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by PsychicSpy
Mon Jun 08, 2020 3:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 2944

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. I'll tell you about the pairing post story, so that nothing is spoiled! Please enjoy. Note: for the fu...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [04/26/2020]
Replies: 93
Views: 9245

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [02/18/2020]

I was waiting for Crafty and Lance to post comments... they tell me they are, but I suppose I'll respond to those if/when they're done :P I know I've been promising my feedback for a long time, and that's my fault. Obviously, Feurox should find a new and better friend (but plz don't) Wow. This stor...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Mar 16, 2020 12:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 2944

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (3/15/20 Update)

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. I chose Rika x Miki and the place as a "competition" Enjoy! YAMAKU GO! Rika smirked as she laid the fi...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Mar 09, 2020 2:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3866

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Anyways more onto a review. I think this was pretty good. I liked the concept; the idea of kinda an emotionless blowjob that might come from a place where they are trying to mend from what happened soon before is a story thread you don't often see. It's a very Nuke thing to write, and I like it. You...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Mar 02, 2020 1:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 2944

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (3/2/20 Update)

Thank you both for your kind words! They are very much appreciated! Been working on this one for a while, hopefully with no grammar errors. Dedicated to a certain someone who said there isn't enough Misha. Enjoy! MUTUAL FINISH Hisao glanced up at the clock above the blackboard. The last few minutes ...
by PsychicSpy
Wed Feb 26, 2020 6:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Please Don't Pass Me By (Lilly x OC)
Replies: 18
Views: 1308

Re: Please Don't Pass Me By (Lilly x OC)

Initial thoughts: I like it. It was a nice little friendship building scene imo. There are some places where you chose words that I would not have chosen. As far as I know though, you have a good grasp on proper grammar, so I'm going to boil that down to a stylistic choice rather than an error. I th...
by PsychicSpy
Fri Feb 14, 2020 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation (complete)
Replies: 42
Views: 3859

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Cute chapters, quite enjoyed them. Excited to see what's next. Bonus Content - Hisao and Hanako's Chess Game Then you can step through the game at your leisure and analyse all the blunders and inaccuracies that only two chess beginners can make. Damn man, you really had to do them like that ? :lol:
by PsychicSpy
Fri Feb 07, 2020 2:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (4/26/20--Contest Fic "A Lighter Touch")
Replies: 73
Views: 12952

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/3/20--Contest Fic "The Last Stand")

Jeez man, Lilly can't catch a break. It was an interesting concept. The video thing was a nice shock twist, but I don't know how I feel about this. I know you were writing a meme, but it was just kinda standard at this point. I feel your pain about the pairings (mine weren't great either). Technical...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Feb 03, 2020 10:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (6/8/20 Update)
Replies: 30
Views: 2944

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (1/13/19 Update)

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this f...
by PsychicSpy
Mon Feb 03, 2020 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3866

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

I enjoyed this. Very intriguing to me, had me checking back in earlier paragraphs to see what had changed and what hadn't changed.

SPaG errors, as pointed out earlier, but other than that, nice work!
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 28, 2020 3:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/4/2020)
Replies: 29
Views: 4126

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/1/2020)

Aww. I really have enjoyed LR so far, and I like the inclusion of Hanako into the group. I'm also interested to see how the situation around Rin and Hisao's condition plays out. I'm glad I got to proofread this, so you've gotten most of my comments already, but I felt it would be good to comment on ...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 28, 2020 3:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation (complete)
Replies: 42
Views: 3859

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

PsychicSpy is very perceptive. Almost ... too perceptive. Are you some kind of spy? A ... psychic spy? Funny you mention Kenji, I think I pulled the username from a Kenji line in For Want of a Nail (even though I don't like Kenji). But onto your most recent batch of chapters. First off, I really li...
by PsychicSpy
Tue Jan 21, 2020 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation (complete)
Replies: 42
Views: 3859

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

As far as chapter 3 goes, I like the way you went with it. Everyone's feeling kinda shitty, but still trying to repent. Choosing Bluebells as the flower of choice was pretty good. I liked chapter four better. I think it did better character development honestly. I think that the Rin and Emi exchange...
by PsychicSpy
Sun Jan 19, 2020 6:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [04/26/2020]
Replies: 93
Views: 9245

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [01/05/2019]

Whew, that was a doozy. A lot of feels in a few sittings. I promised a review, so I figured I would go ahead and type it out. I'll take your stories one by one, outside of 8 years, which I have already reviewed and the contest entries. Ekephrasis Interesting take. The reader is pleasantly surprised ...
by PsychicSpy
Sun Jan 19, 2020 1:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 46
Views: 5125

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)

Wow. Since I've joined the community, I've heard a lot about Riposte. Now that I've read it and thought about it, I figured I would share my thoughts. I will say: Rika is unlikable in the early chapters. Kinda a dickhead, but if I'm being honest, I have dated a Rika. Personally, I ended up wounded f...