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by Sartarus
Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Re: Love Is Blind

Ok, thank you for all the comments but I have one thing I want to address. Remember in the dream sequence of chapter 2, how Lilly said she could see the inner workings of people? Of course you do. Anyways, by saying this I was hoping that most readers COULD catch onto the fact that this might play a...
by Sartarus
Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Re: Love Is Blind

Well, Chapter 3, hope you all like it, had to wrap it up fairly quickly today so, sorry if around the end it might seem a little rushed. Enjoy chapter 3 of Love is Blind: The Meeting. ***************************** Chapter 3: The Meeting The first half of the day passed by at a snail’s pace. When the...
by Sartarus
Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Re: Love Is Blind

- You skipped several days between chapter one and two. Why? The first days are the ones that would make the biggest impression on him. I see no obvious reason for the skip, except for the fact that he has been dreaming about Lilly several times. Just one dream (the dream scene was very nice by the...
by Sartarus
Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Re: Love Is Blind

- Severe epilepsy can probably be a very limiting affliction, but "a seizure a couple of months ago" would probably be nothing you'd be sent to a school like Yamaku for. I keep forgetting to put his entire backstory into the notes before and after the stories, ill get right to explaining ...
by Sartarus
Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Re: Love Is Blind

well, thank you very much, i hope i have my first fan on my hands here. I'll try to update as soon as possible but due to difficulties at home, I may not post very often. but i think i have a solution, in my free time at school ill try to write and update....maybe.....depends if i remember anyways t...
by Sartarus
Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Re: Love Is Blind

Well, here we go, Chapter 2 Also, something i want to get out there, every time i go from a dream sequence to reality, i'm going to change the point of view. Also, if you like this story, please comment Here you go, Chapter 2 of Love Is Blind. ********************************************* Chapter 2:...
by Sartarus
Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love Is Blind
Replies: 20
Views: 9679

Love Is Blind

Hey everybody! New writer here, heh, kinda nervous. please, no hateful spam. I also had my buddy Extremist_Line proofread it for me so hopefully there wont be too many grammar/spelling mistakes Anyways, yeah so....enjoy BUT FIRST!!!! my OC's bio: Name: Seth Blaine Emoish hair style, covering left ey...