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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Oct 03, 2019 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fate/Shattered Wish (Discontinued, for now)
Replies: 13
Views: 343

Re: Fate/Shattered Wish (Discontinued)

Well, you could edit your poss and delete the text from them...
There's no real reason to, though. It's not as if it's so bad you'd need to be embarrassd for it.
Just put a notice up in the OP that the story is discontinued so people who would be turned away by that know what they are getting into.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Oct 02, 2019 11:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route
Replies: 15
Views: 546

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route

Well, it IS easier to keep up with a story if it is posted in small chunks, and it is also easier for the writer to have a bit of a buffer to be able to react to feedback, but it's not as if the story gets inherently worse by posting it all in one. In fact once you get past the part that is mostly c...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 01, 2019 12:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route
Replies: 15
Views: 546

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route

Hello and welcome to the forums! Always nice to see a new face, and it would really be nice to have a complete Ritsu route. A couple of things about your story as far as I've read it by now: First of all for the first couple of chapters you didn't as much "rewrite" Act 1 as you took the text and cha...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 01, 2019 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52125

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Oct 15th, 2018)

Well, then! This chapter only took 349 days , which is, uh... the second-slowest release of this whole story. Except that the slowest release was almost 3 times longer, so this is technically the fewest words per day (13.8) of any chapter in this story. Well, despite the long wait I could still rem...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 01, 2019 10:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 10/01/2019)
Replies: 30
Views: 1429

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 10/01/2019)

“Seriously, take some on your way out. I can’t refill it with lollipops until it’s empty.”
Gold!
Rest of the chapter is also fine, I just found it a bit strange that Hisao hardly reacted to the Ayame/Suzu thing - not even internally...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 28, 2019 11:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 10/01/2019)
Replies: 30
Views: 1429

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/28/2019)

“Saki kissed me last night, and she didn’t come to the pool this morning. I don’t know what to think.” Is that your idea of "not telling them"? Regarding the current chapter: Hisao seems fond of sharing details of his love life with any girls he is passingly acquainted with ^^° I wonder if that wil...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 27, 2019 12:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 10/01/2019)
Replies: 30
Views: 1429

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/26/2019)

Hmm... Hisao telling Misha and Shizune was a surprise. I don't think he'd do that in that situation.
Miki and Suzu however - that I can see :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 26, 2019 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)
Replies: 71
Views: 5498

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)

I'm not even sure what you're referring to, so definitely not.
TheHivemind said in a recent interview that there was a scrapped Bad End Epilogue for Emi's route where Hisao meets Emi at college, and she has since gotten together with Misha.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Sep 25, 2019 8:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 9/24/19)
Replies: 52
Views: 6403

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 9/24/19)

I really liked this story - especially the first half might be the best you've written so far.
I's almost a bit sad that you had to include the track because of the prompt. I think ending the story at the point where they leave for the track would have been perfect.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 24, 2019 5:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 10/01/2019)
Replies: 30
Views: 1429

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/23/2019)

Suzu drags Ayame and Miki off first, leaving Saki and I to walk back to class together.
"Saki and me"
I’ve never seen anyone exit or leave this building that wasn’t a Yamaku student or Yuuko.
"enter or leave"?
Nothing much to say. You continue to write a solid story at a quite high pace.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 24, 2019 5:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)
Replies: 71
Views: 5498

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)

to be more specific about the goofiness, Misha had been apparently keeping it in from everybody else for literally the entire run of KS, and never really comes out with it to anyone - except poof here Tbf, on Shizune's path Hisao - our only source of information as readers - does not have much cont...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Sep 23, 2019 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)
Replies: 71
Views: 5498

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)

"...Give it a few months, and we’ll be at university, and then everything will be different. Hopefully better.”
This sentence felt strange coming from Emi.

Was this story in any way inspired by certain recent revelations by a certain KS dev?
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Sep 23, 2019 9:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fate/Shattered Wish (Discontinued, for now)
Replies: 13
Views: 343

Re: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic) UPDATED 21/9/2019

Well, I'm not really a fan of Highlander plots, and I was very much hoping you wouldn't take this in that direction... From what I know about the Fate universe, a scenario like this one is... not really likely. There are several quite difficult steps to be taken to acquire a servant, and I don't thi...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Sep 22, 2019 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)
Replies: 90
Views: 18909

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)

That was certainly a very unexpected (and, yes, fun) portrayal of Hanako :lol:

Though it took me a while to realize "Megamechametaranger" was not Japanese...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 20, 2019 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids
Replies: 46
Views: 3561

Re: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids

Too bad I have to work this saturday :cry: