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by AWizardWithWords
Thu Sep 05, 2019 12:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)
Replies: 9
Views: 1747

As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction) Update

It's been awhile, but I finally got around to working on my fan fiction again. Just finished proofreading it, and hopefully the new chapter will come soon. It's easier to update through google docs, so I'll just leave my google doc link here. https://docs.google.com/document/d/13CROKlsF-4O5ipzkb3NzK...
by AWizardWithWords
Wed Jun 05, 2019 8:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)
Replies: 9
Views: 1747

Re: As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)

Thanks for putting it up here! A few comments regarding continuity and consistency: "... during the extremely long and quiet drive home." ... "... after 15 minutes or so of semi-conscious driving." This may be subjective, but 15 minutes is not all that long a drive to work... all of the different c...
by AWizardWithWords
Tue Jun 04, 2019 11:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)
Replies: 9
Views: 1747

As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)

This is my second fanfiction ever. Lilly's path in Katawa Shoujo inspired me in so many ways, I'd do anything to continue the story. This fanfiction takes place after Lilly's good ending, and is based about a month afterwards. The basic premise is that both Hisao and Lilly aren't in college yet, and...