------------------- Chapter 2: 'Twas Just a Dream The silence stops, I can hear the faint voice of a girl. "Yamato..." The voice sounds real familiar. Before I knew it, the voice grew louder... "Yamato!.." and louder... "Yamato!!.." and louder... "Wake up! Yamato!" Now I remember th...
by CosmicGhost
Tue Mar 06, 2012 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)
Replies: 5
Views: 1648

Re: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)

@Otakumon Emi never got to know how Hisao really was. Err, I guess.

@Carnival I was trying to finish the story as fast as possible since it was just a short fic. Maybe in the future, I'll try make my short-fics 2 chapters short so it doesn't feel rushed. Thanks for the feedback though.
by CosmicGhost
Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)
Replies: 5
Views: 1648

Re: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)

And there goes the magic of Mirage. Haha, I knew someone was gonna comment on the pace of the story. I wasn't really thinking straight while making this up. I'll try to make a more polished version of this if I have the time to do so. Well whatever, thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it. :D Edit: P...
by CosmicGhost
Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)
Replies: 5
Views: 1648

Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)

Hey hey everyone! Here's a short story that my friend and I wrote. I hope you guys enjoy it, It's only a short fanfic and I will not make it into a Chapter segmented style of fanfic like my other one, Love With A Hint of Luck. And yes, I will be continuing LoveLuck's Chapter 2 next week, after our e...
by CosmicGhost
Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Re: Love With A Hint Of Luck

Update 2! School's almost over! Just 2 weeks left! Also, I will be making a short fan-fic in a few days to make up for the long wait. The short fan-fic will NOT be canon to LoveLuck. (The nickname I gave to the main-fic) So I hope you guys get excited (in a non erotic way) for Chapter 2 as well as m...
by CosmicGhost
Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Re: Love With A Hint Of Luck

Here's an update. School's been keeping me busy lately, being the school photojournalist I am, as well as the horrendous amount of events lined up, I haven't had time to get cracking at Chapter 2. But those who are wanting to see more of this fanfic (if there are any, lol.), do not fret, I haven't g...
by CosmicGhost
Sat Jan 14, 2012 6:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Take your Fan-Characters one step further (KS RP)
Replies: 8
Views: 1831

Re: There exists a chance of a KS Role Play

I think you've got the wrong thread here friend, this is the Fan Fiction subforum and I believe you want the Public Discussion subforum.

Oh and Second Life makes me cringe, I don't know why.
by CosmicGhost
Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Re: Love With A Hint Of Luck

I think you hit "paste" two times there... All in all a good start for your story. Multiple issues with grammar, pronouns and tenses. Too many to address them all here, but if you like, I could go over the text and PM you a corrected version. Also, if you intend to continue this, feel free to send ...
by CosmicGhost
Fri Jan 13, 2012 7:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]
Replies: 13
Views: 3965

Love With a Hint of Luck [Will Be Rewritten]

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 A few notes, this is my first ever fanfic so I don't really know how you guys would find it. I plan on making this a multi-chapter story. Please excuse my grammar and spelling since, English is only my second language. Honest feedback and suggestions would be very much appreciate...
by CosmicGhost
Sun Jan 08, 2012 6:24 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS lookalikes
Replies: 762
Views: 152250

Re: You may disagree with me, but....

I disagree, not because of the personality, but more because of the hair. WE. NEED. MORE. DRILLS.
by CosmicGhost
Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 164128

Re: that feel when you cry after Hanako's route

after experiencing this once, i wont try any fanfics either. :? You're missing out. There are some great ones right here on the forums. Hmm, I guess I'll give it a try, is there anyone of these fanfics you like in particular? I'd appreciate it being that this would be the first fanfic I'd ever read...
by CosmicGhost
Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:34 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emotional Impact
Replies: 32
Views: 3751

Re: Emotional Impact

While I do not find myself being largely impressed by these peoples efforts at getting their emotions across I cannot say that I do not understand them, nor can I critisise their judgement. Katawa Shoujo leaves you fulfilled and attached in a way that few other things could, some of weaker will or ...
by CosmicGhost
Sun Jan 08, 2012 9:02 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 164128

Re: that feel when you cry after Hanako's route

well, there would have fanfics, fan-arts as long as the community is there. Although that maybe true, some people (like me) just don't feel the same feeling from fanfics/fan art to the real thing. (Wishing for a Natsume route and another male protagonist, my imagination is just full of stuff after ...