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by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 20, 2019 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids
Replies: 46
Views: 3185

Re: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids

Too bad I have to work this saturday :cry:
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 19, 2019 7:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/20/2019)
Replies: 16
Views: 533

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/18/2019)

Good chapter, but his name is still Maeda...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 17, 2019 12:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic) UPDATED 21/9/2019
Replies: 8
Views: 128

Re: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic)

If you are looking for a proofreader drop me a PM - though I probably won't be able to give more than rudimentary input on the Fate side of things.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 17, 2019 7:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic) UPDATED 21/9/2019
Replies: 8
Views: 128

Re: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic)

Okay, first of I've seen nothing of the Fate franchise except for the original series and Zero, so I have no idea what is going on there. Generally the problem with crossovers is that the target audience is usually restricted to those who know both stories being crossed... On the technical side the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 17, 2019 7:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/20/2019)
Replies: 16
Views: 533

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/14/2019)

As for the timeline, I looked at ProfAllister's timeline and decided to push the date of Hisao's arrival at Yamaku back a week, to the end of May instead of the first week of June, mostly just to give myself space to not start at the first day of school and already have some things established. You...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Sep 15, 2019 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/20/2019)
Replies: 16
Views: 533

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/14/2019)

Hi, and welcome from me as well! Feurox has already elaborately commented on the first chapter, and I can only second what he wrote. So as not to repeat to much, let me just highlight that the speed with which Hisao seems to fall in love (and with which Miki seemse to catch on) seems way too fast in...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Sep 15, 2019 3:47 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids
Replies: 46
Views: 3185

Re: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids

Is Aura also a self-imposed exile? I wouldn't say that, but compared to Hive, Crud and Suriko he has shown less inclination to interact with the fandom - at least here on this forum. He mostly was active on the Ask-Thread. Though if you manage to get him in front of a webcam, I'm sure a lot of peop...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 14, 2019 6:51 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids
Replies: 46
Views: 3185

Re: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids

Good job getting Hive to join you (and good luck trying to get Aura and A22 8) ) I was surprised it took so long for Aimee Mullins to show up in this video. Hope you asked Hive about her in the interview. Nice video overall - I'll go back to Hanako's later... I thought it was just a voiced playthrou...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 12, 2019 9:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 1033

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)

Nothing like a discussion about STDs to end a romance story...

Not going to comment on the last two paths, because honestly I wouldn't know where to start.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 12, 2019 8:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4146

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)

I have to admit I also don't really understand the advice Suzu gave him...
Otherwise nice chapter, but I don't really have anything else to say about it.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Sep 11, 2019 12:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 58
Views: 3762

Re: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

Okay, stuff to get out of the way first: I accidently send a small wave of pain accidentally That quite girl, quiet “I’ll see you later than Hayashi.” then, Hayashi that the student council here to help if you need anything.” IS here Okumura is smiling at me from in front of the ... Is it intentiona...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 10, 2019 3:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)
Replies: 120
Views: 8881

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

Lilly's never been the sort to dive into work at all... ...she DOES have a history of inoring and actively avoiding potential conflicts in her relationship - to the point of avoiding Hisao as well. Hisao at this point should be aware enough to not do anything to startle Hanako. I imagine being abou...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 07, 2019 7:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)
Replies: 120
Views: 8881

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

Mileage may vary, but I feel like this climax is a big clunkfest foisted onto the reader without sufficient buildup. "The guilt I feel for making you stay is what's kept me quiet so long. We tried but it didn't work. I'm sorry," I think it is obvious from the story that there was a lot of build-up,...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: YouTube - Voice Acting/Let's Play
Replies: 7
Views: 2776

Re: YouTube - Voice Acting/Let's Play

I think there are plenty of people who did that.
Personally I don't see the point. Youtube will by neccessity have a worse quality than the original, and you can't go through at your own pace.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 11:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1796
Views: 242755

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190826 CplCrud on Hanako)

Future: That one was... not really good. I can see why it was not included in the VN. Also it would have needed a whole lot of new backgounds and sprites, so there wasn't any chance of it making it into the VN in the first place. 10th of July: I remember having read that one before somewhere. It's ...