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Just a quick update; sorry for slow progress on new chapters. Been looking for a new job recently and improving my relations with my family, among other small bits of procrastination. But this all isn't to say I'm not thinking about this story still; I'm already coming up with what'll happen up unti...

Hey there! I've only just started reading your fics, but I gotta say, all of these so far have been great reads! Smut to story, I'd found some new ships I adore in these stories!

Like Kenji × Lilly/Rin, for instance-

Keep up the great work!

No Shoes, A Shirt, Yet Service [NSFW] [ Shicchan~ are you doing anything later today? ] I spot Misha off to my side, as she always is, which I'm grateful for. She honestly makes classes bearable. Not just because she can tell me what Mutou's saying, but her energy helps me through the only class se...

I might be going through the motions kinda quick here, but I've got some good people backing my addiction- I mean desires to do more on here! As such, I'm going to make this topic as a sort-of place to put other, smaller stories that can be anything from NSFW stories about the characters of Katawa S...

Oddball wrote: ↑Sat Feb 20, 2021 2:06 pm As for the large breasts, breast hypertrophy is a real thing.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Breast_hypertrophy

Hmm! I might just use that instead. Good idea, Oddball.

So, for the first chapter, there are two things I would "complain" about. I'm not a huge fan of the "I rewrite the VN" but at least, you manage to add more original content in the chapter. Also, I don't understand what's the point to add the choices from the game, directly in yo...

Another decent chapter, I am really enjoying the positive Hisao. The Hanako scene was super adorable too. I only have a small issue with how you described your OC's...bust. It felt a little bit over the top, for example, each being bigger than her head. I'm sure it was done intentionally but I don'...

After getting a friend of mine to proofread this next scene, I think it's finally ready to be posted! Hopefully this'll further distinct this story from the main one. Act 1, Scene 2 - Enter Stage Right? My alarm clock on my phone manages to wake me up before I can naturally awaken, though the light ...

It's 'pseudo', you don't spell it to rhyme with 'cluedo' or something. And more editing required. ... Mmm. I see what you mean. My bad! Even with my own eyes proof-reading stuff small things get past me. Thank you for the input; sorry if I end up editing too many times... Hope you enjoy the story a...

Hello and welcome! The prologue feels a bit choppy and probably could have done with a bit more proofreading, for example: [Examples cut for brevity] The first chapter is already a lot better. Only one mistake: I spy a table in the far corner of the library. probably of the *cafeteria* Psychic Spy ...

After much careful consideration and writing, here's Hisao's first real day at Yamaku. Thank you everyone who's reading this so far, and I hope everyone enjoys his first day! Act 1, Scene 1 - Welcome to Yamaku A day later and a car ride's distance away, and we arrive at the front gate. My parents ge...

Welcome to the forums! Always nice to see new blood here. We've interacted a few times on the discord, but still, official welcome to the forums. I typically don't like rewrites of the prologue, but I think that it could be ok here. I have to see how the new Hisao you've presented interacts with yo...

Hello, world! Ya'll probably don't know me, unless you know me from either A) four or five years ago, or B) from Yamaku Academy, so I'll introduce myself in this (probably going to be heavily-revised and edited) post. My name is CirnouliK. I also go by a couple other names, but CirnouliK is one that...

Keep your head held up, Tal. I know you'll get through those dumb classes!

Also, I've been enjoying this story a lot - even if Ritsu's been a little scarce, the few times I've seen her you write her adorably. Keep it up!

I just wanna say semi-quickly before I hit the sack that this story's making me incredibly happy. It's well-written, Akira is really good so far, the OCs are interesting and funny, and the whole atmosphere makes it feel pretty surreal.

I like it. A lot. Please keep up the great work...!