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by CirnouliK
Sun Mar 07, 2021 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

Just a quick update; sorry for slow progress on new chapters. Been looking for a new job recently and improving my relations with my family, among other small bits of procrastination. But this all isn't to say I'm not thinking about this story still; I'm already coming up with what'll happen up unti...
by CirnouliK
Fri Feb 26, 2021 5:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/24/21--Wet Dreams)
Replies: 79
Views: 24404

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/24/21--Wet Dreams)

Hey there! I've only just started reading your fics, but I gotta say, all of these so far have been great reads! Smut to story, I'd found some new ships I adore in these stories!

Like Kenji × Lilly/Rin, for instance-

Keep up the great work! 👍
by CirnouliK
Mon Feb 22, 2021 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cirno's One-Shot Repository!
Replies: 2
Views: 502

Re: Cirno's One-Shot Repository!

No Shoes, A Shirt, Yet Service [NSFW] [ Shicchan~ are you doing anything later today? ] I spot Misha off to my side, as she always is, which I'm grateful for. She honestly makes classes bearable. Not just because she can tell me what Mutou's saying, but her energy helps me through the only class se...
by CirnouliK
Mon Feb 22, 2021 3:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cirno's One-Shot Repository!
Replies: 2
Views: 502

Cirno's One-Shot Repository!

I might be going through the motions kinda quick here, but I've got some good people backing my addiction- I mean desires to do more on here! As such, I'm going to make this topic as a sort-of place to put other, smaller stories that can be anything from NSFW stories about the characters of Katawa S...
by CirnouliK
Sat Feb 20, 2021 6:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

Oddball wrote:
Sat Feb 20, 2021 2:06 pm
As for the large breasts, breast hypertrophy is a real thing.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Breast_hypertrophy
Hmm! I might just use that instead. Good idea, Oddball.
by CirnouliK
Fri Feb 19, 2021 2:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

So, for the first chapter, there are two things I would "complain" about. I'm not a huge fan of the "I rewrite the VN" but at least, you manage to add more original content in the chapter. Also, I don't understand what's the point to add the choices from the game, directly in your chapters. Adding ...
by CirnouliK
Thu Feb 18, 2021 9:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

Another decent chapter, I am really enjoying the positive Hisao. The Hanako scene was super adorable too. I only have a small issue with how you described your OC's...bust. It felt a little bit over the top, for example, each being bigger than her head. I'm sure it was done intentionally but I don'...
by CirnouliK
Thu Feb 18, 2021 2:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

After getting a friend of mine to proofread this next scene, I think it's finally ready to be posted! Hopefully this'll further distinct this story from the main one. Act 1, Scene 2 - Enter Stage Right? My alarm clock on my phone manages to wake me up before I can naturally awaken, though the light ...
by CirnouliK
Sat Feb 13, 2021 11:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Psuedo-Route

It's 'pseudo', you don't spell it to rhyme with 'cluedo' or something. And more editing required. ... Mmm. I see what you mean. My bad! Even with my own eyes proof-reading stuff small things get past me. Thank you for the input; sorry if I end up editing too many times... Hope you enjoy the story a...
by CirnouliK
Sat Feb 13, 2021 4:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Psuedo-Route

Hello and welcome! The prologue feels a bit choppy and probably could have done with a bit more proofreading, for example: [Examples cut for brevity] The first chapter is already a lot better. Only one mistake: I spy a table in the far corner of the library. probably of the *cafeteria* Psychic Spy ...
by CirnouliK
Fri Feb 12, 2021 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Psuedo-Route

After much careful consideration and writing, here's Hisao's first real day at Yamaku. Thank you everyone who's reading this so far, and I hope everyone enjoys his first day! Act 1, Scene 1 - Welcome to Yamaku A day later and a car ride's distance away, and we arrive at the front gate. My parents ge...
by CirnouliK
Fri Feb 12, 2021 3:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Psuedo-Route

Welcome to the forums! Always nice to see new blood here. We've interacted a few times on the discord, but still, official welcome to the forums. I typically don't like rewrites of the prologue, but I think that it could be ok here. I have to see how the new Hisao you've presented interacts with yo...
by CirnouliK
Fri Feb 12, 2021 3:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

Hello, world! Ya'll probably don't know me, unless you know me from either A) four or five years ago, or B) from Yamaku Academy, so I'll introduce myself in this (probably going to be heavily-revised and edited) post. My name is CirnouliK. I also go by a couple other names, but CirnouliK is one that...
by CirnouliK
Fri Feb 12, 2021 2:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 31
Views: 8020

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Keep your head held up, Tal. I know you'll get through those dumb classes!

Also, I've been enjoying this story a lot - even if Ritsu's been a little scarce, the few times I've seen her you write her adorably. Keep it up!
by CirnouliK
Sat Feb 06, 2021 5:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/5/21)
Replies: 27
Views: 5696

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/12/20)

I just wanna say semi-quickly before I hit the sack that this story's making me incredibly happy. It's well-written, Akira is really good so far, the OCs are interesting and funny, and the whole atmosphere makes it feel pretty surreal.

I like it. A lot. Please keep up the great work...!