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Evil Lilly is best Lilly. One of these days I might give her a proper route.

So the Discord server re-christened itself the "Lilly fan club" for a day to celebrate April Fool's. I wrote this short piece to commemorate the blind queen. --- An Evening Rendezvous (Naomi x Natsume x ...Hisao?) [Slight lewd warning] Mother Knows Best (Hisao x Meiko) [Lewd warning] A Very Unusual ...

Alright I've read everything that's been posted so far. Boii does Hisao have the VN protagonist curse! Just as many girls falling over him as in the game lol. If it turns into a pseudo-harem story where he's trying to manage all the female attention without any of the dating options trying to kill t...

Okay I finally read the whole thing, every word! It was quite the epic journey. You do a good job of making compelling drama out of otherwise ordinary activities and concerns--such as the simple angst of high school seniors wondering what to do with their lives next, compounded by the difficulties o...

It's over too fast! I wanted more time with this pairing. I may or may not be biased because it's a story about Hanako and another girl!

d'awww, short and cute. Wonder who the mystery girl is? Maybe Emi (short and cute!)

There is!

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It's not shit and you shouldn't give up! To me, it's always fun to just see what people do, regardless of labeling it "good" or "bad."

Well that was fucking depressing. I don't know how much I want to say out of fear of spoiling the story. The reveals are the main thing it has going for it. They're delivered effectively, I just don't like where they go... Scrolling through the rest of the thread real quick, I got scared for a momen...

I really enjoyed that, thanks so much! The Suzu/Hanako library scene with it's callback to DDLC was adorable Glad you liked. I had fun with that scene as well. Hanako + Suzu = comfy pairing Another month another story! After being stumped (ha get it) for a while I came up with something for Miki an...

The saddest part of this story; Kenji probably can't see anything on those monitors with his garbage eyesight! I was happy to look over the story for you, it's a fun one.

Makes me wonder how often Emi's legs get stolen lol

Also an important question..... what will happen when Kenji finally completes his mission?!

I think dialogue comes more naturally as you get more comfortable with writing in general. Try to imagine how people talk to each other--usually there's a lot of give and take, suggestion and response, as opposed to two people simply narrating at each other. I don't know if that makes much sense but...

Now wait a minute. Misha got what she always wanted! Don't make it sound like the story has a bad ending after all! Don't hurt the drill princess! :O

I wish I had more to say but the idea of the story written in iambic pentameter just doesn't interest me. I recognize that it took skill and effort to do it, but it simply isn't my thing, so to speak. Still a good meme though.