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by Talmar
Wed Jan 31, 2024 12:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Again, thank you for reading my work, guys. Oh hey, last-minute proofreading from the Cook. There are still a couple points of punctuation wrong. :p the bottle,… this, all.Shoot. She furrow her brows Fuck Google Docs. ... aaand fixed. Thanks. Something wrong with the sequence of this dialogue (short...
by Talmar
Thu Jan 25, 2024 5:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Okay. I'm sorry for being absent for half a year. I've just gone through the most chaotic few months of my life. Graduation ceremony, less than successful job hunting, moving houses across the fucking ocean, to name a few. And as the result, the first draft of this chapter became what is the worst I...
by Talmar
Thu Sep 28, 2023 6:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap
Replies: 13
Views: 8140

Re: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap

Intense ... does not cut it. Amidst the fun of the everyday that I saw as I read through this, there's a constant underlying presence of unease, a ticking time bomb waiting to explode. Between Ritsu and Haru, it's the marriage thing. Poor Lezard got the short end of the stick for that; no doubt this...
by Talmar
Mon Aug 21, 2023 12:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Crunching down the downtime now that the BIG chapter's out of the way. Surprisingly, I got stuck on the proofreading part more than the writing part in this one, even when it's less dense - primarily because everyone else is busy with their own lives. So yes, you're right, Asoko. Things are getting ...
by Talmar
Fri Jun 23, 2023 4:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

I watch the meat sizzle and smoke on the grill, restarted by yours truly, as the others talk on and on, me clearly left out. I don’t mind though, as I’m left to ponder over my thoughts, plans for tomorrow, and what to do as I occasionally remove cooked cuts and slices and distribute them among us fo...
by Talmar
Fri Jun 23, 2023 4:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

I'm back! I'm back. It's been a couple of few months, and boy, a lot of things changed. I graduated! Bachelor's Degree in Biotech. One step forward to my life mission. However, that came with a couple of misfortunes: job hunting has been a major nuisance, and I may have to move out of my rented home...
by Talmar
Tue Nov 22, 2022 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Hello, hello! It's been, over a year, I think, since the last chapter update. As I posted earlier - apparently, because I don't remember that; I'll chalk up to holes in my memory to this thing in my head - I'm slowly but progressively learning on how to circumvent the obstacles Lady Fortune has curs...
by Talmar
Sat Aug 28, 2021 9:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Okay, just to bump this up for the first time in months. I'd like to open with a massive apology. I'm really, really sorry I haven't uploaded in a very long while. Especially you, Wheeler. I'll get to fixing the errors and typos, and I'd just mention that your deduction is as always on point with wh...
by Talmar
Thu Mar 18, 2021 11:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

I'm back! Back again! I made a promise to upload this within the duration of my semester break, and with three days left - and I still hadn't registered for my classes due to a combination of eczema flare-ups, headaches that never stop, and amnesia, - I managed to get this through the proofreading c...
by Talmar
Fri Feb 12, 2021 2:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Okay, managed to eke in this reply in the middle of the chaotic hellscape that is my university's 1-month long exam season. Again, thank you for reading, especially you Wheeler! First I must apologize for no Scene 10 for now - again, literal hellscape all through February with no promise it'll end b...
by Talmar
Fri Jan 08, 2021 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! Boy, university really trying to grill my ass with assignments. Literally. Really, really sorry about the loooong period of silence, but here we are! I had this scene proofread almost immediately after the last one was posted, I think, but yeah, university decides...
by Talmar
Sun Nov 22, 2020 12:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Falling Up and Down: A Rin's After Story (Updated : 14/11/2019)
Replies: 10
Views: 9733

Re: Falling Up and Down: A Rin's After Story (Updated : 14/11/2019)

Heyyyy, I'm finally here, after god knows how long has it been. And after beta-ing the second chapter, I got to read the whole thing! For one, it's pretty solid, although I share Oddball's opinion on the multiple narrators thing. Although that's mostly due to me and being unable to keep more than on...
by Talmar
Sat Oct 03, 2020 8:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

***** When we walk into the classroom, Shizune looks at me and my unexpected company with a very obvious curiosity, going so far as to look at us above the rims of her glasses with an appreciative smile. Misha too seems excited, her eyes wide. I can’t help but raise an eyebrow as we pass by and quie...
by Talmar
Sat Oct 03, 2020 8:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

Man, this whole COVID-19 thing is going a wee bit long, innit? Well, on my end things are recovering, somewhat, and college has been starting up so I've been a wee bit busy as of late. Not to mention I've also been trying to take motorcycle driving classes. So, aye, apologies for the slow delay. And...
by Talmar
Thu Jul 23, 2020 5:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 34960

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

***** I put the cup of instant noodles on the counter, and press the activate button on the electric water heater. The pantry of this building I’ll be living in took me some time to find; someone in the common room pointed out it’s opposite of the laundry, but I had no idea where the laundry room wa...