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by Xeraeo
Wed Nov 25, 2020 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 886

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

Dunno what it is about creative writing, but I seem to stumble on grammar a little more with that than I do in other types of writing. In my experience, since creative writing is primarily right-brain driven, the normal grammar and spelling rules, etc. that you'd think about when writing something ...
by Xeraeo
Wed Nov 25, 2020 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 11322

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Lol, I didn't get a bad impression of you. Just wasn't sure how to respond to it at the time. The more I've come to know you, the more obvious it became that that was an exaggerated response, anyway. I had forgotten about it entirely until Mirage pointed it out. And I'm not sure if it's better for y...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 886

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

I second Chatty's comments, all of them. I would add that I found the combination of grief and hope to be quite effective. The reveal wasn't a shock, more like a pleasant surprise. I expected this would be only a few years after the events of the VN, maybe 5 or 10, so learning that they had such a l...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 20
Views: 2092

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

Well, to be fair there are some nuances of american culture that elude me as well. In this story specifically it was mentioning certain states like Wyoming... and I think there was another. I'm sure those states have their reputations just like the states of my home country have a reputation for me...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 28
Views: 3723

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Hello Xeraeo! Long time no see, eh? At least here on the Renai, that is! Anyway, I told you at some point in October that I'd get to Rebound at some point, and I'm here today to make good on my word. Let's get cracking... Sup, man! It has been a bit. Glad to be back. Also, Ichika is a sweetheart. S...
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 11322

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

she turns and enters the female dorm... I emerge from the male dorm,... Ah, one of my pet peeves. Everytime I read this I have to think of female dorms getting together with male dorms and making many small dormitories... Well, I have this many times throughout the story, lol. It bothers me too, re...
by Xeraeo
Wed Nov 18, 2020 12:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 54
Views: 11270

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Heartwarming. Thanks for this!
by Xeraeo
Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 28
Views: 3723

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am
So in a way it is a meta solution to a meta problem... Does that cancel out? :wink:
Fair's fair.
Mirage_GSM wrote:
Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am
I'm considering leaving yours for last ^^°
...fair's fair. :wink:
by Xeraeo
Sun Nov 15, 2020 11:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 28
Views: 3723

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Yes, you made that point in a later chapter - which is good. Way too few fanfics acknowledge how truly shitty Lilly was acting towards Hisao in her route, and I hope that someone is going to get this through to Hisao's thick skull in this one. I tend to be a bit of a Lilly defender here, although I...
by Xeraeo
Sun Nov 15, 2020 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 28
Views: 3723

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

Hey, thanks for the welcome, and glad you're enjoying this story! Even though I haven't worked on it in a while, it returns to my mind more often than you'd think, and I am continuing to develop it up there. When exactly I'll actually get back to writing it is another question. Interestingly enough,...
by Xeraeo
Mon Nov 09, 2020 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 20
Views: 2092

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

I also feel that I should comment here, though I've already given my thoughts on the story to BristerXD in private messages. I'm glad to see this story finally posted, and even more glad to see the positive attention it's receiving. You can tell that he's been working on it for a long time, and seei...
by Xeraeo
Thu Nov 05, 2020 1:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 11322

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

No no, nothing to regret. It certainly was a bit contrived, and I'm grateful that you're confirming that to me. It's hard to tell which mistakes or weaknesses in the writing are just in my head, and which are real, and the best way to know is when you guys tell me you noticed it as well. Thanks!
by Xeraeo
Tue Nov 03, 2020 1:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 11322

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Alright, quick update since it's been a while. I've had a bit of a bad month, but that shouldn't have kept me from writing the way it did. After finishing Act 2, I fully intended to take a break for only a week or so and then get right back into it, but it was not to be. Somewhere along the line, I ...
by Xeraeo
Thu Oct 15, 2020 1:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 14/2/21)
Replies: 19
Views: 3711

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/10/20)

At last! Been waiting for this for a while now, Detective. Good chapter, all in all. I was glad to learn more about Mr. Tatsunagi, although I'll admit I expected something more mysterious than a divorce. That answer makes a lot more sense though, and fits what you seem to be going for with the vario...
by Xeraeo
Wed Oct 14, 2020 12:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 11322

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Thanks, Razor! Glad to hear you're enjoying it.