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by Capn-Cold
Mon Nov 30, 2020 2:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route
Replies: 5
Views: 978

Re: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route

explanatory paragraph Yeah that's fair. I'll trim that significantly, methinks. no desc See, I think I was too locked in the headspace of 'if this was an actual route he would have described her in the prior scene and thus it's not needed here', but with hindsight and having it pointed out that mig...
by Capn-Cold
Mon Nov 30, 2020 12:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route
Replies: 5
Views: 978

Re: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route

Wooden Heart (Takes place after Foot and Mouth - Alternate choice to getting supplies.) Much as I’m in need of settling in with something that wasn’t cafeteria food, I really can’t bring myself to head into town. Maybe it was the concept of the route I’d have to take to get there. The hill. The str...
by Capn-Cold
Sun Nov 29, 2020 11:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route
Replies: 5
Views: 978

Re: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route

Invisible Thread (Takes Place after Short Sharp Shock - Hisao, rather than just meandering at lunch and then going to class, ends up going to the Nurses office instead. Follows a slight alter to In the Nursery, in which the end of the conversation is interrupted by Rika arriving to the office - The...
by Capn-Cold
Sun Nov 29, 2020 11:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route
Replies: 5
Views: 978

Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route

So. This is a very large jump from the two one-shots I’ve posted before (and hopefully it'll end me clogging up the recent posts too). What gives, right? I’ve been asking myself that too. See, for a very long while I’ve been in a bit of a downward spiral when it comes to writing. Any sort of writing...
by Capn-Cold
Sat Nov 28, 2020 7:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Where is my Mind? - A Kenji One-Shot
Replies: 3
Views: 612

Re: Where is my Mind? - A Kenji One-Shot

at some points Kenji switches from referring to himself as "I" to "he" Sorry can't hear you I will now be perishing. S i g h. I was pretty sure I'd caught them all, too, but now I absolutely see them. I could chalk it up to Kenji being Kenji and not me being a fool but that would be dishonest. Even...
by Capn-Cold
Sat Nov 28, 2020 5:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 1279

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

just all of that really Ahh, thanks for the critique and overall comments haha. So far I can say that I'm getting something out of this already, even if its just reigniting my ability to write again. Going from a period of having no willpower for writing to suddenly having lots of ideas is a little...
by Capn-Cold
Fri Nov 27, 2020 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Where is my Mind? - A Kenji One-Shot
Replies: 3
Views: 612

Where is my Mind? - A Kenji One-Shot

This one comes from a weird little thought process. See, I get a lot of my prompts for writing through listening to music. Verse pops up, I get an idea, then I store both for later. For whatever reason, this is one of the ideas that popped up in my head. It's about what's going on inside strange lit...
by Capn-Cold
Wed Nov 25, 2020 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 1279

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

That is... Surprisingly obvious advice that I have completely missed before. Thanking you! I will try and keep that in mind for sure.
by Capn-Cold
Wed Nov 25, 2020 12:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 1279

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

As Chatty pointed out, your use of subtle hints at more without going into detail were done quite nicely. That's something I was 50/50 on, so I'm glad it worked out. I figure that actual people don't tend to think of their complete life story whenever they muse on the past, so it's something I want...
by Capn-Cold
Tue Nov 24, 2020 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 1279

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

Ah god, the capitalisation and commas have haunted me haha. To be fair, a significant step up from younger me, who somehow came to the decision that every word needed capitalised :oops: It does slip my mind sometimes though, so definitely thanks to you for bringing it up haha. I really need to keep ...
by Capn-Cold
Tue Nov 24, 2020 12:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 1279

Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

Hey there all. Decided I should finally get off my ass and contribute something, so here’s a little one shot I cooked up while listening to the song mentioned in the title. As a piece, this is a little more focused on trying to get into the vibe of writing KS stuff, so there's a chance it's not as s...
by Capn-Cold
Sun Sep 27, 2020 5:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)
Replies: 1108
Views: 434481

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)

Oh man, having just binge read this; I have NEVER been more disappointed to see something wasn’t finished yet. Genuinely brilliant writing, man; Saki is so Endearing that it’s impossible not to like her, and it does a hell of a job to get you invested. I really like how you’ve portrayed her too; It’...