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by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Sep 13, 2022 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch63@18/8/22: Most unpredictable Fanfic Ever?]

Indeed. This chapter was quite Rintense...or perhaps Rintensive? Admittedly, while I've struggled somewhat with reading the early parts of this story -- I think I've read up through somewhere in the mid-20s chapter-wise -- I did enjoy your portrayal of Rin here. Being a card-carrying Rinfidel (if y...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Sep 13, 2022 4:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch63@18/8/22: Most unpredictable Fanfic Ever?]

dewelar wrote:
Fri Sep 09, 2022 11:32 pm
ShizuneFan2019 wrote:
Fri Mar 20, 2020 12:25 am
Chapter 65: Air Wind Ground Track
This could be Quite Interesting...
I'll go through it One More Time Round and make the reference when the chapter comes out.
60 Chapters Will Not Hold (me) Back!
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Sep 13, 2022 4:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch63@18/8/22: Most unpredictable Fanfic Ever?]

Chapter 64: Rinsanity! Striding at an almost running pace, I set off from home towards my intended destination when my eyes meet a familiar figure. “Blue.” It's really been some time! Despite us now living in the same city, we've never come across with each other. Which is not unusual, considering ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Aug 19, 2022 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch62 @ 12 May 2022; Back to writing!!]

Chapter 63: A Musical Date “Ding-dong!” The receptionist opens the door for me, and I step into my working place with a mixed feeling of excitement and anxiety. Walking past the classrooms, I arrive at the Commons and head straight to my locker. I’ve a pretty busy schedule today, so I’d better prep...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed May 11, 2022 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch61 @ 25 Apr 2022: What a surprise!!]

Chapter 62: Breaking Even Mmm… *Yawn* The beautiful cello sound playing on my cell phone wakes me up from slumber. What time is it? It’s four in the morning. Great! I didn’t sleep through the morning! This means I’ll be able to start year 2009 by watching the first sunrise of the year on the roof! ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sun Apr 24, 2022 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch60 @ 20 Apr 2022: Finally!!]

Chapter 61: Day of Despair I head upstairs to reach my destination for the night: The roof. Thankfully, the door at the top isn’t locked, but there’s a handwritten sign on it: OFF LIMITS The rooftop looks deserted, as expected. Near a place where the cyclone fence has collapsed, there is a pile of ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Apr 20, 2022 4:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch59 @ 15 Jan 2022; Ch60 postponed]

Chapter 60: Ocean Park HURRAY~~ “Do you really want to take the seats at the back? I’d say we wait for the next ride.” [We’re not afraid, are we, Misha?] [“O-Of c-c-course we’re not afraid~! Wahahahaha!!!”] “Look at you, both your voice and hands are shaking!” [“N-No~~! I’m just excited f-for the r...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Mar 14, 2022 4:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 1897

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

Hey there. Thanks for answering my questions! I usually can't afford to read too much of others' work due to my tight schedule and writing my own work, but it's always nice to read once in a while to get new inspirations and learn in general. And from your reply I've also learned, adding some more d...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Mar 14, 2022 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Story of Miyu Nakai
Replies: 1
Views: 557

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Story of Miyu Nakai

Hey there.
I haven't finished reading the story, but I've already encountered quite a lot of grammar mistakes. Would you please run a grammar check and fix them? Because they look very annoying. Thanks.
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Mar 11, 2022 4:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 1897

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

Hey there, I also commented in your previous work. Since you wrote about my favorite character, I need to be more critical! ...just joking. I find it pretty well-written. I can feel that we do share a lot of similarities when writing about Shizune. An example would be what you said about "learning l...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jan 15, 2022 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/4/2022)
Replies: 55
Views: 21293

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/10/2021)

Hey it's me again. I knew there was a new chapter in October, but I couldn't find a time to read it until today. Great work. I'll definitely read the whole thing again when I have the time! If your story is ending soon, then it will be pretty disappointing! I'd like to see a part two! Some statistic...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jan 15, 2022 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)
Replies: 11
Views: 2190

Re: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)

Coming across your work after finishing my latest chapter. Great work! A few minor grammar mistakes, but overall very nice. Typically when I read stories, I pay attention to the tiny points, and I can pinpoint some "gems" in your work: "white knight", "sprint" and "relay race", "grave" and "buried f...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jan 15, 2022 3:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch58 updated 22/10; Ch59 resumes writing!!]

Chapter 59: Top of the World “I tell you, Alvin, you’re the best. How are you always able to locate these secret gardens? I’m so impressed!” “Haha, you can say I’ve developed a special interest in secret parks. I hate crowded places. I seldom go to, say, countdown events for the New Year, or shoppi...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Oct 22, 2021 11:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch57 updated 24/8; Ch58&59 @22/10 no more extension!]

Chapter 58: Arrhythmia and Two Couples Arrhythmia. What a strange word to add to my list of vocabulary. You become like an old man for the rest of your life, regardless of your age. You cannot play soccer or basketball, or any kind of contact sport. Every fifteen minutes of walking you need to take...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Aug 24, 2021 6:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]
Replies: 85
Views: 30023

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch56 updated 20/7; Ch57 @ Paralympics]

Chapter 57: Elementary Error *Yawn* I stretch my arms and legs on the comfy hotel bed that I’m sleeping on. What a nice sleep! I’m feeling so energetic right now! Where are my glasses? Hmm… Found them, here they are, on the dresser. My wristwatch is here too. 6:02 am. Good morning, Hong Kong. I’m g...