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by PsychicSpy
Mon Nov 18, 2019 12:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)
Replies: 11
Views: 444

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/13/19 Update)

Thank you both for your feedback. Always appreciated. Personally, I felt that the first few scenes were necessary for exposition, though I agree that they could have been left out. To me, the scenes make more sense in, and allow a reader to settle into the story. This is my new story which is most c...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 15, 2019 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 11/13/19)
Replies: 61
Views: 7279

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 11/13/19)

Hisao started to say something stupid and Shizune clapped her hand over his mouth just in time. The little lovers were so entwined that they hadn’t noticed a thing. Shizune preferred to keep it that way, in no way shape or form did she want to deal with this. She carefully closed the door and stepp...
by PsychicSpy
Wed Nov 13, 2019 12:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)
Replies: 11
Views: 444

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/13/19 Update)

Thank you guys for the awesome feedback. This forum has great people on it, and all your comments are always appreciated. This fiction is a more comedic piece featuring Emi, Rin, and Hisao. Takes place post-Emi good ending. Thank you so much to StilesLong and KCK for proofreading! Enjoy and feel fr...
by PsychicSpy
Sat Nov 09, 2019 11:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saturday in the Garden with Emi
Replies: 5
Views: 170

Re: Saturday in the Garden with Emi

I love the story. Really good take on the prompt. Very heartwarming!
by PsychicSpy
Sat Nov 09, 2019 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)
Replies: 11
Views: 444

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Thank you so much for the kind words. I chose to use the flashback because I thought the story would fit better if Hanako was already upset. This story was already aimed to be a little more tragic, but replaying parts of Shizune's route, I found that the idea had no canon basis. Maybe that's why I f...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 08, 2019 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)
Replies: 11
Views: 444

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

You've got a good premise going. The unusual friendship of a Misha-Hanako relationship is a compelling dynamic to explore. However, the piece seems to be too short to use the flashback effectively. It could improved, pacing-wise, if it were removed. Best wishes and, again, welcome. Thank you for th...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 08, 2019 12:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 11/13/19)
Replies: 61
Views: 7279

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 10/26/19)

The story was a good one, and was a very interesting take on the prompt. I wasn't sure how you were going to pull off the Mutou/Shizune aspect of the prompt but it was done really well.

In regards to your Evil Lilly stories, I hope to see more installments in that series in the future!
by PsychicSpy
Fri Nov 08, 2019 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)
Replies: 11
Views: 444

PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/18/19 Update)

Thank y'all so much for all the great feedback! I've decided to turn this into my oneshot thread. Some of these will be dramatic or sad, while others will be more comedic. I'll let you know in the Index. On this post is my first fanfiction for KS called I'm Here for You, and others will be posted a...