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by JoesAlot
Sun Dec 22, 2019 2:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Seeing New Faces (Post Hanako Good End, Crossover with Parahumans)
Replies: 5
Views: 636

Re: Seeing New Faces (Post Hanako Good End, Crossover with Parahumans)

In all my time lurking in this forum, I never expected to see a Worm crossover of all things. Huh. A few minor gripes I had that took me out of it somewhat; 'Lily' is actually spelled 'Lilly'. It's not that big of a deal, but Fletchette's civilian name is Lily and it might cause a bit of confusion. ...
by JoesAlot
Thu Dec 12, 2019 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DackFayded Story Archive, AKA "I Swear I Write More Than Just Smut" - Updated 12/31/2019
Replies: 18
Views: 2610

Re: DackFayded Story Archive, AKA "I Swear I Write More Than Just Smut" - Updated 12/11/2019

I drag my fingers along that spot with each motion, and it almost sounds as though Suzu is charging up some sort of super move with how the muffled squeal she’s giving slowly raises in pitch until she cries out and bites down hard on my finger. I'd just like you to know that hearing the words "supe...
by JoesAlot
Sun Feb 10, 2019 2:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)
Replies: 31
Views: 8939

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 2/2/19)

Turns out Haruhiko's ulterior motive is just to recreate his favorite rom-com in real life.
by JoesAlot
Wed Dec 19, 2018 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 67
Views: 11942

Re: Avenues of Communication (Chapter 1 of 9)

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Wed Dec 19, 2018 10:41 am
Interesting premise but too early to tell where exactly it's going...
Probably damage to Shizune's arms and hands, with resultant complications.
by JoesAlot
Thu Jul 05, 2018 3:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 50
Views: 6833

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

Hi yes it’s me, complete stranger. Good fic. Yeah, that’s all. I’m not too good at this “criticism” stuff. Though... I do notice the 1st person perspective is a little awkward to me. First thing would be the narration. I like reading 1st person when it makes me feel like the person, and not like ano...