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by NuclearStudent
Tue Sep 22, 2020 5:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 46
Views: 2728

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Took some notes. Notes here. On the whole, very favorable showing. Enjoyed this significantly more and rate higher on technical talent than popularly respected works such as Sisterhood or Learning To Fly . Generally good sense of pacing and characterization. Only real weakness is I felt it could hav...
by NuclearStudent
Sat Aug 29, 2020 6:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 305637

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

Related to this discussion about giving feedback, I wrote a whole "Iron Saki" shitpost in lieu of being able to give coherent feedback about Learning To Fly. I can empathise with that, because 'After The Dream' is the shitposting that emerged after I came here, read through all the writing then on ...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Aug 24, 2020 2:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 305637

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

And that is a problem, because people do need feedback to improve. You can imagine me sitting there, not quite knowing how to improve on the text presented, and hesitant to say anything negative without something positive to offer. And after some time has passed, I too regretfully pass. The problem...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Aug 24, 2020 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 305637

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

I feel quite bad bashing this type of writing. It's someone's first piece of writing. I think that's enough context and explanation for, well, all of it. That's sometimes why some people don't get any comments from me. :D And that is a problem, because people do need feedback to improve. If this pe...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Aug 24, 2020 2:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 305637

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

I feel quite bad bashing this type of writing. It's someone's first piece of writing. I think that's enough context and explanation for, well, all of it.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Aug 24, 2020 2:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Saki
Replies: 3
Views: 263

Iron Saki

This is a rewrite of Learning To Fly with a handful of minor changes, made with the approval of EurobeatJester. Strict effort has been made to adhere to the tones, themes, and structure of the original work and of the Katawa Shoujo universe as a whole. I owe a lot to this community and have a deep r...
by NuclearStudent
Thu Jul 30, 2020 11:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 305637

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200803 Before Yamaku)

Why does this exist? Nothing really happens here, and no particular mood is created.

Answer being that it's an author's first work and a warming-up of the engines. Author never came back, so presumably they're doing better work elsewhere.
by NuclearStudent
Wed Jul 15, 2020 6:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cross-Pollination (Post Lilly GE, lewdfic)
Replies: 6
Views: 593

Re: Cross-Pollination (Post Lilly GE, lewdfic)

MegaTank wrote:
Tue Jul 14, 2020 6:40 pm
NuclearStudent wrote:
Tue Jul 14, 2020 12:26 am
you rise
...

I'm sorry, what?
Sorry, that was meant as a "welcome to the forums."

Is this fic finished, or is there more? The ending is rather abrupt.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Jul 13, 2020 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 305637

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200713 Scarred Angel)

(I don't comment on that many of these, but Oddball needs company.) The author can be forgiven for their use of language because they aren't native English speakers. It has a number of spelling errors eg. "niversities" ought to be "universities," but the prose is not exceptionally bad. The storytell...
by NuclearStudent
Sun Jul 12, 2020 10:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 107325

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]

I know I'm probably being quite annoying with all of my recent comments around here recently, given this forums age and declining viewership, however I think it's amazing this game is still drawing people like me into the universe of fanfic (which I had previously had no idea was so good). Forgetme...
by NuclearStudent
Tue May 05, 2020 2:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1092
Views: 338444

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 5/4)

the halogen pond is a lovely blue
by NuclearStudent
Thu Apr 30, 2020 2:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 240802

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)

I feel like prof is being unintentionally roasted
by NuclearStudent
Sun Apr 12, 2020 8:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 115
Views: 40365

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)

art is never abandoned, only-
by NuclearStudent
Thu Mar 26, 2020 6:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: *Ch32 Updated 11/9* Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot)
Replies: 42
Views: 3747

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End epilogue) (Updated 20 Mar 2020)

I do love unreliable narration: even though Shizune's route is flawed, the use of unreliability is a notable strength. It's cool to see you carrying that forward, and I look forward to your progress. I've also learned a lot from pushing work here. It's a nice feeling, to improve.