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by Raimen
Tue Feb 18, 2020 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [02/18/2020]
Replies: 82
Views: 6091

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [02/18/2020]

On the whole, I enjoyed I am Disappeared . It was interesting, and just long enough for me to read during my lunch break. So thank you for sharing it with us. I feel that I'm not very good at offering constructive criticism. But one needs practice to improve, so I will try. Here goes ... Who's the f...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 17, 2020 10:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 11: Two New Beginnings (Mon, July 23) The door to the nurse’s office opened, and Hisao stepped outside. Behind him, Emi could see the nurse holding the door open. The nurse called out, “He’s alive! He’s alive!” Hisao turned back to look at the nurse as Emi replied, “I should hope so!” “You ...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 17, 2020 10:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Interlude 8: A Pound of Prevention (Sun, July 22) “And … that should be everything, “ the nurse said to his patient after his examination. “I don’t see any signs of scraping or infection. We’ll just need to get your legs back on and you’ll be good to go.” “You know, “ replied Emi, swinging her legs...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 10, 2020 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Bonus Content - Hisao and Hanako's Chess Game I don't know if anyone would be interested in this bonus content, but I thought to post it just in case. This is the PGN file for the game that Hisao and Hanako played in Chapter 10. [White “Hisao Nakai"] [Black “Hanako Ikezawa"] [Result "0-1"] [SetUp "...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 10, 2020 1:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 10: Queen's Gambit Declined (Sat, July 21) After what felt like a long Saturday, Hanako arrived back in her room. She thought about her day so far. Her morning classes weren't terrible; they were just long. She had lunch with Lilly, and it was superficially pleasant. Hisao didn't join them,...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 10, 2020 1:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 9: Jumping Into Action (Sat, July 21) A couple of hours later, Emi and Rin were approaching the gates of Yamaku. Emi had changed into a green shirt and black jeans. Rin was still wearing her school uniform. Hisao was at the gates waiting for them, wearing an argyle sweater-vest over a white...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 03, 2020 1:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 8: Return to the Rooftop (Sat, July 21) The bell rang indicating the end of Saturday classes. Shizune was finishing writing something in her notebook as most of the rest of the class left for the rest of the day. After a minute it was only Shizune and Misha left. Misha knew that she had to ...
by Raimen
Mon Feb 03, 2020 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 7: Zugzwang (Fri, July 20) Hisao cleared the table as Hanako watched Lilly leave. Hanako sighed as she thought. This situation was both so normal and so abnormal. Just as she had gotten used to spending the last half of lunch with Hisao when Lilly had other duties, he’s hospitalized. Then j...
by Raimen
Mon Jan 27, 2020 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 6: Tea with Her Majesty’s Bishop (Fri, July 20) He was back! He was okay! Even though she was standing perfectly still, Hanako’s heart was pounding like she had just ran a 200 m sprint. She could hear her inner voice, screaming at her to leave. But there was some part of her that was trying...
by Raimen
Mon Jan 27, 2020 2:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 5: Connecting Rooks (Fri, July 20) Misha sighed as she looked around the room, waiting for Friday’s classes to begin. She and Shizune had been working for most of the long weekend and after classes this week. In addition to regular Student Council business, they were preparing for the upcom...
by Raimen
Wed Jan 22, 2020 1:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Thanks everyone for your feedback so far. It'd been encouraging! My one criticism is that the interaction between Emi and Meiko feels like it should have been longer, especially because Meiko hints that she wants to press Emi more. PsychicSpy is very perceptive. Almost ... too perceptive. Are you so...
by Raimen
Mon Jan 20, 2020 1:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Interlude 1: Hanako’s Present (Sat, July 1) Akira guided her sister Lilly along the town’s busy shopping arcade. Their younger cousin Hideaki followed a step or two behind. “Do you have any idea what you want to get Hanako?”, Akira asked. “I didn’t have a specific gift in mind. Hopefully we’ll be a...
by Raimen
Mon Jan 20, 2020 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 4: A Bad Day’s End (Sat, June 30) After she boarded and paid her fare, Emi dejectedly took her seat. She had no idea that things were that bad. When Miki told her that Hisao wasn’t in class this morning, Emi thought he was just taking the day off from yesterday’s embarrassment. After Miki t...
by Raimen
Mon Jan 20, 2020 1:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 3: The Hospital Visit (Sat, June 30) [What do you think Shicchan? Should we talk to the administration about Hicchan?] Shizune thought for a moment before replying, signing slower than normal. [I’m not sure. If the vice-principal came to interview Suzu, she probably came to interview Setou ...
by Raimen
Mon Jan 13, 2020 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation
Replies: 30
Views: 1521

Re: A Prank Gone Wrong - a Shower Scenes continuation

Chapter 2: A Sudden Realization (Sat, June 30) For Lilly Satou, Saturday morning was a morning like most others. She took her time getting ready for class, and enjoyed a late breakfast in the cafeteria. Despite her “usual for her” late start to the day, she still arrived in class with enough time t...