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by MrMadrid
Thu Feb 02, 2023 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 36883

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

(Translated by Google Translate) Regards. First of all, I must say that I love your story, and I've been following it since day 1, but I didn't comment until now because I had lost access to my account (wasn't able to recover the password, and it wouldn't let me create new ones, for some reason ). I...
by MrMadrid
Fri Jun 21, 2019 9:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living with Dying (Defunct)
Replies: 4
Views: 2764

Re: Living with Dying (an OC x Rika story)

I'm not sure if the background of the character has justified enough to demand his father if he hated him (and therefore cause his death and his own damage), but at least generates enough intrigue to follow the story of the character and discover the reason for that question. With respect to the pal...
by MrMadrid
Mon Apr 22, 2019 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 344058

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

Great story, I love Rika's way of being, something nihilistic, but also wanting to enjoy every second to show her lack of fear of death, although like any other human being she wants to be accepted, although for others her actions may be incomprehensible. .. Capable edte book would have benefited fr...
by MrMadrid
Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unwritten Rules
Replies: 7
Views: 3869

Re: Unwritten Rules

"Be responsible and not abandon the story"

Although that applies to any book.
by MrMadrid
Wed Apr 10, 2019 5:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 12492

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Very good act 1 and characterization, the way in which Kawana is so formal is almost always a little refreshing, taking into account the lighter atmosphere of Yamaku. Very good development and I look forward to a next part.
by MrMadrid
Tue Apr 09, 2019 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
Replies: 72
Views: 44024

Re: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)

I just finished reading it and I love the way you represented Molly, a warm and peaceful person, like Lilly but more spiritual. I hope you can update soon, even though it's been a while ...