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I was thinking to myself today about why screen savers for computers always seem to be so boring. I asked some friends about what they would have if they could have anything for a screen saver. The idea of fireworks came up and my mouth dropped. I remember there was a really cool fireworks scene at ...

I still liked the 3rd emi over the fourth. My thoughts arent that she looks bad but the sprites are different from the other cast. When you have a sprite of new Emi next to old Rin you see how off the whole thing is and there is really only one solution, update ever character to the same design as E...

I'm glad this is getting so many views, but if I might be so bold, could I request that more people keave a short reply to tell me what they think.

I really appreciate feedback, my philosophy positive feedback helps self-esteem as an writer; and negative feedback helps me improve when I write.

Shades of gray wrote:*claps* bravo, another well done ficlet!

just have one question though, are you going to continue Rin's Abstract Trip?

I dont know? Maybe, if i get some ideas to work with I might just do that, but for now Im drawing a blank...
(sorry)

I'm working on grammar now more than ever. I cant promise perfection on my fourth story but I'm going to spend a lot more time checking my work Hanako's Timid Adventure Class today was as unbearable as ever. Mr. Mutou scratched equations onto the chalkboard the entire time just mumbling incoherently...

Only thing I can really say is that you should just keep working on your grammar and spelling. Other than that, I like how you portray (pun intended) Hisao's relationship with Rin, as well as how Hisao tries to figure out both art and Rin. Keep em coming ^_^ Thank you your feedback means alot to me...

Story continued from the last one with Rin. I don't expect to get this to get any easier, but I'm hoping you will give your support. Rin's Unique Trip part 2 I was sitting there endlessly staring at the blank canvas in front of me. It reminded me of the scene I saw in the art room a few days ago. I ...

Your reply seemed to be more ordered than your story. Jokes aside, you probably want to double check through your story after you finish writing, since I think you didn't do so. For example 'Emi: Because her isnt broken Hisao' You mean her 'heart'. Well Im sorry I do double check but I know I get l...

Second story I will try to use some of the ffed back I have received so far to better my writting (typing). Rin's not going to be easy, her personality makes her harder to predict and harder write. But Im hoping with time I can get it just right. Rin's Abstract Trip Part 1 I know I agreed to join th...

Fair enough advice, I respect everything you said and honestly while I was typing it I had many of the same thoughts, but decided against changing anyways. Especially the confession, I honestly started from the beginning in finnishing it as a romance, but perhaps I pushed to much... I skipped the pa...

My first fanfic, Ill do my best, Its my first time but I took great pride in writing (typing) it up. If you read it I appreciate feedback of all kind and appreciate the time you spent, My intention is to make a series of short stories about individual pairings and their interactions with others. Emi...

Very cute, I was confused for a few lines because I was reading it from Hisao's perspective which made no scenes.
But when I figured out it was Lillie's perspective, I really liked it, it was fun reading a romance from a blind womens perspective.