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by NuclearStudent
Tue May 05, 2020 2:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1089
Views: 308409

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 5/4)

the halogen pond is a lovely blue
by NuclearStudent
Thu Apr 30, 2020 2:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 581
Views: 225401

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)

I feel like prof is being unintentionally roasted
by NuclearStudent
Sun Apr 12, 2020 8:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 115
Views: 36321

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)

art is never abandoned, only-
by NuclearStudent
Thu Mar 26, 2020 6:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Chapter 28, Updated 5 Jun 2020)
Replies: 37
Views: 1603

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

I do love unreliable narration: even though Shizune's route is flawed, the use of unreliability is a notable strength. It's cool to see you carrying that forward, and I look forward to your progress. I've also learned a lot from pushing work here. It's a nice feeling, to improve.
by NuclearStudent
Tue Mar 24, 2020 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200427 Two Flat Jokes)
Replies: 1830
Views: 272904

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200323 Objects in Space)

Reading Objects In Space makes me wish I could have known and talked to Doomish. In terms of design, style, and intent it's very similar to a piece I recently did about Saki and Hisao being sad. I suspect that he also, as a writer of some over-the-top out-there stuff, wanted to pursue a more subdued...
by NuclearStudent
Tue Mar 24, 2020 7:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Chapter 28, Updated 5 Jun 2020)
Replies: 37
Views: 1603

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

Hello hello! I've vaguely seen your previous story, but I don't think we've ever talked before. Nice to meet you. On the subject of the story itself, I personally believe that chapter one was unnecessary and undesirable. This is a story; we don't need to be told everything through exposition. The se...
by NuclearStudent
Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (4/26/20--Contest Fic "A Lighter Touch")
Replies: 73
Views: 12016

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (3/16/20--Contest Fic "A Hearty Rivalry")

It was a hell of a crash transition moving from Raiman's Riri to yours. Raiman's Lilly was an elegant, formal, and long worded lady. As usual, yours was a passive aggressive teenager out to cuck or be cucked. It's standard Normie fare, with most of the usual beats. You're right in that it's a little...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Mar 09, 2020 9:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3495

Re: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone

thanks, patched
by NuclearStudent
Mon Mar 09, 2020 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3495

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Featured Pieces Index Saki Gives A Blowjob Saki sits on the bed. She twirls her hair, and for a fraction of a moment, she stares blankly forward. She catches my eyes lingering questioningly on her, and she forces a grin. As if we didn’t snap and yell at each other last night. As if Saki hadn’t stor...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Feb 03, 2020 9:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (4/26/20--Contest Fic "A Lighter Touch")
Replies: 73
Views: 12016

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/3/20--Contest Fic "The Last Stand")

I am amused

a number of good meme moments. lilly a cuck. lilly going "fuck it, get back on" and being all horny about it.

the image of a wahahaha interrupting a twitchy orgasm is more horrifying than anything that has ever or will ever spring forth from my mind
by NuclearStudent
Mon Feb 03, 2020 3:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3495

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

So... I'm not sure why they apparently use time manipulation equipment to have the body rot for a while before dumping him - or for that matter why they kill him three times :lol: to extract the documents from his slice in minkowski space, obviously. death is like a solvent, used to drain informati...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Feb 03, 2020 3:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3495

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Thanks, Bry. I've yet to release a single story without any SPaG errors. This time, I forgot to use spell-checker at all.

this story, of course, is a meticulously plotted expansion of the iron sockey cinematic universe
by NuclearStudent
Mon Feb 03, 2020 2:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#66—'Contrast')
Replies: 312
Views: 89542

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#64—'Unseen')

Agent Tekuza is indeed truly blessed, Chris.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Feb 03, 2020 2:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#66—'Contrast')
Replies: 312
Views: 89542

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#64—'Unseen')

It starts rather sparse with the description. For example, with
“What’s a blind date, Emi?”

“Why do you wanna know?”
It feels to me as if a beat of description is missing from the second line.

Beyond that, good memework. Multiple puns and a reference for the ending.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Feb 03, 2020 1:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 44
Views: 3495

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Index my brain is fried, please have something that looks like a story BLUE SWEET BLUE INCIDENT REPORT On July 13th, 2008, a young adult male was found dead on the railway connecting Yamaku Preserve Station to Sendai Station. The presence of empty pupal casings suggest that the body had been decayi...