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by Mirage_GSM
Wed Apr 17, 2019 11:52 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there
Replies: 7
Views: 417

Re: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there

Seen the Grisaja anime... Well, the first one anyway.
If the story is even a little like the VN then you shouldn't expect too much.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Apr 17, 2019 11:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-14)
Replies: 90
Views: 5289

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-14)

Sad one, but good one, too.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Apr 10, 2019 5:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 218965

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)

Well... I think I wrote all I cared to write about this story the first time around.
The story hasn't gotten any better with age...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Apr 09, 2019 9:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit / A Long Way Down 04/07/2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1727

Re: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit / A Long Way Down 04/07/2019

Nice...
But in the end Lilly still avoided the question how she knew it was Suzu...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Mar 31, 2019 7:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1242

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/25/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

If it turns into a pseudo-harem story where he's trying to manage all the female attention without any of the dating options trying to kill the others, I certainly wouldn't complain.
Don't worry. I would. :twisted:
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 29, 2019 6:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remember Me (An Amnesia Story)
Replies: 4
Views: 238

Re: Remember Me (An Amnesia Story)

NIce to see you back! Your writing has improved a lot since the last time. Regarding the story... Well, it's WAY too early to say anything about that. I assume the shredding of the notes was an attempt at self-induced amnesia - what I don't understand after what nurse told her was how it was so succ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 15, 2019 11:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Razor's One Shots & misc.
Replies: 3
Views: 181

Re: Razor's One Shots & misc.

So, one thing I always complain about in cases like this is when people heap several unrelated disabilities on the same person. Yes, it does happen in real life, but it always feels forced in fiction. Some other things are a bit hard to believe as well, e.g. why should her parents discuss the decisi...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Mar 14, 2019 6:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-14)
Replies: 90
Views: 5289

Re: Yet another one-shot thread

Short and very to the point. I like it. Nice work!
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 13, 2019 11:34 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids
Replies: 18
Views: 1066

Re: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids

You should probably remove that link and the reference to that project if you don't want to get banned...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 08, 2019 12:52 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld
Replies: 12
Views: 1473

Re: Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld

Well, the save was gone, but I still have the preset with the characters.
I've used that for a couple more games in the meantime, but I didn't write diary for those.

That comic is good... but also sad...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 06, 2019 5:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1242

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/5/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

It's also kind of jarring to see that entire year of Hisao's life skimmed over in the space of 2 chapters paragraphs. I don't usually comment on stuff that didn't make it in the published version, but this is kind of funny, because in the original draft it was two sentences instead of two paragraph...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Mar 05, 2019 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 218965

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190304 Irish Stout)

Well... I honestly can't remember having read this one before. I probably did, I just did a good job forgetting about it.
And now you have to drag it back into the light...

I generally don't like stories that are written solely for the shock effect, and even among those this is one of the worse ones.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 04, 2019 10:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summertales
Replies: 5
Views: 331

Re: Summertales

I read up to the point where you started to use script format.
Quite a few grammar mistakes up to there but otherwise okay.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 26, 2019 12:17 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids
Replies: 18
Views: 1066

Re: Mattyd's Memes, Art, & Vids

Caption:
"No, my voice is just a bit hoarse today. By the way, you were paying for the strawberry parfait, right?"
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 26, 2019 12:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 218965

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190218 KS Pentameter)

The issue comes more in the choice of meter and rhyming scheme. In the English-speaking world, iambic pentameter is most directly related to Shakespeare. However, Shakespeare used blank verse in iambic pentameter because it most closely resembled the natural cadence of spoken English. Interesting, ...