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by PsychicSpy
Fri Feb 14, 2020 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 29
Views: 1306

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Cute chapters, quite enjoyed them. Excited to see what's next. Bonus Content - Hisao and Hanako's Chess Game Then you can step through the game at your leisure and analyse all the blunders and inaccuracies that only two chess beginners can make. Damn man, you really had to do them like that ? :lol:
by PsychicSpy
Fri Feb 07, 2020 2:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/3/20--Contest Fic "The Last Stand")
Replies: 69
Views: 9290

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/3/20--Contest Fic "The Last Stand")

Jeez man, Lilly can't catch a break. It was an interesting concept. The video thing was a nice shock twist, but I don't know how I feel about this. I know you were writing a meme, but it was just kinda standard at this point. I feel your pain about the pairings (mine weren't great either). Technical...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Feb 03, 2020 10:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (2/4/19 Update)
Replies: 25
Views: 1494

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (1/13/19 Update)

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this f...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Feb 03, 2020 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 37
Views: 2046

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

I enjoyed this. Very intriguing to me, had me checking back in earlier paragraphs to see what had changed and what hadn't changed.

SPaG errors, as pointed out earlier, but other than that, nice work!
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 28, 2020 3:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/2/2020)
Replies: 21
Views: 2291

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/1/2020)

Aww. I really have enjoyed LR so far, and I like the inclusion of Hanako into the group. I'm also interested to see how the situation around Rin and Hisao's condition plays out. I'm glad I got to proofread this, so you've gotten most of my comments already, but I felt it would be good to comment on ...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 28, 2020 3:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 29
Views: 1306

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

PsychicSpy is very perceptive. Almost ... too perceptive. Are you some kind of spy? A ... psychic spy? Funny you mention Kenji, I think I pulled the username from a Kenji line in For Want of a Nail (even though I don't like Kenji). But onto your most recent batch of chapters. First off, I really li...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 21, 2020 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 29
Views: 1306

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

As far as chapter 3 goes, I like the way you went with it. Everyone's feeling kinda shitty, but still trying to repent. Choosing Bluebells as the flower of choice was pretty good. I liked chapter four better. I think it did better character development honestly. I think that the Rin and Emi exchange...
by PsychicSpy
Sun Jan 19, 2020 6:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [01/05/2019]
Replies: 72
Views: 5729

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [01/05/2019]

Whew, that was a doozy. A lot of feels in a few sittings. I promised a review, so I figured I would go ahead and type it out. I'll take your stories one by one, outside of 8 years, which I have already reviewed and the contest entries. Ekephrasis Interesting take. The reader is pleasantly surprised ...
by PsychicSpy
Sun Jan 19, 2020 1:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 46
Views: 3357

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)

Wow. Since I've joined the community, I've heard a lot about Riposte. Now that I've read it and thought about it, I figured I would share my thoughts. I will say: Rika is unlikable in the early chapters. Kinda a dickhead, but if I'm being honest, I have dated a Rika. Personally, I ended up wounded f...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Jan 17, 2020 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2435

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Not going to hold you, I've been waiting for this story to be posted. This is probably the best story from you Nuke. The discord had a conversation about attributing things to authors outside their intent if they don't state it. So I'd say the thing that this story draws me because I can't tell if w...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 14, 2020 5:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 29
Views: 1306

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

This story looks really promising. I did feel that the possibility of a stress induced attack from this may have been possible, and It's cool to see somebody pick up the mantle of making that happen.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 14, 2020 5:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 205
Views: 67807

Re: Shower Scenes

Have you ever heard the tale of Darth Hisao the Well-Endowed?

So this is the famous Shower Scenes story. Glad I got the chance to read it, because I really enjoyed it.

The "Ask Misha Now" is the best ending. Don't @ me
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (2/4/19 Update)
Replies: 25
Views: 1494

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (1/13/19 Update)

Didn't you state that him and Emi were together and got married shortly after school? I'm just curious as to when him and Miki starting seeing each other here. Damn, you caught me. I guess I didn't think about that; though maybe it happens off screen. While I don't agree with the notion that Emi go...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (2/4/19 Update)
Replies: 25
Views: 1494

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (12/31/19 Update)

I was worried for a second there that I was reading some kind of Mishadacium! Instead I see this as the introduction to a Shizune-Misha variant of Home. What would it be called I wonder? Domicile? The Hakamichi Residence? :?: Hmm, that gives me some ideas... maybe this won't be the last we hear of ...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Please Don't Pass Me By (Lilly x OC)
Replies: 9
Views: 306

Re: Please Don't Pass Me By (Lilly x OC)

Glad to see somebody doing Lilly in a prequel fashion (And a good fashion). I'm excited to see where it goes. Lilly was always one or my preferred routes, and sometimes I feel like she doesn't get enough love. I would have preferred some parts to be broken up into smaller chunks, but that's really m...