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Thanks for the feedback! This story was my first foray into writing fiction, and I definitely agree there are some awkward conversations. Some day I might go back and rewrite parts of it. Your feedback on EDS is useful too! I don't have it myself, but I did go pretty hard on research. As you'll see ...

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I love this. Doing it from the perspective of a newspaper article really adds some serious gravitas to how awesome Saki is. Makes me wish I had thought of it as something of a prequel to Learning to Run! I also like that you tell us not only about Saki's post-Yamaku life, but also Shizune's, Hisao's...

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It's another good chapter. I'm enjoying the slow burn. Thank you! I've been reading your Learning to Run for the last couple of days and I'm honestly amazed at the breakneck speed you achieve. I really struggle with not stopping at every minute detail! I'm glad you're enjoying it. If you reach the ...

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It's another good chapter.
I'm enjoying the slow burn.

guthrum06

I love it so far!

I'm always happy to see more yuri content in my favorite fandom. You're right, Emi x Rin stuff is surprisingly limited.

Writing Rin is pretty tough (at least for me), but I think you nailed here. Looking forward to the rest!

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I haven't seen very many people call Emi's "Bad Ending" one of the endings that might be better than the "Good" one. Hers is pretty cut and dry. In one of them she never opens up to Hisao and they never speak to each other again. In the other, she finally finds someone she can sh...

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Poor, poor Emi. And the nurse too. And of course the Nakais. It is a long list of poor. Back in 2007, you weren't an adult in Japan until you were 20. I wonder if that means Emi will be treated more leniency. Of course even if she is cleared of all charges, the mental strain of accidentally taking s...

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This is really good.

I feel bad for Emi, but it's a great premise and it's really well-written. I can't wait for more.

guthrum06

Congratulations on completing the story! It was quite the ride. I don't think I've ever seen anyone post such a long story in such a short timeframe - and this high quality at that. A story with Junichiro as the protagonist might be... depressing... Also here my final two annotations :-) She just s...

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All good stories are bound to end. This was a very good story. I hope it draws more attention from readers since now it's complete. I read a lot of KS fanfiction (maybe, an entirety of this forum section that worth reading), and this is one of the best stories I've read here. Thank you. Also, you r...

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I'm sitting in front of my dad's grave. Akari's sitting next to me with an arm around me. Hi dad. Today's the 12th anniversary of your passing, so I'm paying you a visit. I have Kari and mom with me today. Mom also brought her boyfriend, so try not to be jealous. Just kidding, I know you wouldn't be...

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It's early afternoon. There's a graduation party at my mom's tomorrow night, and the day after is graduation. Akari and I will be going to Tokyo with the Yoshidas after the ceremony. We move into our apartment five days later. It's all happening so fast. Everything is about to change, and I have som...

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I'm in my room packing for our trip to Tokyo. We leave tomorrow. We'll be looking at apartments for a couple days, and then going to new student orientation at the university. I just realized that I really don't have very much time left in this dorm room. Graduation is in 14 days and we're going to ...

guthrum06

So sorry to hear about all that. Hopefully things take a turn in the other direction.

The good news is we'll all be ecstatic to get more Learning to Fly whenever it is you have the time and/or energy.

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Akari and I are in my room closely watching the screen of her laptop. We find out today whether we passed our Tokyo entrance exam. We already know we got into our other schools, so Akari and I living together in Tokyo next year is assured. However, Tokyo is the number one target for both of us and i...

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