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by PabloPabloPablo
Mon Sep 09, 2019 8:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)

Well, here it is. Act 3 is about to start. I'm honestly quite nervous, but I hope you'll all enjoy what I can planned for these next few chapters. It's been almost a year, and I've made a lot of progress. I'm honestly quite proud of that, and I hope I can make much more progress as the fic continues...
by PabloPabloPablo
Tue Aug 27, 2019 2:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 8/21/19)

I said a lot of what I wanted to say in the discord, but I really did find this comment very sweet. Like you specify, I was expecting a lot of critique on it, but I'm happy to know that I'm doing good so far, at least in your eyes. I really do hope that the coming chapters keep you and everyone else...
by PabloPabloPablo
Thu Aug 22, 2019 1:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 8/21/19)

Two posts in very rapid succession! Apologies if it seems like spamming, but I really wanted to get these two chapters out, especially this one. With school starting soon, I wanted this to be the last posted chapter in case a hiatus comes up. Hopefully it doesn't though! This marks the end of Act 2....
by PabloPabloPablo
Wed Aug 21, 2019 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 8/20/19)

Smaller chapter today in preparation for a big one that I'll drop as soon as I finish proof reading. Hope you guys enjoy it! --- Castle The week has flown by so fast that I almost didn’t realize that is was Thursday. The only thing that has been on my mind is non stop anxiousness. At first, the ques...
by PabloPabloPablo
Thu Jun 27, 2019 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
Replies: 22
Views: 5232

Re: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18

Well I can't exactly complain when the prompt I gave was a bit out there. My apologies on that. I still like it.
by PabloPabloPablo
Tue Jun 25, 2019 9:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A first-time one-shot story involving Shizune
Replies: 3
Views: 307

Re: A first-time one-shot story involving Shizune

A nice and short story. Maybe a bit too short, but that's honestly just my personal preference there. I like that Emi is working to be a physical therapist, it's unique enough to not be expected, but familiar enough so that it still makes sense. Overall, I like it, though it's hard to really say muc...
by PabloPabloPablo
Fri Jun 21, 2019 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 6/21/19)

Rough Track Waking up to the school being filled with people is an unusual start to the day to be honest. If I didn't know there was a track meet today, I'd think there was another festival or something. What’s even more odd is that, while a majority of the crowd appears to be parents or family mem...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sat Jun 15, 2019 3:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 6/15/19)

This took awhile to update, but thankfully school's done for me so I can get back to work. Again, sorry for the ghosting and I hope you all enjoy the next chapter. Had to proof read this myself, so excuse any errors that might have slipped my watch. --- Attempt I shoot my eyes open from the sound of...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sun Feb 03, 2019 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 2/2/19)

Kinda been awhile. No excuses for that really, just going to saying sorry for the wait. Hopefully it was worth it for you guys! --- Procrastination Mutou’s lecture seems to have put Suzu to sleep, along with a majority of the class. I’m well awake, but not because I’m listening. Instead, I’m busy pe...
by PabloPabloPablo
Tue Jan 01, 2019 3:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 52
Views: 6737

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

Even though it's still December 31st here, I still feel like I have to apologize for being late. It turns out the holidays were much more busy for me than I thought. Still, I'm thankful that I managed to get this out before 2019, at least from my perspective. Hopefully you guys enjoy it. Your victim...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sat Dec 22, 2018 6:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/22/18)

A Sleepy Girl I think I’m dying. After only about three laps, I’ve about as devoid of breath as a person can be without keeling over. My gasps for air are only met with laughter as Miki passes me with ease. I would chase after her if my lungs weren’t busy being on fire. I’m already annoyed at her t...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sun Dec 02, 2018 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/2/18)

Thank you for your guy's kind words! I should also really thank Mirage for proof-reading all of these chapters and the few upcoming ones, otherwise they'd be a completely mess. Anyway, hope you guys enjoy Act 2! --- Act 2: Blooming Hibiscus Study Agreement Waking up proves to be more difficult than ...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sun Nov 25, 2018 12:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route

I updated this story like 3 times in a little more than a week because I had a pretty large backlog, so just to clarify, I'm not writing these are rapid speed to burn myself out. Anyway, hope you guys enjoy the end of Act 1 ----- Fireworks in the Garden Checking the clock through my groggy and blurr...
by PabloPabloPablo
Wed Nov 21, 2018 12:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route

Much to my surprise, however, the place is pretty packed, having about the same population a typical high school. This is wrong though (although to be fair it could just be Hisao being wrong). The school is somewhere between 200 and 300 students depending on who you ask. This is a mistake on my par...
by PabloPabloPablo
Fri Nov 16, 2018 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)
Replies: 25
Views: 4100

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route

There's a bit of odd grammar in the first part, but it gets better towards the middle. You said you had proofreaders on discord, but in case they didn't make the jump here together with you, just drop me a PM. I think most are here, but still, I could use all the help I can get if that's alright wi...