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- Wed May 13, 2009 12:45 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Please proofread, tear my work to shreds.
- Replies: 7
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I will start with #3, stop. Imagine for a moment, stop. That at every comma, stop. And period, stop. When reading, stop. You need to stop, stop. So say, reading, like this. Constant short sentences. and commas, where there really don't need to be, commas. Makes for an uncomfortable and jarring readi...
- Sun May 10, 2009 1:24 pm
- Forum: Join the Dev Team
- Topic: Digital Artist, & etc.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3173
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v106/Sarunakai/Lilly2.jpg Hello! I recently found this project through a friend, and after falling in love with act 1, I figured maybe instead of just sitting around and waiting for the rest of the game to be released I could actually help out with the process! c: ...