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by NelNinja
Wed Oct 16, 2019 12:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Official Notice of Fan Fic Death/Rebirth I'm not sure how many people were following this fic but with work taking up 70% of my time, friends another 20, leaving the last 10% to recuperation, I'm unable to keep writing this fic. While I'm mostly satisfied with where this started, I never sat down a...
by NelNinja
Wed Jul 31, 2019 8:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 66
Views: 7429

Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)

This is somewhat bittersweet for me as I've continuously looked forward to more of this fic. I'm happy it got a good ending but now I have to find other stuff to read :cry:

Regardless, this has been a great journey!
by NelNinja
Sun Jul 28, 2019 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 7/16/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 8 “Hisao, over here!” Emi enthusiastically catches my eye as Mai and I approach the theater. “Going off of your description, I take it the short-stack is Emi?” I’m still unclear as to why Emi insisted I go with her and Rin to see a movie this Saturday, but I thought it would be a good oppor...
by NelNinja
Thu Jul 18, 2019 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 2019
Replies: 4
Views: 585

Re: Shiina x Hanako = Shut Up + Dance w/ Me, therefore, E=mc2

And what do you mean that fic "made you ready" for Wahahanako? I can't be the only second guy who's done a Shiianako now, can I? I'm not too into same sex relationship stories, at least not as the main focus; An Unusual Friendship is the only other one I've read so far. Nothing strictly against the...
by NelNinja
Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 2019
Replies: 4
Views: 585

Re: Shiina 2019

I like it, though the Minako pairing is only one I'm ready for due to An Unusual Friendship. I enjoyed Misha being a teacher at Yamaku, dunno why I never thought of that before. Not much to say, just wanted to say something.
by NelNinja
Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 66
Views: 7429

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)

I'm glad to read more of this, I really enjoy Shizune stories since her in-game route left me wanting. I was mildly surprised with Mai coming out, though it was obvious on review. It's always interesting to see different people's takes on Mai, Shin, and Takumi when they come up since it's always dif...
by NelNinja
Tue Jul 16, 2019 10:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 7/16/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Interlude 2 ---Misha--- I wonder what clouds taste like… Sitting on a bench outside my apartment, I swing my legs idly while staring at the sky, waiting for Hacchan to come down so we can catch the train into Bunkyō. Wednesdays are always weird. Hacchan’s classes aren’t early, but they aren’t late ...
by NelNinja
Fri May 10, 2019 5:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Retcon Initiated After much pondering and debate with trusted friends, I have removed Chapter 4b and moved the second half of Interlude 1 into that post. I dropped way too much too fast for the story I'm looking to tell and left myself nowhere for the story to expand. Nothing in the story so far ch...
by NelNinja
Mon Apr 15, 2019 2:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 7 Sundays are usually one big lazy day where Iwanako and I just sit around and do nothing, enjoying each other’s company… That won’t happen again anytime soon. Turning my head to see the clock, it reads 8 AM. I’ve been awake for several hours now wallowing about Friday and being numb to the...
by NelNinja
Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Technically, I'd call it a shared world, since Iwanako and Mai in Bantamweights are canonically the same characters that appeared in Ch.60 of Developments , and the concept of the Daidouji home was originally Leaty's, although I did build on it a bit. Obviously, your Iwanako and Mai are different f...
by NelNinja
Tue Apr 09, 2019 1:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Chapter 6 Work dragged on way too long today. After calling Hisao, he assures me he kept his promise but wanted the rest of the night to himself. “Earlier, after you left, I had a small heart flutter that really drained me.” … Oh gods… The worry I’ve been trying to suppress oozes out of my voice. “...
by NelNinja
Sun Mar 31, 2019 6:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/25/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Alright I've read everything that's been posted so far. Boii does Hisao have the VN protagonist curse! Just as many girls falling over him as in the game lol. If it turns into a pseudo-harem story where he's trying to manage all the female attention without any of the dating options trying to kill ...
by NelNinja
Wed Mar 27, 2019 2:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 66
Views: 7429

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 3-24-19)

I like the relationship you've given Hisao and Shizune. When I replayed her route recently, I liked it but hit the same stumbling block as last time: the route isn't about them being in a relationship. I love Misha, and her dealing with depression and her confession to Shizune made sense, but the on...
by NelNinja
Tue Mar 26, 2019 5:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/25/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Wow, is it March 35th already? Spring is really flying by... :wink: BAH! Fixed I really enjoyed this chapter -- I think it's your best one so far. Your first couple of chapters had some iffy moments, but you seem to be smoothing them out as you continue writing. The interplay between Emi and Hisao ...
by NelNinja
Mon Mar 25, 2019 10:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 7/28/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 42
Views: 3060

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/14/2019 TRIPLE POST) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Chapter 5 Leaving the park behind, we round a corner and continue a short way down a street before Ibarazaki pulls me towards a bakery. The front windows have something… eclectic on them. Not bad, but does that fit a bakery? I catch Tezuka also making her way there, though she isn’t paying any atte...