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That is actually why I discontinued the story in the first place, and your criticism is pretty much on point on what I noticed in the story as well. I plan to perhaps continue this story at some point in the future but it will be completely rewritten and will be focused a lot more on KS rather than ...

Special Thank you as always to: Mirage_GSM, Psychicspy, and Talmar for Betaing and Proofreading the story. Can't do this without you guys. Year 0 CHAPTER 2 - WHO ARE YOU? HISAO Cold air breezes through my window, making the white curtains in my room slowly sway back and forth as I stare at them fro...

Nice story. One thing that I found strange was that the theatre troupe went to the trouble of printing flyers in braille but not providing an option for audio commentary. I'd hate to be the one sitting next to those two :-) Yeah... I kinda had to trim up a lot of the details about the play itself s...

Procrastinated Really hard so my post got pushed a few days late. I tried my best and I hope you all enjoy this, especially you Brythain. Victim : brythain Prompt : dramatic performance in winter, with the theme of shadow-play AN UNSEEN PLAY The story of Ramayana. A five thousand years old epic orig...

Yeah, kinda realized that too at some point. I'll leave the story for what it is and hopefully develop the parents a lot more in Falling Up and Down. Thank you for the feedback.

Thank you to Mirage_GSM for proofreading this chapter. RIN Worms, Clock, Clouds, University. No... Can’t be thinking of that, so please go away. Something else... Something else that’s nice to think about. Maybe the ones that aren’t nice to think about will be fine too. Just anything but that. Not t...

Thank you to Mirage_GSM for proofreading as always. EMI “One more lap come on, just a little bit more!” I turn around and start running backward in order to catch a glimpse at my running partner who is currently wheezing his way through the track. The thought of running ahead of him to gain a few mo...

Yeah, might have gotten a little overboard on the characterization department, but I guess what's done is done . I was trying out something new and starting off with a character with zero perspective on the matter couldve been interesting, thats mainly why I did it.

Special thank you to Mirage_GSM for pre-reading and Proofreading the story. Year 0: Opportunities Chapter 1 – Our Wants HISAO *tick* *tick* *tick* *tick* I swear whoever decided to make the ticking of that clock so loud needs to be put in jail for... something, I don’t know. We’re already nervous en...

A special thank you to Mirage_GSM for pre-reading, and proofreading. Can't do this without you bud. A little note: Had a stroke of inspiration while I was doing some college work the other day and this story has been brewing in my mind for a good while now. This story is mainly focused on Emi and Ri...

Really enjoying the story and i'm super curious how this story will go. Will keep following this story, hopefully to its completion. You did an excellent job here.

Right, it's not even that it's bad, i'm just very critical of myself and i'm not happy with how it currently is. I'll just make an announcement in the opening post and update the actual story when it's fully rewritten into a satisfactory state.

Hello to everyone reading or following this post. I have decided to discontinue this story and rewrite most of it including the drafts i have since the current state of the story no longer reflects both the quality and the message im trying to achieve by writing this story. This story is made on a w...

First of all, I want to give my thanks and gratitude to Mirage_GSM for proofreading and beta reading this story, thank you so much for that, you have really helped me write better. About this story; Have you ever wondered what Rin was like when she first attended Yamaku? About her parents? Maybe her...

Such is the problem with adapting an obscure game i suppose. The concept is quite vague and even i myself isn't very clear since the game doesn't explain it too well, but it isn't exactly traditional fate story. Speaking of which, if you are still up for it i'll take you up on your offer as a proofr...