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- Wed Mar 18, 2020 7:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
- Replies: 44
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I liked the writing here! You did a great job of focusing on awkward emotions and conflicts, and I especially liked the dissonance conveyed in the line, "I finish exactly when I see all of that emptiness in her eyes." I don't know much about Saki's character yet, but I think you definitely have a go...