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So by now I have written a few storys, and I think it's time to collect all the links in one thread. I'll use this thread to collect my one-shot storys - longer storys will keep their own thread but will be linked to here. A warning ahead: None of my Fanfictions contain any Shounen Ai, Yuri or any o...

Commentary: I'm glad to see this story continues. By now the continuity they lived through so often is probably completely ruined, so it feels almost like a "normal" Fanfic - but only almost... Criticism: That's a hard one... Grammar is top, characters are spot on... The only thing I can ...

Off to a nice start. Not much to criticize... some typos, a bit of jumping between tenses and... students who probably think of me as a nuance ...you were probably going for "nuisance" here. I wonder if this emergency is going to involve Yamaku or if Mutou will be busy far away from the ot...

It's probably a good thing you don't have one "Big Boss" who makes all the final decisions.
If you work until noone has any major objections anymore that has to have an impact on quality.

I could say this is the best horrorstory I've ever read, but that wouldn't mean very much, because I don't read horror stories very much. So instead I say that this is one of the best fanfictions I ever read, even if I never played Silent Hill or RE, so I probably missed tons of references. The stor...

Does it matter? No jury would convict her in either case.

Minister of Gloom wrote:My, my, Lilly. Who would suspect you, of all people?

Isn't it obvious? She found out what he did to Hanako.

About critique, feel free. Just don't overdo it. I like critique, as much as it hurts at the first read, it's true and helps the author to improve. That should always be the reason for critique. I always try to include tips for improvement in my comments. Just writing "That's bad" doesn't...

Well, I'm relatively new to these forums, and I'm not really sure where the boundaries are... Is encouraging a writer to continue his story ok or is it a request for him to continue his story? Is it ok to suggest a possible plot to a writer who isn't quite sure how to continue or would that be a req...

darrin wrote:Aimi must be fun to write.

Yes, in the beginning of the story I thought she'd be the one with Tourettes...

Ok, Kosherbacon, you this time you really did it. Your story made me laugh (Aimi), blush (Hiraku) and cry (Yasu) and not many fics have managed the latter. Hiraku's and Mariku's introduction was a piece of art, even if I don't usually like lemon that much. I think it's already the third time I've be...

I never thought I was making him a shy person Well he comes across as extremely insecure and afraid to offend others - Way more than in the original KS... ...what do you mean by much? Nothing special. It's just that the average quality of fics around here is quite high. Mind me, but what's inner mo...

So Kenji has finally succumbed to the Feminist Conspiracy (TM)... Awesome story. You managed to make a likeable character out of Kenji and ship him with a girl in a believable way. I didn't think that would be possible. Also you gave me ideas for at least two Kenji fics of my own. Too bad I probably...

@Mirage_GSM, I'm working on it, English isn't exactly my first language, so i tend to miss a few things here and there. No problem, that's why I point out the homophone mistakes. I think those are easiest to learn to avoid once you know the words. Typos or missing words happen to anyone. Though if ...

I agree: definitely an improvement. Still a few typos or missing words and: What ever the case it, this place is (de)void of any students….well ex cept for us. “W-Well the re's always next time.” I wonder if Emi is going to recruit her for the track team and if her leg is going to hold up to that ki...