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by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jun 23, 2019 7:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 6/21/19)
Replies: 19
Views: 2787

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 6/21/19)

I think you have my feedback on this from the discord. Basically you have made a solid foundation, now I'm hopeful to see where you go with it.
by Hanako Fancopter
Fri Jun 14, 2019 4:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story)
Replies: 7
Views: 326

Re: Riposte (Rika Story)

Chapter 5 It takes me a moment to realize that Rika has finally stopped moving. I hear one last groan of contentment before she collapses, laying atop me with her face alongside mine and her breath hot on my ear. I wait a moment to see if she’s going to start again… nope. Guess she’s finally had he...
by Hanako Fancopter
Fri Jun 14, 2019 4:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story)
Replies: 7
Views: 326

Re: Riposte (Rika Story)

Chapter 4 Rika obliges my kiss for a moment but she clearly isn’t into it. She pulls her face away before it can go anywhere. “Ah, sorry if I…” I start. “Don’t fucking apologize,” she snaps. Right. Apologizing probably makes me weak or something. I start to wrap an arm around her back then yank it ...
by Hanako Fancopter
Fri Jun 14, 2019 4:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story)
Replies: 7
Views: 326

Re: Riposte (Rika Story)

Chapter 3 Time passes. I don’t really process what happened in Rika’s room. I’m trying not to process it. When it forces its way into my awareness every so often, I try to convince myself that it’s for the best, that now I’m just rid of her. That doesn’t really work. Most of the time I keep my mind...
by Hanako Fancopter
Fri Jun 14, 2019 3:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story)
Replies: 7
Views: 326

Re: Riposte (Rika Story)

Chapter 2 Rika kept to her promise—same time, same place. Same thing . After the first “date” we just sort of parted ways without saying much else. I was at a loss for words and she seemed to prefer it that way. I thought we might talk more on the second outing, maybe get to know each other a littl...
by Hanako Fancopter
Fri Jun 14, 2019 3:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story)
Replies: 7
Views: 326

Riposte (Rika Story)

Like most of my stories this one was inspired by the KS Discord. A while back we were on there reminiscing about Rikabro's infamous Rika route and his rather unique take on the character, leading to a bit of a mini-contest in which several of us tried our hand at writing our own versions of an "edgy...
by Hanako Fancopter
Thu Jun 13, 2019 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6633

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)

Multiple showerheads hmmm ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Very enjoyable! Obviously I'm biased but I think it was well written also. I need to write a threesome myself at some point.... The only thing I would say is that Hisao and Suzu seem very straightforward and articulate about their sexual desires and attractions...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sat Jun 08, 2019 12:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190520 Overdrive)
Replies: 1772
Views: 227013

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190520 Overdrive)

That was a fun little romp, though a bit jarring when Hisao is standing there with Misha's blood on his hands and she just laughs it off and skips away. The Misha that we got in the final version of the game was much more sensitive about losing her virginity. This one definitely works as an "evil Mi...
by Hanako Fancopter
Tue Jun 04, 2019 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ritual Beneath The Stars [One Shot]
Replies: 4
Views: 263

Re: The Ritual Beneath The Stars [One Shot]

Yes you did do a chuunibyo Aoi story! I feel bad that I forgot about this one. It's easily my favorite take on the character, which isn't saying much considerably she barely qualifies as a character, but that's also why I like it so much. You made a character that is truly your own original creation...
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jun 03, 2019 4:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/2)
Replies: 1005
Views: 246182

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/2)

Now this is ep... I mean uhh...

Not epic, this is very not epic

Poor Sockey...
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jun 03, 2019 4:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvation
Replies: 12
Views: 582

Re: Salvation

Look forward to it. The ten minutes thing is a pretty minor point, I think it's literally just one sentence mentioning that.
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jun 03, 2019 4:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 2
Replies: 9
Views: 380

Re: Shiina 2

I don't understand why this particular incident doesn't get more fics, but this one is a pretty competent take on it. Now I'm just left wondering what "Shiina 1" was...
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jun 03, 2019 3:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvation
Replies: 12
Views: 582

Re: Salvation

You have a solid start here I think. Your premise also hasn't been done before, not that I know of at least, which is nice--most of these continuation type fics will go off of the good ending rather than the bad one. I think you went a bit heavy on Hisao's internal thoughts for my taste, but there i...
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jun 03, 2019 12:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 6/3/19)
Replies: 33
Views: 4157

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 5/16/19)

Two characters I knew I wanted stories for but never seemed to get around to were Akira and Yuuko. The problem was I just wasn't sure who to pair these ladies with. Then the obvious solution presented itself. --- An Evening Rendezvous (Naomi x Natsume x ...Hisao?) [Slight lewd warning] Mother Knows ...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jun 02, 2019 12:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 645

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

Call it "commonly agreed on" then if you don't like "objectively". Objectively doesn't mean that every last person on the planet has to agree with you or you couldn't claim that vaccines do objectively work either... (Yes, there is more "wiggle room" in how people experience stories than in how vac...