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by sgtpepper
Tue Jun 25, 2019 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-25)
Replies: 100
Views: 6780

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-25)

I also laughed. Now we see where Miki gets it from.
by sgtpepper
Sun Jun 02, 2019 12:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 675

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

If I had to find something to comment on it would be that the story came out just a few days after another story about two different characters being locked in the library - that one did have some conflict, despite not being much longer - which does not really help the argument that the story is no...
by sgtpepper
Sun Jun 02, 2019 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 675

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

Greetings I have decided to revise the fic in light of recent events. Here is the revised passage. "I love you, Miki" It was then I realized the girl I was snuggling wasn't Miki, it was a 7 story tall monster from the paleolithic era. I said "Loch Ness monster, what you want?" He said "Open the door...
by sgtpepper
Fri May 31, 2019 10:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 675

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

Relax, it's a story on the internet about some anime girl. While there is certainly a time and place to be serious when writing, I think throwing in a (single line in the fic, mind you) joke is alright. I didn't feel "pressured" or anything to use the meme, I just thought it'd be a very Miki-way to ...
by sgtpepper
Wed May 29, 2019 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 675

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

Scroff wrote:
Wed May 29, 2019 2:41 pm
That was adorable!
sgtpepper wrote:
Wed May 29, 2019 1:17 pm
pretty sure including "gaylord" in your Miki fic is in of the terms of service for the forums
Damn, I've been doing it wrong...
Thank you!

i don't make the rules, just obey them.
by sgtpepper
Wed May 29, 2019 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 675

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

Hanako Fancopter wrote:
Wed May 29, 2019 1:15 pm
sgtpepper wrote:
Wed May 29, 2019 12:40 pm
"I love you too, gaylord."
Now this is epic
pretty sure including "gaylord" in your Miki fic is in of the terms of service for the forums
by sgtpepper
Wed May 29, 2019 12:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 675

The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

"Locked." I turned to Miki, who just rolled her eyes and sighed. We walked back to the rear of the library where, until pretty recently, we'd been blissfully sleeping in the beanbags. My sternum was still a little sore where her head had been laying, and I rubbed it absentmindedly as we walked. "You...
by sgtpepper
Tue Mar 05, 2019 6:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)
Replies: 6
Views: 447

Re: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)

I like you sgtpepper, I hope you stay here for a while. Didn't quite get me to cry but it felt very similar to Going the Distance which did get me to cry, so applause. Stories don't usually hit me deep enough to get tears out of me, so getting me to feel like that is praise worthy from me. :) Thank...
by sgtpepper
Tue Mar 05, 2019 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190520 Overdrive)
Replies: 1772
Views: 227258

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190304 Irish Stout)

"Wow look how edgy I am": The fanfic
by sgtpepper
Mon Mar 04, 2019 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 882

Re: The Masterplan (Updated 03/03/19)

Makes me wonder how often Emi's legs get stolen lol Also an important question..... what will happen when Kenji finally completes his mission?! So glad you asked. And now, an Epilouge ===================================================================================== I woke up way, way too early ...
by sgtpepper
Sun Mar 03, 2019 10:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 882

Re: The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)

DATE ENCODED: MAY 5(TH), 2006 DATE ACCESSED: MARCH 3(RD), 2019 TITLE: “The Masterplan (3)” AUTHOR: Setou, K. ===BEGIN DECODING=== I ran. I ran and ran. I ran so hard and for so long I actually ended up in the same hallway by mistake. Then I kept running. No doubt those student council bitches were c...
by sgtpepper
Wed Feb 20, 2019 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 882

Re: The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)

This is fun - not much more to say about it, because it’s certianly not an attempt to be deep or present Kenji as sympathetic. Though, his camera traps are no doubt creepy at best. Still, your writing with fluidity and it makes me laugh - might want to separate your responses and posts though, got ...
by sgtpepper
Wed Feb 20, 2019 10:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 882

Re: The Masterplan

I must admit, I laughed. Well done, that was a great Kenji content. Pretty long, but that definitely made my day. :) Masterfully written, and that's coming from someone who hates fan fiction. How you captured Kenji's mindset was very accurate to how I would think he would act and you made even the ...
by sgtpepper
Mon Feb 18, 2019 3:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 882

The Masterplan (Finished)

DATE ENCODED: MAY 5(TH), 2006 DATE ACCESSED: FEBRUARY 18(TH), 2019 TITLE: “The Masterplan” AUTHOR: Setou, K. ===BEGIN DECODING=== I quickly shut the door and locked it. Damn feminists. They must've gotten to him. I could see it in his eyes, and I'm legally blind. It was that obvious. Poor guy. I was...
by sgtpepper
Fri Feb 15, 2019 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)
Replies: 6
Views: 447

Re: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)

I think that end part captures Rin quite well, however, and I'm not an expert on Rin, I'm not entirely sold on your presentation of her at the start. She comes across as very calculating rather than her, difficult to qualify, introspective and rapt personality we see in game. yeah, i originally wro...