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by NuclearStudent
Tue Nov 26, 2019 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251808

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)

These were fundamentally ill-conceived and shallow. I find that relatable.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Nov 18, 2019 6:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 278116

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/13)

what a sexy older man sakidaddy is

he is cruel beyond words,

and that turns me on
by NuclearStudent
Sat Nov 09, 2019 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (12/1/19 Update)
Replies: 13
Views: 620

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Welcome to the forums, as Nuke said. Good to see new people joining. For a first story on the Renai, you've got a great story here. Short and self-contained, and generally optimistic, despite the sadness within it. I personally disagree with Nuke's, (and subsequently your own) assessment of the fla...
by NuclearStudent
Fri Nov 08, 2019 3:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (12/1/19 Update)
Replies: 13
Views: 620

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Welcome to the forums! As someone who's quite new myself, this place is quite welcoming. You've got a good premise going. The unusual friendship of a Misha-Hanako relationship is a compelling dynamic to explore. However, the piece seems to be too short to use the flashback effectively. It could impr...
by NuclearStudent
Thu Nov 07, 2019 12:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof/A Fluke
Replies: 14
Views: 1587

Re: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof/A Fluke

It's lovely that Saki misses Hisao. It's a Ying and Yang situation; a driver didn't miss him.
by NuclearStudent
Thu Nov 07, 2019 12:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1591

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Index Rin Goes To Sea yes ma’am, when she shrugged armlessly under the strand-like clouds under the jellyfish sky yes ma’am, when she dived it was by the light of a moon which refused to be shot down. which refused to destroy her the way she wanted to be destroyed I did not see what she saw underne...
by NuclearStudent
Thu Oct 31, 2019 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1591

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Silentcook wrote:
Thu Oct 31, 2019 6:52 pm
NuclearStudent wrote:
Thu Oct 31, 2019 5:44 pm
We were in contact with each other, so perhaps something about our conversations triggered a mass insanity.
Y'all ain't getting away with pledging temporary. :mrgreen:
I assert nothing about how temporary it might or might not be.
by NuclearStudent
Thu Oct 31, 2019 5:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1591

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

I have no idea what I have just read - I didn't finish reading - but it seems to fit in well with the "dream" theme of this batch's stories. Though in this case it's probably more drug-induced hallucinations... I'm not sure why all of us turned in dream-like entries. I know that I had an incredibly...
by NuclearStudent
Sun Oct 27, 2019 6:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1591

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

brythain wrote:
Sun Oct 27, 2019 4:03 am
"A policeman had appeared, and he began haraunging Misha and Yuuko for disrupting the piece yet again."

*haranguing
not sure if also *peace, but 'piece' works fine here.

But yes, this is classic Flann O'Brien territory.
oh bugger me with a rake ain't I done proofreading

'parently not
by NuclearStudent
Sat Oct 26, 2019 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1591

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Index The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that...
by NuclearStudent
Thu Oct 03, 2019 10:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251808

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)

Is that first paragraph something Hisao would write? Those could well be his internal thoughts, but I'm not sure it's like him to write so brutally in any timeline.
by NuclearStudent
Sun Sep 29, 2019 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Story Repository
Replies: 31
Views: 1591

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Index The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that...
by NuclearStudent
Fri Sep 27, 2019 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Aro's Story Thread.
Replies: 10
Views: 567

Re: Aro's Story Thread.

I feel the same as Oddball.

It's a fluff piece and a slice of life, I get it. All the same, nothing draws me in.
by NuclearStudent
Thu Sep 26, 2019 8:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 6085

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)

That particular line was Miki using a satirical label in an attempt to unsettle Emi (a form of teasing) - it's jarring because that was the intent behind its usage. That is a success of, not a fault in, her characterization. That it bothered you simply means that you might not get along with the Mi...