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by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Mar 20, 2024 2:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17495

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]

As for everything noted here, I'll try to respond point to point. 1: All members are present and accounted for. Takumi has a slimmer build and longer hair than usual. He's on the right next to Shin. Though this image's depiction of him does have slightly longer hair than I would've gone with. 2: Po...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Mar 13, 2024 2:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17495

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]

Great to see an update! As I mentioned before, I find your handling of the reunion pretty interesting. Please kindly allow me to reference your work in mine, especially on the BY high school friends part. Edit: Potential error in the Karaoke picture. There should be 3 boys (Shin, Takumi, Hisao) and ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Jan 19, 2024 3:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch13@12/7/23]

To be fair, starting reading this I haven't expected much. Your Maturity for me is questionable at best, but I always give authors benefit of the doubt. And I glad I read this. Your writing and plot construction is heavily improved over course of this thread. Thank you so much for the response! Whi...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Oct 17, 2023 4:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17495

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 2 April 28th, 2023]

Hey there! I've read your comment and your new chapter earlier, but real life events has slowed everything down. Your way of handling Hisao's reunion is interesting. I'll wait until you elaborate further his relationship with his old school friends in your next chapter before making more comments. A...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jun 10, 2023 5:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17495

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 2 April 28th, 2023]

Hey there! Earlier I've promised to take a look at your story. But I was too busy completing the remainder of my work (finally done, by the way). Finally have a chance to sit down and enjoy the read. As mentioned before, you put a great deal of effort into it. I like your story in general, and I'm l...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue May 09, 2023 1:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch74+75+Epilogue@6/5/23: Part 2 Complete!!]

It has been more than three years since I posted my first chapter, and the story has finally completed! I still can't believe I made it through! Even though I never doubted my ability to complete this project, periods of heavy schedule plus unexpected events in life made progression really hard, and...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue May 09, 2023 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch74@5/5/23: Finale is coming!!]

<bracketed stuff> Look, I understand that what you're trying to do is being considerate to your readers. You want to provide them with clarification, or in the latest post, with a warning against content they might find objectionable. But... <speedbump!> Felt that? That's what it feels like when pr...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat May 06, 2023 6:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch74+75@5/5/23:The Finale!!]

Part 2 Epilogue: Oh My Friends! The door opens, and the middle-aged man comes in with a pile of papers. I give him an intense stare. They must be what I think they are. He sits down behind the computer, puts down his briefcase, sorts out his pile of papers, looks up, and turns on the microphone. I ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat May 06, 2023 1:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch74@5/5/23: Finale is coming!!]

Chapter 75: The Finale Memory #108: Standing on the glass surface of the 58th floor of the 338m Macau Tower with you, watching all the casinos and the slot machines below, I feel like I’m on the top of the world right now. I’m sure you were feeling the same. Now that the last piece of memory is don...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri May 05, 2023 5:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch73@29/4/23: Sisterhood extension!!]

Chapter 74: Driving me Crazy! Year 2009 Month 04 Day 21 Running out of pink ink, I let out a sigh, put on the cap of my pen, and close my journal. I’ll have to visit the supermarket if I want to continue writing~~ I don’t usually write diaries, but I think it is worthwhile to write down everything ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Apr 28, 2023 10:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch72@14/4/23: Miki in love?]

Chapter 73: My Entrance Ceremony “You’re looking fine, don’t worry.” “A-are you s-sure?” “Affirmative. Now put away your mirror.” “O-okay.” Obeying my sister’s request, I open my bag to put the mirror into the top inner pocket, anticipating that I might need it again soon. But before doing that, I ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Apr 14, 2023 3:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch71@11/3/23: Read this if you like Sisterhood!!]

Chapter 72: The Battle Begins Ding-dong! “Yes, comin’!” After making sure everything’s set up properly, my roommate and I approach the door together to welcome our three guests. “Hello!!” “Sup?” We exchange trademark high-fives with our guests as a gesture of warm welcome. Haru, Yukio, and, last bu...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Mar 11, 2023 7:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 103339

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch70@24/2/23: Surprise visit!]

Chapter 71: Change of Surname *Cluck* *Glug glug* *Ah~~~~* Man, this hits the spot! Yup. A beer a day keeps the troubles away. This is always going to be my personal motto. With just one dose of beer, you temporary forget about all the pressure from work and from facing the folks. Beer, hands-down ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Mar 08, 2023 3:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17495

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 1: 2/13/23]

Thanks! I haven't had the opportunity to read your's just yet, but it has been on my radar and I do plan to eventually. Will do. Currently I have Scenes 2-7 drafted up (and am working on 8 ), but most of them still need plenty of editing so it'll take some time to get them out, but that's fine with...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Feb 24, 2023 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17495

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 1: 2/13/23]

Hey there! What you said about "want to improve my writing capabilities as a whole" strikes me, as this is exactly the same reason I'm writing my own work . I wish you success in your writing. I'm not going to read your story just now, since I'm busy writing; but I'll start reading when yo...