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by Xeraeo
Sat May 22, 2021 7:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chatty's One-Off Collection (January 31st, 2021 — Cats and Dogs, Snowflakes and Stars)
Replies: 23
Views: 13839

Re: Chatty's One-Off Collection (January 31st, 2021 — Cats and Dogs, Snowflakes and Stars)

Well, I'm rather late, but this was very enjoyable to read. I'll admit I was a little lost at a few points, but learning you were writing it for BristerXD made it make a bit more sense, lol. I'm always a fan of stories that involve people being forced to confront the things they're most afraid of, a...
by Xeraeo
Sat May 22, 2021 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 95
Views: 44048

Obstacles (3-1)

Act 3 - Draw "Did you get to the part about the Ezo Republic yet?" Hitomi's voice behind me pulls me back to reality, and I realize that once again I've lost my concentration on my textbook, letting my thoughts drift to the events of the past couple weeks. Blinking, I quickly check where ...
by Xeraeo
Wed Apr 14, 2021 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 32
Views: 15547

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

If I had to use the phrase "passionate about", perhaps it would apply to TMtM more than Rebound, but not by much. I care about both stories in different ways, I would say. And I've been in a long period of stalled inspiration, as you described. I'm sure I want to complete both stories, and...
by Xeraeo
Tue Apr 13, 2021 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 32
Views: 15547

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Oh, wow, thanks! I've been away for a while and still am right now, but I'm glad people are still interested in these stories. I actually recently came back to Rebound, reading through it again about a week ago and trying to reformulate my ideas for Chapter 10 as well as the future of the overall st...
by Xeraeo
Wed Nov 25, 2020 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 4599

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

Dunno what it is about creative writing, but I seem to stumble on grammar a little more with that than I do in other types of writing. In my experience, since creative writing is primarily right-brain driven, the normal grammar and spelling rules, etc. that you'd think about when writing something ...
by Xeraeo
Wed Nov 25, 2020 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 95
Views: 44048

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Lol, I didn't get a bad impression of you. Just wasn't sure how to respond to it at the time. The more I've come to know you, the more obvious it became that that was an exaggerated response, anyway. I had forgotten about it entirely until Mirage pointed it out. And I'm not sure if it's better for y...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 4599

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

I second Chatty's comments, all of them. I would add that I found the combination of grief and hope to be quite effective. The reveal wasn't a shock, more like a pleasant surprise. I expected this would be only a few years after the events of the VN, maybe 5 or 10, so learning that they had such a l...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 26498

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

Well, to be fair there are some nuances of american culture that elude me as well. In this story specifically it was mentioning certain states like Wyoming... and I think there was another. I'm sure those states have their reputations just like the states of my home country have a reputation for me...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 32
Views: 15547

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Hello Xeraeo! Long time no see, eh? At least here on the Renai, that is! Anyway, I told you at some point in October that I'd get to Rebound at some point, and I'm here today to make good on my word. Let's get cracking... Sup, man! It has been a bit. Glad to be back. Also, Ichika is a sweetheart. S...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 95
Views: 44048

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

she turns and enters the female dorm... I emerge from the male dorm,... Ah, one of my pet peeves. Everytime I read this I have to think of female dorms getting together with male dorms and making many small dormitories... Well, I have this many times throughout the story, lol. It bothers me too, re...
by Xeraeo
Wed Nov 18, 2020 12:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 54
Views: 44967

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Heartwarming. Thanks for this!
by Xeraeo
Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 32
Views: 15547

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Mirage_GSM wrote: Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am So in a way it is a meta solution to a meta problem... Does that cancel out? :wink:
Fair's fair.
Mirage_GSM wrote: Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am I'm considering leaving yours for last ^^°
...fair's fair. :wink:
by Xeraeo
Sun Nov 15, 2020 11:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 32
Views: 15547

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Yes, you made that point in a later chapter - which is good. Way too few fanfics acknowledge how truly shitty Lilly was acting towards Hisao in her route, and I hope that someone is going to get this through to Hisao's thick skull in this one. I tend to be a bit of a Lilly defender here, although I...
by Xeraeo
Sun Nov 15, 2020 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 32
Views: 15547

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Hey, thanks for the welcome, and glad you're enjoying this story! Even though I haven't worked on it in a while, it returns to my mind more often than you'd think, and I am continuing to develop it up there. When exactly I'll actually get back to writing it is another question. Interestingly enough,...
by Xeraeo
Mon Nov 09, 2020 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 26498

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

I also feel that I should comment here, though I've already given my thoughts on the story to BristerXD in private messages. I'm glad to see this story finally posted, and even more glad to see the positive attention it's receiving. You can tell that he's been working on it for a long time, and seei...