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I couldn't help reading this in the voice of Microsoft Sam.

I need to know what happens next! Does he just sleep, or does he peek on her..?

That was extremely cute. I baww'd at the end. Well, HOPEFULLY (HINT! HINT!) this is not the end... Please write more!

Roxius wrote:All I need to do now is a Hanako X Rin story and something revolving around Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles...and a really fat Lilly.

You sir, are really awesome!

Warwick wrote:Just saw this on 4chan. Someone suggested thalassemia.

But ain't that a mental disease?

Loved the ending. Nice work, although I'm left wondering about how Rin kicked him in the chest and back onto the bench. Must be really flexible. ...by playing the demo, you should figure out that Rin is kinda flexible.... Yes but, they were both standing, right? It would be extremely difficult for ...

Squirg wrote:Loved the ending. Nice work, although I'm left wondering about how Rin kicked him in the chest and back onto the bench. Must be really flexible.

...by playing the demo, you should figure out that Rin is kinda flexible....

kobe wrote:And it had been 2 months ago since i've been bel-air'd T-T
cool fanfic. moar?

Meh, I actually got a plot figured out for this. I was about half done when I felt like making it into a Bel-Air... I will 90% surely write the ending later.

daikai wrote:MORE

Just Emi left now!

Yeah, I forgot Rin's boobs.

AWESOME!

NOTE: This is what I think happens after the RIn path is over in the demo. This is my first fanfic. *EDIT* Also, please write critique, good or bad, I don't care. *** Standing and looking at the crowd of people passing by, still talking about the newly ended firework show, I snap out of my trance an...

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...wat

Good end was good.

What about writing a bad end where they not end up at Yamaku?

This is awesome in so many ways

Working on the assumption that it has to be a physical thing that isn't immediately evident from her appearance or behaviour, I'm strongly inclined to think Misha's disability is something like epilepsy. Depending on the type and how well it's controlled, the condition might well justify her attend...

Thanks for making my day better AGAIN AGAIN Roxius! =D