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I see no love for Misha. No Bush Cheney fans

Act 2: Challenge Accepted
Act 3: Like a Sir
Act 4: Harem

great so far. only misstep was using "his house" instaed of " his dorm"

I don't think Lilly's blindness fit into that scene, she knows that she could identify someone she knows and would have no reason to even mention it. I believe you should've held it off to when she walks in and Hisao see a blind girl is here to identify him.

Emi's father died rushing to the hospital after she was in a separate accident.

Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.

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worse yet Hanako X Kenji.

feel free to take your time. We can wait as long as it takes for you to finish the next part to your satisfaction.

Synthus wrote:I like the premise. Reminds me a little of No Need For Bushido.

I have this mental image of Mr Ibarazaki's shade looking on in approval in the good end of Emi's scene.

worse yet the equipment shed scene

i've been there it was kinda boring. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v214/waynoinsano/100_0045.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v214/waynoinsano/100_0051-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v214/waynoinsano/100_0052-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v214/waynoinsano/100_0053-1.jpg

I tired writting a fanfic failed hard.

The Vn edelweiss Haruka and Mizuki routes nuff said go play it

I edited it a little and went a little further with the story this time. I don't really have anyone to proof read for me but I looked over it a couple of times before I posted it. I took your advice and ditched the color coding, I thought it would be a good idea to color it to my it more like the VN...

I hope Shizune "talks" Hisao into going to the meeting.That would be good drama.

that is all