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by sgtpepper
Wed Feb 20, 2019 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)
Replies: 7
Views: 217

Re: The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)

This is fun - not much more to say about it, because it’s certianly not an attempt to be deep or present Kenji as sympathetic. Though, his camera traps are no doubt creepy at best. Still, your writing with fluidity and it makes me laugh - might want to separate your responses and posts though, got ...
by sgtpepper
Wed Feb 20, 2019 10:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)
Replies: 7
Views: 217

Re: The Masterplan

I must admit, I laughed. Well done, that was a great Kenji content. Pretty long, but that definitely made my day. :) Masterfully written, and that's coming from someone who hates fan fiction. How you captured Kenji's mindset was very accurate to how I would think he would act and you made even the ...
by sgtpepper
Mon Feb 18, 2019 3:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)
Replies: 7
Views: 217

The Masterplan (Updated 02/20/19)

DATE ENCODED: MAY 5(TH), 2006 DATE ACCESSED: FEBRUARY 18(TH), 2019 TITLE: “The Masterplan” AUTHOR: Setou, K. ===BEGIN DECODING=== I quickly shut the door and locked it. Damn feminists. They must've gotten to him. I could see it in his eyes, and I'm legally blind. It was that obvious. Poor guy. I was...
by sgtpepper
Fri Feb 15, 2019 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)
Replies: 4
Views: 136

Re: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)

I think that end part captures Rin quite well, however, and I'm not an expert on Rin, I'm not entirely sold on your presentation of her at the start. She comes across as very calculating rather than her, difficult to qualify, introspective and rapt personality we see in game. yeah, i originally wro...
by sgtpepper
Fri Feb 15, 2019 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)
Replies: 4
Views: 136

Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)

I heard the door open and close gently. It always confused me. Not the door closing, but it closing gently. You can't be gentle to a door. Can you? I was thinking too hard again. Thinking so hard I didn't have time to think about what I'd been thinking about earlier. He came up and wrapped his arms ...
by sgtpepper
Sun Feb 10, 2019 3:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Valentines story 2/14/19)
Replies: 27
Views: 2358

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 2/5/19)

a lesser man would be ashamed to admit he cried at a fanfic that was really just the setup for a smut scene

however i am not a lesser man

god damn you, but in a good way
by sgtpepper
Mon Feb 04, 2019 11:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunions (S9 Submission) (Updated 2/4/19)
Replies: 10
Views: 501

Re: Reunions (S9 Submission) (Updated 2/4/19)

hisao is a true legend, getting married from beyond the gra- oh i get it now
by sgtpepper
Sun Jan 06, 2019 12:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
Replies: 274
Views: 24324

Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool

what if the pool is just a newcomer joke at yamaku

if you ask the nurse where the pool is, he fills a cup of water and splashes it on you