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First of all, don't be shy to use OCs. There's no rule against it anywhere and you don't need anyone's permission. She seems like an interesting character, too. Regarding her voice, she seems to be using notes and sign a lot, so you'll probably use italics for those already. The only time I heard an...

Personally I don't see VNs as games. They are electronic books with several alternative endings. I do recognize that they contain some elements that would make many consider them games, so I wouldn't feel that strongly about it, if someone called them that. Ah, but then you have already made the ass...

What he meant was: The reason why Rin is so far in front in the vote is because someone hacked it to give her a few thousand votes

Well, if you don't like your readers to identify with Hisao, you probably shouldn't have used a first person narrative... I don't think it detracts from his character, though. There's plenty of times in the story where Hisao acts without the reader being able to influence his actions with a choice, ...

Still a few past tenses in the first two paragraphs.
So many fanfics about teenagers having sex on these boards but so few about them getting pregnant. You have added greatly to the realism here.
(Oh, and Kosher's fics are excepted from this statement for obvious reasons.)

You know with all the effort you seem to put into this, you might feel justified to delete the "not very" from the thread title. You put more thought into this than a lot of translators I've worked with in the past. I am in no position to judge the quality of your translation, knowing not ...

They also have more experience making shitty hardware. The Kinect will be unstoppable!

Yeah, I wonder which geometric shape it will use to replace the Red Ring of Death / Red Dot of Doom...
Maybe the Red Triangle of Destruction?

4. Misha speaks like a total bimbo. I have just noticed that. I noticed that scenes with Shizune/Misha are harder to translate than others. Long sentences, much use of gerund... It might be a difference in the writing stlyes between the different authors. I didn't really notice when I played the ga...

Emi is my favourite by a pretty large margin. Hanako would come in as second, closely followed by Misha if she had her own path. After them it would again be a close choice between Rin and Lilly... Rin 4th and Lilly 5th. Shizune 6th by a very large margin again. Yuuko would probably beat her if I in...

[*]Perfection.

Actually I didn't type it. I did that post on my cell phone yesterday, and it has a spell checker that tries its best to construct german words out of everything I type. Seems like I missed one of the less obvious ones... Also, good work with the probabilities (It's not really that much work to calc...

KS was the first VN I played and I have played a few others since then. (And seen a few others in their Anime adaptions.)
So far KS is the second best of those, only surpassed by Ever17, but that's no reason to be ashamed, because Ever17 is simply awesome.

Nah, that one will only open when you have cleared all other six paths...

It ist very easy to get kenji's end by accident. I think, i got it when trying for Hanako, when downplaying Hisao's heart problems after the shopping trip. A very innocent-looking choice, considering his reluctance to talk about his condition and not obviously rude.

I have one word for you:
Awesome!

I vote for this to become the default punishment for rapists and torturers. Go Hanako!
I just fear that at this pace they will run out of pieces to cut off very soon...