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by NelNinja
Sat Jun 19, 2021 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)
Replies: 4
Views: 185

Re: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)

It's a very nice work with Rin. I think the idea of it being slightly confusing and not clear actually helps given the character involved. Thank you! I finally remembered why I wrote this, or at least why I decided to start writing it: It was to help me with my other story, Pilgrimage, when I start...
by NelNinja
Mon Jun 14, 2021 9:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 10 ---Mai--- My hand fiddles with a pen nervously; I’ve been spending the last few nights with Iwanako to help her out of this funk, or at least start the process. She finally told Hisao about her doubts and everything she told me the night after the break up. I can tell Hisao is fighting d...
by NelNinja
Thu May 27, 2021 9:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 9 Lying in bed, artificial light trails in through my window. Rolling my head to the right, blocky, segmented red lights tell me it’s 2 AM. I stare at my blank ceiling, drawing shapes with my eyes going from stucco bump to stucco bump. My medication occasionally interrupts my sleep schedule...
by NelNinja
Wed May 26, 2021 6:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)
Replies: 4
Views: 185

Re: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)

You got me in the first half ngl. I was like "hey you don't cheat on Rin..!" :mrgreen: Thanks! I actually ended up changing the second paragraph to push that interpretation; I'm not sure why but originally I literally had "died" instead of "betray" the first time I wrote it and I was so very confus...
by NelNinja
Mon May 24, 2021 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)
Replies: 4
Views: 185

PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)

So... apparently I wrote this March 14, 2019, or at least I think I wrote this. (I hope I wrote this...) I tried to search the forums to see if I had posted it or if someone else posted it but it wouldn't search so... Anyways, this is set somewhere down the line after Rin's Good Ending. Enjoy -----...
by NelNinja
Wed Oct 16, 2019 12:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Official Notice of Fan Fic Death/Rebirth I'm not sure how many people were following this fic but with work taking up 70% of my time, friends another 20, leaving the last 10% to recuperation, I'm unable to keep writing this fic. While I'm mostly satisfied with where this started, I never sat down a...
by NelNinja
Wed Jul 31, 2019 8:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 70
Views: 17981

Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)

This is somewhat bittersweet for me as I've continuously looked forward to more of this fic. I'm happy it got a good ending but now I have to find other stuff to read :cry:

Regardless, this has been a great journey!
by NelNinja
Sun Jul 28, 2019 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 7/16/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 8 “Hisao, over here!” Emi enthusiastically catches my eye as Mai and I approach the theater. “Going off of your description, I take it the short-stack is Emi?” I’m still unclear as to why Emi insisted I go with her and Rin to see a movie this Saturday, but I thought it would be a good oppor...
by NelNinja
Thu Jul 18, 2019 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 2019
Replies: 4
Views: 1576

Re: Shiina x Hanako = Shut Up + Dance w/ Me, therefore, E=mc2

And what do you mean that fic "made you ready" for Wahahanako? I can't be the only second guy who's done a Shiianako now, can I? I'm not too into same sex relationship stories, at least not as the main focus; An Unusual Friendship is the only other one I've read so far. Nothing strictly against the...
by NelNinja
Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 2019
Replies: 4
Views: 1576

Re: Shiina 2019

I like it, though the Minako pairing is only one I'm ready for due to An Unusual Friendship. I enjoyed Misha being a teacher at Yamaku, dunno why I never thought of that before. Not much to say, just wanted to say something.
by NelNinja
Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 70
Views: 17981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)

I'm glad to read more of this, I really enjoy Shizune stories since her in-game route left me wanting. I was mildly surprised with Mai coming out, though it was obvious on review. It's always interesting to see different people's takes on Mai, Shin, and Takumi when they come up since it's always dif...
by NelNinja
Tue Jul 16, 2019 10:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 7/16/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Interlude 2 ---Misha--- I wonder what clouds taste like… Sitting on a bench outside my apartment, I swing my legs idly while staring at the sky, waiting for Hacchan to come down so we can catch the train into Bunkyō. Wednesdays are always weird. Hacchan’s classes aren’t early, but they aren’t late ...
by NelNinja
Fri May 10, 2019 5:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Retcon Initiated After much pondering and debate with trusted friends, I have removed Chapter 4b and moved the second half of Interlude 1 into that post. I dropped way too much too fast for the story I'm looking to tell and left myself nowhere for the story to expand. Nothing in the story so far ch...
by NelNinja
Mon Apr 15, 2019 2:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 7 Sundays are usually one big lazy day where Iwanako and I just sit around and do nothing, enjoying each other’s company… That won’t happen again anytime soon. Turning my head to see the clock, it reads 8 AM. I’ve been awake for several hours now wallowing about Friday and being numb to the...
by NelNinja
Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 44
Views: 8964

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Technically, I'd call it a shared world, since Iwanako and Mai in Bantamweights are canonically the same characters that appeared in Ch.60 of Developments , and the concept of the Daidouji home was originally Leaty's, although I did build on it a bit. Obviously, your Iwanako and Mai are different f...