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by PabloPabloPablo
Tue Dec 10, 2019 5:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)

Reformed Hypothesis I decided to head to the faculty office immediately after my reflection. I don’t know how long staff tends to hang around the school after the day is over, but I would hate to miss the chance to talk to Mutou today. I’d have to wait till Monday if I did, and it feels like I don’...
by PabloPabloPablo
Thu Nov 28, 2019 12:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 1/2/2020)
Replies: 46
Views: 3167

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 11/20/2019)

Problem isn't the h-scene itself, more the speed of the relationship. It progressed so rapidly that I barely have time to care that there is an h-scene in the first place. As for the Kenji thing, I don't want Hisao to be a saint, but I also do want him to physically hurt someone and then not feel re...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sun Nov 24, 2019 9:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 1/2/2020)
Replies: 46
Views: 3167

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 11/20/2019)

Right, so I don't normally comment on stories, let alone do detailed critiques on them, but considering Dack came to me for advice on Sweetest Requiem , I felt the need to read it all the way through and condense my thoughts into one long post. And boy, so I have thoughts. I asked him if it was okay...
by PabloPabloPablo
Mon Nov 11, 2019 8:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 11/11/19)

Well, I don't mind a clear cut love story without any rejection, but I wanted to try something a bit different for this route. Hopefully it works out. Anyhoo, next chapter! --- A Balanced Perspective The week has been relatively boring. I’ve done nothing but study for the past couple of days. Normal...
by PabloPabloPablo
Fri Nov 01, 2019 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019
Replies: 6
Views: 422

Re: Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Thu Oct 31, 2019 11:55 am
You know, at first I was a bit disappointed that at one point there wasn't an entry written by Emi, like "There's no way I'd be doing stuff like that" or something...
I was tempted, but I figured Emi probably wouldn't have done that regardless of the ending implications.
by PabloPabloPablo
Sat Oct 26, 2019 11:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019
Replies: 6
Views: 422

Suzu's Journal

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this ...
by PabloPabloPablo
Sat Oct 26, 2019 11:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019
Replies: 6
Views: 422

Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019

I don't often post one-shots, given I like to focus on my main route more. However, if I ever do, I'll post them here. That's all

Index:
by PabloPabloPablo
Thu Oct 24, 2019 5:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 10/24/19)

I have to admit I also don't really understand the advice Suzu gave him... Hopefully it becomes more clear as the story goes on. Speaking of that, new chapter! It's been awhile but I'm back on track, hopefully. Hope you guys enjoy. --- Coming Storm The library hall used to be a peaceful place until...
by PabloPabloPablo
Mon Sep 09, 2019 8:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 9/9/19)

Well, here it is. Act 3 is about to start. I'm honestly quite nervous, but I hope you'll all enjoy what I can planned for these next few chapters. It's been almost a year, and I've made a lot of progress. I'm honestly quite proud of that, and I hope I can make much more progress as the fic continues...
by PabloPabloPablo
Tue Aug 27, 2019 2:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 8/21/19)

I said a lot of what I wanted to say in the discord, but I really did find this comment very sweet. Like you specify, I was expecting a lot of critique on it, but I'm happy to know that I'm doing good so far, at least in your eyes. I really do hope that the coming chapters keep you and everyone else...
by PabloPabloPablo
Thu Aug 22, 2019 1:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 8/21/19)

Two posts in very rapid succession! Apologies if it seems like spamming, but I really wanted to get these two chapters out, especially this one. With school starting soon, I wanted this to be the last posted chapter in case a hiatus comes up. Hopefully it doesn't though! This marks the end of Act 2....
by PabloPabloPablo
Wed Aug 21, 2019 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 8/20/19)

Smaller chapter today in preparation for a big one that I'll drop as soon as I finish proof reading. Hope you guys enjoy it! --- Castle The week has flown by so fast that I almost didn’t realize that is was Thursday. The only thing that has been on my mind is non stop anxiousness. At first, the ques...
by PabloPabloPablo
Thu Jun 27, 2019 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
Replies: 22
Views: 5725

Re: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18

Well I can't exactly complain when the prompt I gave was a bit out there. My apologies on that. I still like it.
by PabloPabloPablo
Tue Jun 25, 2019 9:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A first-time one-shot story involving Shizune
Replies: 3
Views: 415

Re: A first-time one-shot story involving Shizune

A nice and short story. Maybe a bit too short, but that's honestly just my personal preference there. I like that Emi is working to be a physical therapist, it's unique enough to not be expected, but familiar enough so that it still makes sense. Overall, I like it, though it's hard to really say muc...
by PabloPabloPablo
Fri Jun 21, 2019 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 6733

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 6/21/19)

Rough Track Waking up to the school being filled with people is an unusual start to the day to be honest. If I didn't know there was a track meet today, I'd think there was another festival or something. What’s even more odd is that, while a majority of the crowd appears to be parents or family mem...