I did not expect this prompt to turn into a wacky Yamaku heist story, but I'm glad it did! Thanks so much for the great story.
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- Wed May 15, 2024 8:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Stealthy's Shorts [Newest Addition: May 14th, 2024. - "Haruhiko Suzumiya and the Great Ibarazaki Christmas Mystery!"]
- Replies: 19
- Views: 15258
- Sun May 05, 2024 10:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/05/2024: Two new chapters
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1780
Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/05/2024: Two new chapters
Love the new chapters too. Fujisawa seems like a great OC, and Rin clearly being in love with Emi but not understanding it is pretty adorable. Also love what you're doing with Emi, who still hasn't fully opened up to anyone, so she's surprisingly awkward about asking Fujisawa about her disability. H...
- Fri Apr 12, 2024 10:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
- Replies: 34
- Views: 23188
Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Thanks for the feedback! This story was my first foray into writing fiction, and I definitely agree there are some awkward conversations. Some day I might go back and rewrite parts of it. Your feedback on EDS is useful too! I don't have it myself, but I did go pretty hard on research. As you'll see ...
- Wed Apr 10, 2024 9:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Legacy of Vladimir Hodakov [last update: 11.05.2024 — Last Night on Earth]
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1430
Re: The Legacy of Vladimir Hodakov [last update: 10.04.2024 — Revelations]
I love this. Doing it from the perspective of a newspaper article really adds some serious gravitas to how awesome Saki is. Makes me wish I had thought of it as something of a prequel to Learning to Run! I also like that you tell us not only about Saki's post-Yamaku life, but also Shizune's, Hisao's...
- Tue Apr 09, 2024 6:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/05/2024: Two new chapters
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1780
Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 21/03/2024
It's another good chapter. I'm enjoying the slow burn. Thank you! I've been reading your Learning to Run for the last couple of days and I'm honestly amazed at the breakneck speed you achieve. I really struggle with not stopping at every minute detail! I'm glad you're enjoying it. If you reach the ...
- Sat Mar 30, 2024 2:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/05/2024: Two new chapters
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1780
Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 21/03/2024
It's another good chapter.
I'm enjoying the slow burn.
- Wed Mar 13, 2024 10:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 04/05/2024: Two new chapters
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1780
Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story
I love it so far!
I'm always happy to see more yuri content in my favorite fandom. You're right, Emi x Rin stuff is surprisingly limited.
Writing Rin is pretty tough (at least for me), but I think you nailed here. Looking forward to the rest!
- Wed Mar 06, 2024 5:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Emi's ending
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1460
Re: Emi's ending
I haven't seen very many people call Emi's "Bad Ending" one of the endings that might be better than the "Good" one. Hers is pretty cut and dry. In one of them she never opens up to Hisao and they never speak to each other again. In the other, she finally finds someone she can sh...
- Sun Mar 03, 2024 4:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Intentions
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3388
Re: Intentions
Poor, poor Emi. And the nurse too. And of course the Nakais. It is a long list of poor. Back in 2007, you weren't an adult in Japan until you were 20. I wonder if that means Emi will be treated more leniency. Of course even if she is cleared of all charges, the mental strain of accidentally taking s...
- Sat Mar 02, 2024 7:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Intentions
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3388
Re: Intentions
This is really good.
I feel bad for Emi, but it's a great premise and it's really well-written. I can't wait for more.
- Tue Feb 20, 2024 5:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
- Views: 319392
Re: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
Congratulations on completing the story! It was quite the ride. I don't think I've ever seen anyone post such a long story in such a short timeframe - and this high quality at that. A story with Junichiro as the protagonist might be... depressing... Also here my final two annotations :-) She just s...
- Sun Feb 11, 2024 4:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
- Views: 319392
Re: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
All good stories are bound to end. This was a very good story. I hope it draws more attention from readers since now it's complete. I read a lot of KS fanfiction (maybe, an entirety of this forum section that worth reading), and this is one of the best stories I've read here. Thank you. Also, you r...
- Sun Feb 11, 2024 12:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
- Views: 319392
Epilogue: Ten Years Later
I'm sitting in front of my dad's grave. Akari's sitting next to me with an arm around me. Hi dad. Today's the 12th anniversary of your passing, so I'm paying you a visit. I have Kari and mom with me today. Mom also brought her boyfriend, so try not to be jealous. Just kidding, I know you wouldn't be...
- Thu Feb 08, 2024 1:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
- Views: 319392
Chapter 60
It's early afternoon. There's a graduation party at my mom's tomorrow night, and the day after is graduation. Akari and I will be going to Tokyo with the Yoshidas after the ceremony. We move into our apartment five days later. It's all happening so fast. Everything is about to change, and I have som...
- Fri Feb 02, 2024 11:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
- Views: 319392
Chapter 59
I'm in my room packing for our trip to Tokyo. We leave tomorrow. We'll be looking at apartments for a couple days, and then going to new student orientation at the university. I just realized that I really don't have very much time left in this dorm room. Graduation is in 14 days and we're going to ...