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by Hanako Fancopter
Thu Aug 29, 2019 5:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3791

Re: Time is Dancing and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

Man that hurt to read. In the sense of how effective it was in making you feel things fall apart for the characters, not in the sense of it being badly written, of course. I like Suzu's portrayal as anti-fragile, as someone that is still able to force herself to do what she needs to even after it ne...
by Hanako Fancopter
Tue Aug 27, 2019 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Home (Complete)
Replies: 19
Views: 2560

Re: Home (Complete)

I guess this is a good opportunity for me to mention that I adore this story, probably to no one's surprise. What I liked most about it was how effective and consistent it was in teasing the love triangle without actually going through on it (yet), with one amusing situation piled on top of another....
by Hanako Fancopter
Sat Aug 17, 2019 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 8/12/19)
Replies: 46
Views: 5807

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 7/8/19)

There's no description of the sexual acts, you're just told that they're occurring. I guess it's a little lewd :D

Thanks for all the comments by the way! People really seemed to like this one.
by Hanako Fancopter
Thu Aug 15, 2019 6:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3791

Re: Requiem for a Heart Song and Other Stories [08/14/2019]

That was a very nice story. As Crafty said, sugar levels were high all around. Nothing wrong with an earnest and sweet story sometimes.

you can leave the other type of stories to me
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Aug 12, 2019 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 8/12/19)
Replies: 46
Views: 5807

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 7/8/19)

Could this be Evil Lilly's first mistake? Seeing her hoist by her own petard would be glorious... Thank-you, I enjoyed this immensely! So did Lilly ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) If her story continues, going on to regret this move would certainly be a potential plot thread.... hmm..... Alright, it seems like it's th...
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Aug 12, 2019 10:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)
Replies: 62
Views: 4897

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Aug 11th, 2019: The Longest Road)

Damn we never got to find out which girl it was with Hisao huh? I'm guessing Emi though maybe Rin also fits. The story feels like setup which then ends before its payoff, but that's just my typical preferences playing this out into a Yuuko x Hisao route/story.
by Hanako Fancopter
Tue Aug 06, 2019 8:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1913

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)

Such detailed thoughts for a second time--I thank you once again! First off since you gave me permission! I'm going to share the music piece you composed based on this story, because someone literally making music over my fanfic is way too cool for me to not post: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YdG...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Aug 04, 2019 8:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1913

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Chapter 11 I don’t know what gods or goddesses are watching over me but I’ll be sure to thank them tonight. Somehow, no one is in the hall to see me flee into the bathroom in my shirt and boxers, Rika having run in there with my pants held hostage. Then as soon as I get inside I realize why I had s...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Aug 04, 2019 8:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1913

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Chapter 10 Eventually Rika’s breathing slows back to normal and the tears on my shoulder start to dry. I know she’s finished when she gives me another ineffectual whack to my side. I squeeze her in response, keeping her wrapped snugly in my arms. “It wasn’t supposed to be like this…” Rika mutters i...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Aug 04, 2019 8:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1913

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Then nothing Hisao does after that actually counts as his behavior, according to this logic, No, it doesn't but since you seem to be either unable or unwilling to understand the point I was trying to make I see no reason to continue this discussion. You asked for feedback, but if you're not willing...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sat Aug 03, 2019 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/30)
Replies: 1020
Views: 265475

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/30)

Man Sockey's dad is a jerk. Maeda has been built up as the villain of this story but he's pretty sympathetic at this point. I mean Saki hit him, not the other way around. Who's really the jerk there? Whereas her dad hasn't gotten as much focus. Maybe he'll be a bigger player going forward.
by Hanako Fancopter
Wed Jul 31, 2019 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Memory of: Lilly
Replies: 5
Views: 403

Re: In Memory of: Lilly

"Past." Not "passed" you :p

Very sweet story. It's nice to see Niji written effectively as a story rather than the name just popping up as a meme or something.
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jul 29, 2019 7:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202365

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

"Anal." On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen: ... *Deep breath* Boy. I've been married for a decade, with four "proof of sex" tokens. Meanwhile, it wasn't but a few months ago that your mind was blown by the concept of a detachable shower head. Don't try t...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 8-11-19
Replies: 16
Views: 684

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 7-28-19

Swimming seems to be quite popular at Yamaku. I really should've written a pool story by now.... “It sucks dead donkey dorks,” she muttered savagely. “Emi!” I felt my face go bright red at her language. “What? It does. I hate this fucking chair.” I like how Hisao reprimands her for using kiddy words...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202365

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

AlexFDSR wrote:
Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:23 pm
Hanako Fancopter wrote:
Sun Jul 28, 2019 1:24 pm
Poor Misha is as lost as Hicchan!

I wonder what steps they need to take to rekindle their flame ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
"Anal."
On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen: