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by tony246
Sat Aug 11, 2012 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

Hm, well, erm, considering the fact that school is about a month away from starting it would be best to give this some conclusion huh? Maybe eventually I'll get around to it, but to be quite frank I'm not really sure where I need to go with it anyways.
by tony246
Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

Thank you all for the reads. Alright, to address some...and by some I really only mean brogurt's concerns, in order: Supersheep was me being...very tired. I don't know what came over me. I thought I was going somewhere with it. No summarizing in the...whatever we call that initial block of text. Und...
by tony246
Mon May 28, 2012 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 122
Views: 29352

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch2 up)

Hm, I like it. It's fluff and who doesn't like fluff. I would give you some criticism...but I can't criticize at all so sorry about that.

I just have one question: How do you do those fancy letter things in the title?
by tony246
Sun May 27, 2012 11:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

Alright, we're finally back with another installment of SUPERFLUFF. Let's hope this one is as fluffy and super as a Supersheep. Oh, and just to get this out of the way, the beginning is going to be a lot like the original scene in Lilly's Route. Too much of it unfortunately. I mean there are some ne...
by tony246
Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

Ok, let's see, I'm getting some minor Kenji OOC and general strangeness with the text. I'll start with Kenji first. Right, now normally Kenji would be entirely full of conspiracy rants. However, two things. Firstly, this is a bro moment. As in he needs to be the best bro he can be for Hisao right no...
by tony246
Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

...Finally...done...with...chapter...never...again! But seriously, Date chapters are too hard for me. This is the only one you're getting so you all better enjoy it, but if you don't...I understand. They aren't exactly my forte I suppose. Anyways, today's chapter is 85% Hanako. None of that false Ha...
by tony246
Sun Apr 15, 2012 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

...Writing the date chapter to end all date chapters is surprisingly hard. Especially with limited knowledge.

So, anybody got any advice for this? Own experiences to share? Anything?
by tony246
Tue Apr 10, 2012 2:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

Trying to write the best darn Date chapter I can possibly write. Needs time. Needs imagination. Needs fluffs. Give me time.

Oh, and can someone please comment after this, it would make me feel guilty to double post. This is in no way extra advertising. That's just wrong.
by tony246
Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 41946

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

...Ah, so this is what you were talking about.
Well, I can't say much since there isn't much out, but...erm...yeah...ok, it was interesting.

...I'm going to work on my stuff now before any irrational thought hits me.
by tony246
Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 5118

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

Ah tenses, the enemy of all mankind. The destroyer of all good thoughts and countless worlds and the master of a million wise. How I hate thee.

But anyway, yeah, good stuff so far man. Of course, I basically call anything not overly heartdestroying good so take that as you will.
by tony246
Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 17634

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction)

I would like to think that it was an april fool's day post purely because of the lack of transition.

But then again, this is the internet so...yeah.
by tony246
Tue Mar 27, 2012 9:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

>the only part with just the two lovers is the lone part at the end >it's not particularly romantic ಠ_ಠ To be honest, I had a different version of events in my head that would have probably lead to something a bit more romantic or something, but that version had a weird characterization moment that...
by tony246
Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

“Oh, well, good then,” She finally agrees, mouth twitching into another smile. “I’m glad you like it.” Twitching how? I'm use to a twitching smile indicating hidden irritation. I'm rather stumped because it could mean alot of things when it comes to Hanako. That's about all I got for criticism pers...
by tony246
Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 24050

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

We are back for another fluffy chapter, this time extra fluffy due to a certain fan fic piece depressing the heck out of me. Anyways, well, it seems as though Hanako has been a bit out of the spot light with the craziness of the student council and Emi's actions, which is weird since this is her pos...
by tony246
Sat Mar 24, 2012 7:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Epilogue
Replies: 23
Views: 4417

Re: Hanako Epilogue

Side Note: Its depressing This is an understatement. Seriously, if you are the type of person who hates unhappy endings, avoid this. If you are a person who LIKES bittersweet endings, avoid this. There is nothing remotely happy about this. Every FALSELY happy moment is just a big trap for that horr...