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ayyy it's this story. You know I'm a fan and that I think it's long past time it was uploaded. I'll look to give a re-read sometime and leave some more detailed feedback. In the meantime, I hope others find it and enjoy. I don't think it's really even an "out-there" story concept.

Lilly is a centerpiece in everyone's stories it seems. Taro was an interesting choice for a focus character as well. I have to say I think the idea of people mourning at Hisao's funeral is a bit cliched, but this one was still interesting due to the different perspectives and all of the lore-buildin...

Oof. Kenji and Akira are quite the sensible pairing, and it's a bit surprising that no one has put them together before now, but this story also went in a much more serious and dramatic direction with them than I would have expected. It's well-written, but it feels like it's cut short--a conflict be...

This was an interesting format with the constant suggestion of things that have happened elsewhere, offscreen. It makes you wonder what Saki was like before she passed away. It's also interesting to see that she was quite the alpha personality, if the story is anything to go by, which is different f...

D'aww it's cute to see Good Lilly after having her evil twin stuck in my head for so long. Though it's interesting to see yours still has a knack for social engineering, even if she's using it for benign purposes.

Thanks for the comments. All I can say about Lilly's portrayal here is that I aim to please. Speaking of Lilly, looks like it's contest time again! Not much to say about this one except that I finally did a "serious" story aka one that at least doesn't have any silliness or smut. Maybe the next one ...

Obviously I have been looking forward to this chapter and you know why ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) But that aside, while it is quite sad in many ways, it also feels hopeful in that Hisao and Saki are more comfortable with each other and able to find solace together. Even if they are both suffering, they are at a po...

Yeah this is a good supplement to the game's story. In particular I think you nailed Lilly's character.

Someone other than Hisao with heart problems for once. The gift that they got for him was quite appropriate, too!

"big ugly" made me laugh out loud

I love the idea of Miki giving Hanako some rough love. Really, any pairing with Hanako I tend to be pretty biased in favor of, but Miki in particular makes for a pleasant contrast.

This is another entry for the Discord writing contest. This time the prompt is Meiko x Lilly + School Spirit Rally. It might be a little too similar to my previous one, but it was either this or another Kenji story, so meh. At least there's no sex this time--at least not during the story! --- An Eve...

absolute masterpiece

This is a fitting love letter to everyone's favorite polyamorous gaylord!

The thing that stood out to me most for this story was actually not the dream sequence or surprise supernatural aspect, but rather the fact that it includes a "fixed" version of Hanako's good ending. As in, a scene where Hisao and Hanako fall for each other in a semi sensible fashion instead of toss...

Dawww. I think the dialogue at the end was a bit awkward, it felt a little like they were talking past each other, but I can also see how that might be appropriate to the situation. Still got me some feels, having two girls crying over Hisao together is an effective one two punch.