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Absolutely adore this fic sharpo. Keep up the good work. I said on discord that your Rika is very reminiscent of scissorlips' suzu and I stand by that. She's a particular brand of endearing dork that I just vibe with and I can't wait for more :) The only bit I disliked was the Saki situation. I wasn...

Having read home, AoC and now scarred muse, I largely agree with stealthy's comments; You've clearly improved as a writer between these pieces, and this is by far my favourite of your routes. I cannot give you enough praise; I really really enjoyed this. The way you handled Hanako's birthday was rea...

I started reading this with the intention of giving feedback. I think the biggest bit of feedback i can give, however, is that i want more . I only have a couple small nit-picks. 1) I don't really like how these few sentences read: her eyes filled with a specific type of terror I wish I had never se...

Appreciate your response. I wrote that message while half asleep very late last night, and now I've had more time to think about it, I think a better way to convey what I'm saying, is that the story would have greatly benefitted from a few additional chapters which detail Hisao/rins desperate attemp...

The story wasn't written badly, and I don't dislike the concept; Rin gets pregnant, her and hisao get separated, they both sink into depression and then live sad little lives. Depressing but an interesting concept. I am sorry to say however that I did not like this. The issue I have with it is that ...

This is my favourite pseudo route, which is really saying something considering how much i liked Scissorlips' Suzu route.

I really hope you get round to finishing it, whether that be in a few days or a few years. It will be really nice to see how you tie up the loose ends.

I have just finished reading this, and while it's fresh in my mind, I just wanted to say thank you. I loved it from start to finish. Emis internal monologue on the track in chapter 59 genuinely made me cry, and the chapter from Rin's perspective captured Rins... Oddities fantastically. I really real...

I stumbled upon this game, and by extension the fan fics, far too late. In the hopes that you occasionally come back to this site, I just wanted to say thank you for writing this. It truly was a beautiful story.