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by NuclearStudent
Thu Jan 16, 2020 7:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2081

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Victim: KSFFWriter Prompt: Misha learns something about herself Note: I'm sorry. I did the best I could. Hothouse Glass shatters and slices my feet. I feel blood trickle out from shards in my toes, and I instinctively step back. A cut bites into into my heel and I fall over backwards. I flail upwar...
by NuclearStudent
Wed Jan 01, 2020 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 212292

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)

...I promised that I would write up my review in a formal format before the end of the year. Well, I'm a few hundred seconds late, so I've broken that promise already. I have never seen anybody offer a negative opinion on the eight-hundred pound gorilla that is FWoAN, and I've seen Prof concerned ab...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Dec 30, 2019 9:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 'Writing on the Wall' - SX for Cpl_Crud (Mature Content)
Replies: 13
Views: 678

Re: 'Writing on the Wall' - SX for Cpl_Crud (Mature Content)

Overall, quite excellent and atmospheric. Emi's slow realization of her feelings was fine writing work. I think you used Rin excellently as a mirror for Emi, and Miki was also used fairly well. This will probably be my favourite SX entry. However, there were a few problems. As Crafty mentioned, the ...
by NuclearStudent
Fri Dec 27, 2019 5:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2081

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Re: Euro

A nice story about human beings trying to make each other happy and working out their hangups.

I never understood this type of story or particularly enjoyed them. But it's a good piece and a pleasant one.
by NuclearStudent
Thu Dec 26, 2019 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2081

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

“We are not katawa disguised as mere dogs, we are wolves disguised as katawa.”
by NuclearStudent
Wed Dec 25, 2019 1:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2081

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

That was sweet. I did not expect that.

I'm surprised that Jiggy took Misha's feelings of romantic attraction seriously. I know I don't treat teenage love with any seriousness at all.
by NuclearStudent
Tue Dec 24, 2019 11:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/19)
Replies: 96
Views: 20115

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)

Quite decent. I generally appreciate the experimental, and I think this tactic paid off here.
by NuclearStudent
Sun Dec 22, 2019 2:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2081

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

I'll admit, I wasn't sure it was a dream until the Hanako scene, which either tells you a lot about me or a lot about your writing! Lap's work has more sex than a hospital has death. You can smell it all over. I get tired of it easily myself, because it's not quite my thing, but I respect what it's...
by NuclearStudent
Sat Dec 21, 2019 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2081

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

I have read all of the above.

Chris wrote a functional fluff piece. Normie wrote a party piece with just a hint of a smutty atmosphere with ultimately no sex. Nothing too out of the norm.
by NuclearStudent
Tue Nov 26, 2019 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200113 Project Indigo)
Replies: 1815
Views: 255487

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)

These were fundamentally ill-conceived and shallow. I find that relatable.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Nov 18, 2019 6:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 284758

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/13)

what a sexy older man sakidaddy is

he is cruel beyond words,

and that turns me on
by NuclearStudent
Sat Nov 09, 2019 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (1/13/19 Update)
Replies: 22
Views: 1194

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Welcome to the forums, as Nuke said. Good to see new people joining. For a first story on the Renai, you've got a great story here. Short and self-contained, and generally optimistic, despite the sadness within it. I personally disagree with Nuke's, (and subsequently your own) assessment of the fla...
by NuclearStudent
Fri Nov 08, 2019 3:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (1/13/19 Update)
Replies: 22
Views: 1194

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Welcome to the forums! As someone who's quite new myself, this place is quite welcoming. You've got a good premise going. The unusual friendship of a Misha-Hanako relationship is a compelling dynamic to explore. However, the piece seems to be too short to use the flashback effectively. It could impr...
by NuclearStudent
Thu Nov 07, 2019 12:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chris' Saki One Shots
Replies: 14
Views: 1755

Re: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof/A Fluke

It's lovely that Saki misses Hisao. It's a Ying and Yang situation; a driver didn't miss him.
by NuclearStudent
Thu Nov 07, 2019 12:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1794

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Index Rin Goes To Sea yes ma’am, when she shrugged armlessly under the strand-like clouds under the jellyfish sky yes ma’am, when she dived it was by the light of a moon which refused to be shot down. which refused to destroy her the way she wanted to be destroyed I did not see what she saw underne...