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by ShizuneFan2019
Sun Apr 24, 2022 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch60 @ 20 Apr 2022: Finally!!]

Chapter 61: Day of Despair I head upstairs to reach my destination for the night: The roof. Thankfully, the door at the top isn’t locked, but there’s a handwritten sign on it: OFF LIMITS The rooftop looks deserted, as expected. Near a place where the cyclone fence has collapsed, there is a pile of ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Apr 20, 2022 4:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch59 @ 15 Jan 2022; Ch60 postponed]

Chapter 60: Ocean Park HURRAY~~ “Do you really want to take the seats at the back? I’d say we wait for the next ride.” [We’re not afraid, are we, Misha?] [“O-Of c-c-course we’re not afraid~! Wahahahaha!!!”] “Look at you, both your voice and hands are shaking!” [“N-No~~! I’m just excited f-for the r...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Mar 14, 2022 4:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 8700

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

Hey there. Thanks for answering my questions! I usually can't afford to read too much of others' work due to my tight schedule and writing my own work, but it's always nice to read once in a while to get new inspirations and learn in general. And from your reply I've also learned, adding some more d...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Mar 14, 2022 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Story of Miyu Nakai
Replies: 1
Views: 2259

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Story of Miyu Nakai

Hey there.
I haven't finished reading the story, but I've already encountered quite a lot of grammar mistakes. Would you please run a grammar check and fix them? Because they look very annoying. Thanks.
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Mar 11, 2022 4:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 8700

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

Hey there, I also commented in your previous work. Since you wrote about my favorite character, I need to be more critical! ...just joking. I find it pretty well-written. I can feel that we do share a lot of similarities when writing about Shizune. An example would be what you said about "learn...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jan 15, 2022 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
Replies: 65
Views: 76447

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/10/2021)

Hey it's me again. I knew there was a new chapter in October, but I couldn't find a time to read it until today. Great work. I'll definitely read the whole thing again when I have the time! If your story is ending soon, then it will be pretty disappointing! I'd like to see a part two! Some statistic...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jan 15, 2022 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)
Replies: 13
Views: 20709

Re: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)

Coming across your work after finishing my latest chapter. Great work! A few minor grammar mistakes, but overall very nice. Typically when I read stories, I pay attention to the tiny points, and I can pinpoint some "gems" in your work: "white knight", "sprint" and "...
by ShizuneFan2019
Sat Jan 15, 2022 3:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch58 updated 22/10; Ch59 resumes writing!!]

Chapter 59: Top of the World “I tell you, Alvin, you’re the best. How are you always able to locate these secret gardens? I’m so impressed!” “Haha, you can say I’ve developed a special interest in secret parks. I hate crowded places. I seldom go to, say, countdown events for the New Year, or shoppi...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Oct 22, 2021 11:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch57 updated 24/8; Ch58&59 @22/10 no more extension!]

Chapter 58: Arrhythmia and Two Couples Arrhythmia. What a strange word to add to my list of vocabulary. You become like an old man for the rest of your life, regardless of your age. You cannot play soccer or basketball, or any kind of contact sport. Every fifteen minutes of walking you need to take...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Aug 24, 2021 6:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch56 updated 20/7; Ch57 @ Paralympics]

Chapter 57: Elementary Error *Yawn* I stretch my arms and legs on the comfy hotel bed that I’m sleeping on. What a nice sleep! I’m feeling so energetic right now! Where are my glasses? Hmm… Found them, here they are, on the dresser. My wristwatch is here too. 6:02 am. Good morning, Hong Kong. I’m g...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Jul 20, 2021 3:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch55 updated 16/6: Tough Japanese; Ch56 Proofreading]

Chapter 56: Diamonds in Diamond Hill? Current Time: 18:50 Estimated Arrival Time: 18:55 Time until Arrival: 00:05 The screen in front of me keeps switching between the arrival time and the flight map. Only five minutes left. I’m so excited right now! “Look, Alvin! There it is! What a view! So beaut...
by ShizuneFan2019
Fri Jun 18, 2021 10:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
Replies: 65
Views: 76447

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/6/2021)

Hey there! I've wanted to read your story for a long time, but I've been so busy with life and writing my own work (that's Precious Friendships ) that I couldn't make up any time for it. This weekend I have some reading time, so I decided to take a break from writing and read your story instead, bot...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Jun 16, 2021 3:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch54 updated 20/5: NEVER cheat on your gf; Ch55 Wednesday]

Chapter 55: Honorifics Too Stuffy “If you wanna wear this dress… hmm… look. You’ve got to match it with this blouse. See? Much better combo, isn’t it?” Boss comes over and gives me a big frown. Sup? “Miki! How impolite of you! Even though Miss Yoshida is a frequent customer, you should still use ho...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu May 20, 2021 4:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch53 updated 10/5/2021: Master of Fate, Captain of Soul!!]

Chapter 54: Pearl of the Orient Reaching my backpack for the key, I open my locker and am about to store my notes when I realize that the locker is already almost full. I can squeeze everything in, but I don’t think this is the best idea. Rather, what I should do is to sort everything out and throw...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon May 10, 2021 6:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Replies: 108
Views: 165895

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch52 Updated 14/4/2021: Misha's Resolve!! (Ch53@90%)]

Chapter 53: Stellar Performance *Cluck* *Glug glug* *Ah~~~~* Man, this hits the spot! Yup. A beer a day keeps the troubles away. This is always going to be my personal motto. With just one dose of beer, you temporary forget about all the pressure from work and from facing the folks. Beer, hands-dow...