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by Raimen
Thu Jan 10, 2019 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 204
Views: 60406

Re: Shower Scenes

Glad people are still enjoying it. Not just that, but some people are writing their own "Shower Scenes" fanfic. OK. Maybe it's just me. I'm 5000 words into a divergent sequel to the "Wait until I see Misha in class..." ending, wondering "what if things didn't go quite as the girls had planned". It'...
by Raimen
Sat Nov 03, 2018 10:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)
Replies: 85
Views: 16000

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/31/18)

When I first read it, I thought it was a literal hive. Like some kind of crazy horror show or a really bad nightmare. So basically, Kenji. I did notice a typo.. "soldiers dating between chambers" should be "soldiers darting between chambers". Although I guess "dating"also presents possibilities that...
by Raimen
Mon Oct 29, 2018 8:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 20
Views: 1103

Re: Arrival [updated 10-27-18]

You really have to add VAT to the prices on all the goods by yourself? That's true in Canada as well. (Or at least, the places within Canada that I've been.) If you're used to it, it isn't that big a deal. During the 00's, our federal sales tax changed twice in like six years or something. So havin...
by Raimen
Tue Oct 16, 2018 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 20
Views: 1103

Re: Arrival

IIRC, Lilly started as a student at Yamaku at the same time as Hanako. However, Lilly lived off-campus until 2nd year, when she moved into the dorm and was assigned the room next to Hanako's. So if you want to write up to the start of Lilly and Hanako's friendship, you'll be writing for a while. I e...
by Raimen
Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 49
Views: 2624

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

I thought that the ~~~~ Hanako Ikezawa ~~~~ text indicated a scene change, with the potential for a POV change also. (Although IIRC, one of them seened unnecessary for that purpose.) Hopefully there'll be a POV change soon though. I agree that it is kind of annoying. IIRC, this chapter also is the f...
by Raimen
Fri Jun 22, 2018 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/8)
Replies: 968
Views: 220792

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/22)

I enjoyed this chapter also! Like Hisao, I wasn't expecting his old friends to show up. Or karaoke. I do have a minor nit-pick though... I kind of imagined that the mythical bond of the note-in-locker confession on a snowy day would do a better job of blocking rebounds. Contradicts the KS Prologue. ...
by Raimen
Fri Jun 15, 2018 11:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
Replies: 19
Views: 3107

Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers

I'm glad this story got bumped. I know it's barely started, but I enjoyed the premise. To me, it's setting up to be quite different than Numbered Days. So far, it seems only Hisao and the Nurse are aware of the time loop, and how much Hisao remembers from loop to loop seems questionable. Also, I won...
by Raimen
Thu May 17, 2018 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 30464

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)

I registered to say that (1) I've really enjoyed this story so far, and (2) to point out the same minor issue many times. It seems that the name of the Student Council President has changed a few times. In 1-4, when he's introduced, he's Shintarou. Mister Front Row Center, as it turns out, is Shinta...