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- Tue May 12, 2009 11:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Please proofread, tear my work to shreds.
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2133
I’d love to say our hands our intertwined but that would be inappropriate. She doesn’t have hands. You should input the word "That" between "say" and "our". The second "our" should be "are". You should probably use a comma and not a period in this line. Also insert the word "But" after the comma. I...
- Thu Apr 30, 2009 12:49 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: How'd you find yourself here?
- Replies: 914
- Views: 145944
Someone made a thread on /d/ so I decided to stop looking at images of women being choked long enough to play the game. It was enjoyable and I look forward to more.
- Thu Apr 30, 2009 12:44 pm
- Forum: Feedback
- Topic: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread
- Replies: 991
- Views: 176671
It was enjoyable, I don't know if this is because it's just a demo or if the storyline would force this ending in the full game but I somewhat disliked the main character dying at the end of the no girl storyline, perhaps include something involving Kenji, he's a fun character, I know this isn't rea...