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by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Apr 02, 2020 2:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 30 Mar 2020)

Chapter 9: Amazing School This is the second time I travel by train with my two best friends. We got up before sunrise, boarded the train on time, and had Shizune-style breakfast in the train. Eager to take a break from studies, we decided to just chat in the train. The use of sign language, combin...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Apr 02, 2020 2:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 30 Mar 2020)

Chapter 8: Interrupt Her Nonsense I’m happy that lunch provided me with a much-needed distraction from my problems. At least I’m finally able to truly smile since the day Misha and I made that mistake. Lunch with Miki, Yukio, Haru, and Suzu was awesome. I enjoyed listening to their banters, and whe...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Mar 30, 2020 4:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Chapter 7: Risking My Life Luckily I’ve brought myself lunch for today. I love fried food, but I wanna try something new today, so I cooked myself some vegetables instead. I’ve got to stay healthy. The past few days have been draining, and I didn’t get much sleep. Let’s eat before the food gets col...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Mar 30, 2020 4:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Chapter 6: Two White Envelopes It’s getting really cold at this time of the year, yet I’m getting out of my dorm room this late in the evening. Picking up my coat, I lock my door and head towards the academic building, where I’m supposed to meet Misha. I called her in the evening, asking if I can t...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Mar 26, 2020 4:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

On the subject of the story itself, I personally believe that chapter one was unnecessary and undesirable. This is a story; we don't need to be told everything through exposition. The second chapter has a similar flaw: it involves a lot of Mutou dishing out a speech. Try lightening up, leaving a li...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Mar 26, 2020 4:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

The table of contents is interesting. Normally I'd say not to include something like that, as you don't want to give away what's happening and you also want to leave yourself room for the story to grow and change on you, but the very fact that you do give us some titles (not all) does also make for...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Mar 26, 2020 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Chapter 5: A Different Vibe I rarely visit the sports field. It’s not so much because I rejected the Nurse’s orders to run with Emi, but more because I simply don’t like running. I feel a little better after talking to Misha. I’ve known her a little better now. If we join forces, we might be able t...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Mar 26, 2020 4:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Chapter 4: Jerks Work. More work. This form goes into this stack. That pile is done. Alright. Let’s print them out. The candidates list, and the election form. Aoi. Keiko. They seem to be the best candidates. But they’re still way too weak. If they get elected, I need to teach them a lesson before ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Mar 24, 2020 6:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Chapter 3: Be Honest When I open the door and enter The Shanghai, a familiar figure hurryingly comes to greet me. “Welcome to the Shanghai!” Followed by a bow that is probably more than 120 degrees. However, I’m not in a mood of any greeting, so I just nod and head towards the table Misha already o...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Mar 24, 2020 6:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Chapter 2: Read Like a Book As I enter the classroom, I see my pink-haired friend staring at the blackboard on her seat, looking quite depressed. The seat next to her on the right is empty, as expected. I need to act smartly. I carefully take my own seat, and whisper to her. “Hi Misha.” She just no...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Mar 20, 2020 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)
Replies: 14
Views: 377

Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 2 Apr 2020)

My second fan story attempt, after my previous work (which was admittedly unpolished :( ). After a devastating fallout with Shizune, Hisao finally "wakes up" and realizes his mistakes. Is there any way to make amends, or is it all over? Note: Follows Shizune's bad end. The story (mostly the first pa...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Sep 12, 2019 5:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 2047

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Updated 29 Aug 2019)

Epilogue (Path D): Full Satisfaction (Erotic) 2-14 Time surely flies. I lie down on the comfortable king-sized bed in my underwear. I close my eyes. I can’t help but think back on everything happened in the past ten years. It all started with that fateful snowy encounter. The accident that changed ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Sep 12, 2019 4:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 2047

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Updated 29 Aug 2019)

Chapter 7 (Path D): Reunion (D) 1-14 It’s been quite a while since I last visited this place. The lush greenery of the school grounds, the tree-lined walkway to the main building, and students wearing Yamaku uniforms, all bring up a feeling of nostalgia. Students are making final preparations on th...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Sep 12, 2019 4:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 2047

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Updated 29 Aug 2019)

Chapter 6 (Path D): Reflection 1-13 As I come out of the bathroom, my hair dried and face washed, I turn off the lights and go to the bedroom, where my Physics lab report has been waiting me for. The curtains are mostly closed. Moonlight shines into the room through the gap I intentionally leave ou...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Sep 12, 2019 4:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 2047

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Updated 29 Aug 2019)

Chapter 5 (Path D): Troublesome Women None Women are so troublesome. I broke up with Shizune. A week ago, we were lovers to the uttermost. Now the love has broken up into pieces. I don’t like women. They are not worth the trouble at all. “Riiiiiiing Riiiiiiing, Riiiiiiing Riiiiiiing” My phone sudde...