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by Fourthsubset66
Mon Feb 22, 2021 3:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 18
Views: 701

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

After reading up on that, I wish to add to my comment, with a slight apology. While I still feel the description of the OC's chest was other the top, I see that it fits Katawa Shoujo (somewhat). I definitely feel that if you use what has been provided, the story's premise won't seem so far-fetched.
by Fourthsubset66
Thu Feb 18, 2021 8:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 18
Views: 701

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

Another decent chapter, I am really enjoying the positive Hisao. The Hanako scene was super adorable too. I only have a small issue with how you described your OC's...bust. It felt a little bit over the top, for example, each being bigger than her head. I'm sure it was done intentionally but I don't...
by Fourthsubset66
Tue Jan 05, 2021 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Replies: 52
Views: 17058

Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route

I feel like the Miki curse got shifted to Naomi and Natsume. I've been really enjoying this and I hope to see future chapters but I get the feeling this is a dead fic.
by Fourthsubset66
Mon Jan 04, 2021 11:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 273877

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.

I just spent the better part of a week reading this and I was really loving it until the last 2 or 3 chapters. I feel like the story has been dragged out so much that it feels like the past few chapters are just filler. I'm not surprised you have run out of steam for this but would love to see it co...
by Fourthsubset66
Mon Dec 21, 2020 2:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 115
Views: 42062

Re: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019

I absolutely love this. I love everything going on with Suzu and Taro and the feeling of being left behind that Molly has is strangely relatable. Please don't let this die!
by Fourthsubset66
Sun Dec 20, 2020 4:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210215 You And I Both)
Replies: 1902
Views: 362451

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20201207 The Ooe Way—A Natsume Fic)

I feel like this wasn't too bad. Maybe forced in some places so it didn't exactly feel natural but it was enjoyable nonetheless.

I don't think I have seen a completed Natsume or Naomi fic out there though so I can't really compare this to anything :(
by Fourthsubset66
Sun Dec 20, 2020 7:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)
Replies: 1106
Views: 402977

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)

Made an account to mostly just to comment on this. I LOVE IT. The characters feel so alive and I cannot wait to see what comes next. I've been reading so much on here the past 1/2 months and I have stumbled on too many dead projects and I really hope to see this finished. You have also been able to ...