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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 01, 2022 9:20 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo - German Patch
Replies: 10
Views: 28093

Re: Katawa Shoujo - German Patch

I'm a bit late, but I now changed the URLs in the OP to the new one.
Thanks!
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 30, 2021 8:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 31st, 2023: Happy With Yourself)
Replies: 150
Views: 175009

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2021: Disconnection)

I mean, thematically it’s brilliant having Daizo sort of stand as a replacement (precursor) to Hisao, and I think it works for the most part - though I expect logistically the school wouldn’t set the next kid with a heart condition on him after that. :lol: Well, logistically the school never would ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 27, 2021 12:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 50248

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

And the bad thing is this is totally something I could picture Lilly doing...
Also makes you wonder what happened to Hanako for her not to be invited.

BTW, you should add the prompt you were given so others can see what you were working with.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 26, 2021 11:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 60
Views: 85764

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

So, this is a belated entry for last year’s Secret Santa that the Prof put up on the discord. I really wanted to get this out before Christmas, but December unexpectedly got a lot more hectic than I planned for… As always, the prompt as well as my author’s notes will be at the end of the story. A No...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 26, 2021 9:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 50248

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

So far the clutter is very limited this year ^^°

I have to say with that prompt I would never have considered writing anything but a crackfic (and considering what happened the last time I tried to write one it wouldn't have been pretty...).

You took it and wrote a character drama instead.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 06, 2021 4:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 50248

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

Look at Prof's Discord. Some of last year's prompts were not fulfilled and a few of them are still up for the taking if I'm not mistaken.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 05, 2021 6:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 50248

To Prime or Not to Prime

So, here’s my present for this year’s Secret Santa. Merry Christmas Dexorf! As always, the prompt as well as my author’s notes will be at the end of the story. To Prime or Not to Prime Exhausted I stumble into my room and collapse onto my bed. The Christmas Party lasted almost until midnight, and I’...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 03, 2021 6:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941486

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Calamansi)

Can't say I remember having read that one, though I must have at some point... As twists go, this is one of Koshers more harmless ones.
The only thing that is worth mentioning is that the whole story - but especially the first part - was written way before the track shed scene was out...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 03, 2021 6:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 50248

Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

Seasonal Greatings everyone! It's time for the annual Secret Santa ! The prompts have been sent out; as usual I'm opening the collection thread early for those who are quick with their submissions. To my knowledge there are 14 contributors so far. As always using this thread to post your story is en...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 30, 2021 2:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin and The Overcoat
Replies: 7
Views: 4354

Re: Rin and The Overcoat

I was referring to this line: A memory flashed before him of when he was eleven and managed to catch an incredibly big fish with his father, and if he was living in 2021 he would have totally said ‘same energy’ out loud on accident. 4th wall break is not quite the right word, as he is not directly a...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 28, 2021 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941486

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20211122 Maid in Hell)

Re: An Apology to the Nurse:
I wish I'd remember what that cracked article I mentioned in my comment from back then was.

Re: Maid in Hell:
Yeah, I really would have been interested where Murex was going to take this story.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 28, 2021 10:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
Replies: 52
Views: 66419

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/11/21)

You know this is easily the story I enjoy most out of all that are currently ongoing (and it ranks pretty up there among the older ones as well). Hisao x Akira really is a pairing that works a lot better if you have some time pass between tha VN and the start of the story. I'm glad I saved it for la...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 27, 2021 8:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shards of the Future.
Replies: 5
Views: 8503

Re: Shards of the Future.

Part three is nice, but in the final scene you are skipping back and forth between past and present tense a lot. Part four is a very interesting story in its own right, but it does not fit the tone of the first three parts. The first three parts were very emotional, and while part four still has tra...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 27, 2021 7:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
Replies: 65
Views: 76160

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/11/2020)

So the writing in this was excellent as always... Still the latest parts didn't click with me as well as the others. Reason being: To be honest I have no idea how (or even if) you intend to salvage a situation like that or if "time" will be nearly enough to do so... At this point I'm almos...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 26, 2021 5:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's Trials (part One)
Replies: 5
Views: 3903

Re: Hisao's Trials (part One)

I agree with Oddball: The discrepancy between the first and the second part is really jarring. The first is more or less well-paced and set up, but the second is rushed and over long stretches feels more like the summary of a story than a story in its own right. That said, the first part was really ...