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by Lap
Wed Apr 17, 2019 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)

Chapter 14 ______________________ Christmas was traditionally a romantic holiday, and this was the first time I’d actually have someone to be romantic with. I hesitantly broached the subject with Shizune, and was somewhat surprised to find that she was actually enthusiastic about the notion. She po...
by Lap
Sun Apr 14, 2019 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unwritten Rules
Replies: 5
Views: 144

Re: Unwritten Rules

brythain wrote:
Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:46 pm
Good title, promising beginning... oh, that wasn't the story! :D
Hmm. Though it does make for an intriguing title....
by Lap
Wed Apr 03, 2019 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-14)
Replies: 90
Views: 5289

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-03)

Awww, poor Hanako. That's worse than having to watch their cuddle-pile after pizza. This was supposed to be her evening with Miki.

Fun story, I'm loving the way the M/H/S triad is developing.
by Lap
Tue Apr 02, 2019 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)
Replies: 4
Views: 337

Re: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)

Cool concept. It makes sense that Rin might know how to read sign, despite being unable to sign herself—it's a visual language, and she's a visually oriented person.

That was fun. Thanks!
by Lap
Sun Mar 31, 2019 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Adventures of Captain Katawa
Replies: 10
Views: 1113

Re: The Adventures of Captain Katawa

I keep coming back to this...dunno why it tickles me so, but it does.

I assume the keyboard controls pressure pads on her legs, which she can "read" like tactile sign language?
by Lap
Sun Mar 24, 2019 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Chapter 13

Chapter 13 ________________________ It seemed like Misha’s birthday party was the last time any of us got to relax. It was the final calm before the storm, as the end of the year started rushing closer, and the specter of university entrance exams loomed ever larger. I had hoped that having made a ...
by Lap
Tue Feb 26, 2019 9:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)
Replies: 8
Views: 367

Re: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)

Nice story, fits in well with its predecessors. It felt very much like Hisao to put off breaking up for as long as he could, instead of just doing it up front as soon as he saw Shizune. Well, we all have our moments of cowardice, and it''s not an easy task. But I kept getting annoyed by Shizune's re...
by Lap
Tue Feb 26, 2019 9:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 2-24-19)

That was lovely, what a fantastic thing to read over my morning coffee! The art is great, is it a Lap original? Yup! Thanks! Good. She deserves it. Hell yeah, if anyone deserves a btggf it's Misha! :-) Indeed. (er...hm.... "Big Tall Goth GirlFriend"?) I second Scroff’s comment, my toast and coffee ...
by Lap
Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Avenues of Communication, Chapter 12

Chapter 12 ________________________ Given that Misha’s birthday party had been my idea, I had expected to have to organize it, but Shizune had taken over that task early on. You have enough to do with Student Council work , she’d said. I’ll take care of this. I was surprised that her quest for the ...
by Lap
Wed Feb 20, 2019 12:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 2-19-19)

“One for Aiochan, one for Mirachan, one for Aiochan, one for Aiochan…” Her name is "Aoi". "Ai" would also be a suitable Japanese name if this is not supposed to be the sidecharacter from the VN, but "Aio" is not a name. Oops. Brain fart on my part. Fixed, thanks. [But perhaps a bit more awake and e...
by Lap
Tue Feb 19, 2019 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Chapter 11

Chapter 11 ________________________ Monday was a red letter day for Shizune in two different ways—it was finally Election Day in the morning, and after school, she was scheduled to get her finger splints off. Shizune, Misha, and I all missed the first class of the day as we went from classroom to c...
by Lap
Sun Feb 17, 2019 9:00 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)
Replies: 5
Views: 291

Re: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

I have to admit, the shades are very well done. Teach me Senpai. Assuming you were being serious...it's all in layering. Shade values are painted in a dark brown (in this case) on a Multiply layer at 15-25% opacity, depending upon the piece. Highlights (in this case, untanned skin) are painted in w...
by Lap
Thu Feb 14, 2019 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)
Replies: 5
Views: 291

Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

It occurred to me that folks keep saying that Miki isn't dark skinned, she's just tanned. And tanned implies tan lines. So...
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by Lap
Tue Feb 05, 2019 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)
Replies: 34
Views: 2803

Avenues of Communication, Chapter 10

Thanks to Feroux for beta reading & feedback! Chapter 10 ________________________ Monday morning Shizune went to the doctor’s for a checkup on her arm and hand. When she came back, she was sporting slimmer, removable splints on her fingers, which allowed her to take them off for cleaning and physica...
by Lap
Sat Jan 26, 2019 9:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11404

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

A lovely coda to a sweet story. I really like the notion of Kenji finally getting his shit together & growing up. Nice little lagniappe.

Thanks for the fun ride! An unlikely pairing, but you made it work.