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by Retornodelogay
Sat Apr 13, 2024 3:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 34
Views: 10592

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

Thanks for the feedback! This story was my first foray into writing fiction, and I definitely agree there are some awkward conversations. Some day I might go back and rewrite parts of it. If this is your first time writing fiction it really is an achievement! Even more so if you wrote it in two mon...
by Retornodelogay
Wed Apr 10, 2024 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 34
Views: 10592

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

I wasn't counting on reading a fanfic... of my favourite fanfic and for it to be emotionally resonant as well! The last chapter straight up hurt, but it was earned. As I said in other messages, I admire the breakneck speed you achieve with the story. There are some awkward conversations here and the...
by Retornodelogay
Thu Apr 04, 2024 3:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/04/2024
Replies: 8
Views: 615

Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 21/03/2024

guthrum06 wrote: Sat Mar 30, 2024 2:18 pm

It's another good chapter.
I'm enjoying the slow burn.

Thank you! I've been reading your Learning to Run for the last couple of days and I'm honestly amazed at the breakneck speed you achieve. I really struggle with not stopping at every minute detail!

by Retornodelogay
Thu Apr 04, 2024 3:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/04/2024
Replies: 8
Views: 615

Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 21/03/2024

<<Chapter 2 CHAPTER 3 How could she miss Rin? She’s right there, all the time. She’s the person she sees the most, the one constant in her life. And what the hell did she mean by her being Rin’s base? Unfortunately asking her may create as many questions as it does answers, if it even does the latt...
by Retornodelogay
Thu Mar 21, 2024 4:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/04/2024
Replies: 8
Views: 615

Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story

Welp, here it goes, the second, once again short chapter. Written from Rin's perspective since it's something I usually don't get to see, and I thought it would be fun to do it! <<Chapter 1 CHAPTER 2 Rin wakes up unceremoniously, after a long night of incredibly light sleep. Opening her eyes is out ...
by Retornodelogay
Thu Mar 14, 2024 8:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/04/2024
Replies: 8
Views: 615

Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story

I love it so far! I'm always happy to see more yuri content in my favorite fandom. You're right, Emi x Rin stuff is surprisingly limited. Writing Rin is pretty tough (at least for me), but I think you nailed here. Looking forward to the rest! Thank you!! Writing Rin is actually super fun because I ...
by Retornodelogay
Wed Mar 13, 2024 4:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/04/2024
Replies: 8
Views: 615

Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/04/2024

Welp, I don't know how this will go but here it is. First of all, I think an introduction is customary, since I'm relatively new to the forums even though I'm a long time fan of the VN. I read KS way back in 2013-14 when I was but a teenager and didn't even know what a VN was. Even though I was a se...
by Retornodelogay
Fri Feb 02, 2024 4:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If you *actually have* a physical disability, what is it?
Replies: 506
Views: 167714

Re: If you *actually have* a physical disability, what is it?

Browsing the forums and randomly coming across this thread, so just wanted to contribute to the statistic. Would love to see how many people voted blank to compare but oh well, what can you do with a 14 year old post. As for me, I have Ehlers-Danlos syndrome, a somewhat rare (mostly due to missed di...
by Retornodelogay
Sat Jan 20, 2024 4:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 992616

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)

Yet another one of those "making an account just to leave a comment on Learning to Fly". I came across this fanfic by pure chance a couple of months ago and I'm so glad I did. Not only did you give Hisao some much needed personality but managed to craft such an incredible, believable and l...